my symbol is rose,kai and cross rose because i love my mother kai because i have great strength spirit is strong and my will power is strong and cross because i believe in God.
I really liked your poem because it was crative here’s my poem .
Flower/the symbol that i thought was a flower because my name means flower also i grow like a flower and i work like a flower. from yasmi.
i liked this poem it was really intresting.
i think the symbol that would represent me would be a xbox 360 remote with headphones attached to it because i play on my xbox ALOT with my 100 friends and because i like to play games and i chat ALOT
I liked the poem so much and having to create are symbols my symbol is
A Pencil because I enjoy art and it’s one of my favorite subjects.
And an ice-scate because I also enjoy ice-scating.
I loked this poem as it is fun to create a symol of myself. My symbols are
Lips as all I do is chater, chater, chater.
A microphone as my favorite subject is singing.
Ice-scates as I go ice-scating and I enjoy it a lot.
Cooking as when I’m at home I cook all the time.
By Holly Fay
Grafton School
The lips are a good symbol to represent your love of talking… Remember a symbol is something that stands for more than itself rather than something you like….
Think of the dragon in the poem….it seemed to represent more than the dragon.
I think that the lips are a great symbol it also symbolizes me. I love chatting and do a lot of it, but i should stop doing it as we have SATS this year.
I would choose a microphone or water. I would choose a microphone as I’m very out spoken and have a loud voice and practically sing my way through life. And water because I love swimming, find rain fun and will do almost anything inn water
I really liked this poem because you
have to draw a symbol that describes
you. This is my symbol and why.
My symbol is a small flower because its colorful
and i also wear bright colors and brighten up the
place.
i would also choose a path way because
the path leads you to somewhere and i also lead
people to the right path and not the wrong
by Maisha Begum
Grafton Primary School
The path symbol is an interesting one and a symbol many poets use too. A poet called Robert Frost wrote a famous poem called “The road not taken”…it uses the symbol of road. http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-road-not-taken/
I really enjoyed the explanation about your symbol and i really understand on why you chose to be a small flower and how you also chose a path as your symbol because you are so well behaved and how you mostly wear bright coloured clothes.
I enjoyed reading pattens poem and making a symbol of my own.
The symbol that represents me are a light bulb and joystick
Because I’m full of bright ideas and love playing games.
I liked the poem so much and having to create are symbols my symbol is leaf because leaves can give u a lot of things that u need like oxygen, paper and card. And I think I am helpful and giving
A SMALL ALIEN!!!
I’ve discovered a peculiar alien under my bed
it caught me very much by surprise
alluring my eyes, making me freeze
with a cute,cuddly and chubby face.
I jumped of my bed,it came out further
I picked it up, then cuddled it
It stared at me cutely,like it wanted to cry
Were did it come from, was it always under my bed?
My bed must be amazing it must go to another dimension
If you beleive this i will come
But actually i will wait to see if you come my way.
I like the poem so much. I also liked having to create symbols that symbolize yourself .A paint brush will symbolize me because I absolutely love painting,I love painting because it refreshes my mind and it makes me happy ,it also calms me down .I also think that a person laughing will symbolize me because I think Iam a little bit crazy, mad and funny.
I’m so pleased you enjoyed the poem. Did you find it mysterious?
Thank you for sharing your symbols with us… remember a symbol represents you rather than shows what you like….so the dragon in the poem could be seen as representing faith.
The symbol that i would choose to represent myself is a Bookshelf because a book is full of fun and exiting things just like me.
Blertina
Grafton Primary School
i was very intersted in the peom.
And how do poets do thing like that
my symbol would be a stech of a lady. Because i am very still and quiet
and i don’t really do anything exciting as a lively painting
plus i love drawing a porait of my self
I found a baby Phoenix wrapped in a shallow purple blanket.It had hope,light,love and family reflecting in its eyes. As I unwrapped it from its blanket, I felt its fur.
I found two roses growing together in the wood,
I brought it in and put it in the same vase,
One was dead,
The other was dying as if it needed the other one,
Every day i watered it.
Days later it was dead.
MY symbol is a eye because seeing is believing and your eyes show you the wonders of the world.
I found a baby Phoenix wrapped in a shallow purple blanket.It had hope,light,love and family reflecting in its eyes. As I unwrapped it from its blanket, I felt its fur. It was as soft as a flower bed smothered in feathers. I fed it with destiny and aspiration. And slowly it flew away without a single sound. Something was pulling me closer to this creature. But what it was, it was a mystery waiting to be revealed.
In the forest i saw,a flower blossom with rain dropping all around it.
Its petals was as soft as doves wings.
I poured kind words onto it.
In the night the rose closed up and opened a shiny fire in the distance and it slowly faded away.
My symbol is Yin and Yang because its just like me and the balance is that purity should rise upon evilness ;also it describes me as calm and angry , as they are negative to each other. Thank you.
The symbol that represent myself as is weight because weight will describe me as muscular,powerful and I work out and I’m exceptionally active.
A strange black weight
I’ve discovered a strange black weight in a desert.
Think it must have come from a wild zoo
because it is heavy and shiny but dark on the sides
however it still makes you develop more muscles.
I’ve eaten healthy food, I even drank raw eggs,
nothing has changed my muscle,brain and speed,
but it has changed my weight like everyone says,I need
to grow.
I have finally developed muscles and abs,
unlikely like babies but teens can,
I’ve tried this and
it has transformed me.
In the dark,something caught my eye
Was it a person or a creature?
Nobody knows.
I strolled threw the deep dark forest,
to see what is was with my eyes,
but it vanished like a gggghost.
Scared to death I looked around
there was nothing their
I heard a voice
it said ‘we are coming to get you’
i ran to safety but it was no use
because it just followed me
so I committed suicide .
….We were just going to invite you to our party .
A voice whispered.
THE END
In my pocket,
I stumbled across something,
Im not really sure where it came from,
However its beauty and unusualness made me think that it was nothing usual !
I tried to give it away,
But it stuck with me,
And at one point i decided that i HAD to keep it !!!
It became closer to me,
I became closer to it,
Oh, what a lovely dog she was !!!
MY spiritual energy
my kai is strong the strongest of all it surpasses yours and yours.
You may think i’m weak but you thought.
But when i beat,you were false
my kai is strong the strongest of all…
mistrys are bound made from a deep energy with in me.
i felt in harmony its my kai showing don’t be laid and if you train hard enough you get the strength you seek
What symbol represents me ……….. By RAZZY : Aged 11
In my opinion I suppose that the sun represents me for i am bubbly and bouncy for sure however i am also a muslim so i think the islamic symbol ( the moon and star ) represents me aswell !!!!
A SMALL FOOTBALL
I found a small football in the in the shed,
is flat and dirty wonce i cleand it
and pumped it up it catched my eyes.
I discovered its not cute
finshed yet i also dicovered it
had a name on it a strange
name infuct it was written in a
differnt languge or a mess of handwritten.
In the middle of the forest I was camping in the deepness,
while I was cooking some steaks.
when I heard rustle in the trees I took
a look owt side WHEN A CRITURE JUMPED OUT! it starteld me when I
relised it was a baby Grifine I was emased it steered at me and
it whent a corner and gased at the stars . I trid to feed it grasse , nuts, flowers,vines, then I had an Idear why dont I give it some steaks. it ravenesly eat the meat and just before I whent to bed it snogled next to me and fell asleep. THE END
Hi I’m going to write a poem just to let you know babyish ….
Roses
I’ve found a rather huge rose,
floating next to the window.
I thought of a very bright flimngo.
Not concerned who it was from,
All I did was suck my thumb.
I gave it tender love and care,
but all it gave me was longing
for home.
It made lodes of roses around it,
but it is one like no other,
It is out of place here
and it was puite silent.
I have discovered a small,tiny fox while making
My cereal and he looked up at me and said
Something however I did not understand
I couldn’t believe it.
He talked to me like I was his friend so
I got really scared and shouted as loud
As I could.
A large House
I went a large house in the city
Think it must have been at least 50 years old
dealapdated and rusty the smell of ancient
reflected the room.
I tried get used to it i tried to watch tv that had no signal
A bed which was cold turned to me
as if it was saying ” you will never fit in.”
Alllured and captivated it had engraved in my mind
not as if i liked it i just had to except it
I was not going home
it was quiet silent
If you had ever felt like this i would come to you
and share my capture.
However, instead i will wait and see
if you will pass my way
I discovered a small Dragosaurelianiderghostsaiyaninn my pocket
It caught me by a huge surprise
Captivating my eyes, illuminating my mind
with balls of fire and spotty stripy rainbows
I stepped forward and growled at it,it didn’t disappear
Hid under my bed , but it didn’t go
It winked at me happily, catching my eye
Quite out of place in this day and age
Shooted electric rather startlingly
Not unlike a ghost or a spectre
It is out of place here ( it lives in Skylands )
It is quite silent
If you believed in it I would come
Hurrying to your house to let you share my wonder,
But I want instead to see
If you yourself will pass this way.
I have discovered a peculiar, purple alien hiding under my relaxing bed
I thought he was a toy because he was strangely soft
He looked at me and I fell down shocked
I couldn’t believe it
It look at me,with its glittering green eyes as if it was going to attack me.
He did a scary face,which wasn’t scary, on me.
I started to laugh his face was rather funny.
What do you believe?
Aliens
dragons
tooth fairy
what ever you believe in
don’t listen to what other say.
A small cat
i`ve found a small cat in my window it caught me
by surprise i moved to the side
to make it go away it started to roll
his eyes at me… I though it was going to attack me ,
but I went down stairs then i heard a sound then i went upstairs the cat was gone already it went the black cat …
And i never ever seen that cat again I just heard a meow down the deep and spooky forest the cat had red eyes
it then looked at me i went to sleep after, i woke up again and went to the toilet then i saw the cat again and it said “i will get you” in a wired voie if you believe this i will come and get you but don’t look at the window
don’t at the black cat thank you so much.
I’ve discovered a baby Phoenix in the chapel, its not supposed to be here because new , glistering fiery eyes were on its face. Its face was a muddle of hope, care and family, which sees me in a new light.
I stare into his eyes, as I offered him food.
Meat, dandelions, hob-nobs and grass,
however it looked at me like it needed food
I can not provide.
Something extraordinary happened
and I become a amazing person.
I was transformed …
My brother recommended I might like this blog. He was totally right. This post truly made my day. You cann’t imagine just how much time I had spent for this information! Thanks!
the symbol I would choose to represent myself as a rose I chose this symbol because I love a lot of things for example my mum.
Hi Jessie,
A rose is a symbol that’s often used in poetry. I like the reason why you chose it but can you consider what a rose might symbolise in poetry?
my symbol is rose,kai and cross rose because i love my mother kai because i have great strength spirit is strong and my will power is strong and cross because i believe in God.
hi jessie
i love your peow and you know something i do love my mum, i think your peom is great.
I like your symbol rose because it is red and a heart is red.
Dose the rose stand for your mum only or stands for your family
I like your symbol jessie the reason is so lovely
I’ve discovered a small kitten
laying near the basket of dolls
it caught my eye
in the very far distance.
I moved to the side
hopping it would disappeared
I through something at it
but it didn’t go.
It is scary for any one
It will make you jump immediatly
It dosen’tbelonge her
And it is quite silent.
well done leban i liked your poem! 🙂 🙂 🙂 😀
I really liked your poem because it was crative here’s my poem .
Flower/the symbol that i thought was a flower because my name means flower also i grow like a flower and i work like a flower. from yasmi.
Hi Yasmin,
Thank you for sharing your symbol with us. I like the idea of a flower and growing and working.
Keep up the hard work.
my symbol is ying and yang because i balance out my family and friends equally.
i liked your symbol because is balance
I ve found a tiny but bright light
lercing in the imencly enoumous lake
bigger then most lakes
think it must havecame from the sea
because its white,tiny and moves with the water.
It only appersse at night though.
disserperring as the sun rises
i waved good bye and
wated for it to return.
i liked this poem it was really intresting.
i think the symbol that would represent me would be a xbox 360 remote with headphones attached to it because i play on my xbox ALOT with my 100 friends and because i like to play games and i chat ALOT
grafton primary school
Hi James,
I’m pleased you liked the poem. I find it interesting too without always fully understanding it.
An Xbox could be a good symbol but don’t chose a symbol just because you like it…chose something that is like you…
Keep up the hard work and thank you for sharing your ideas.
a small monster
I’ve discovered a ugly monster on my balcani
It caught me by suprise
purple and ugly,he was the most horific thing ever.
This also symbolizes my older brother who loves playing Fifa 14 .
Ruqayyah Rahman
Grafton Primary School
I liked the poem so much and having to create are symbols my symbol is
A Pencil because I enjoy art and it’s one of my favorite subjects.
And an ice-scate because I also enjoy ice-scating.
By Sophia Sergides
Grafton School
Hi Sophia,
It’s great to see your enthusiasm throughout the course to all the poems.
Remember a symbol is not necessarily something you like but it’s something that could represent you…
Keep up the hard work.
I LIKE ART TO BUT I AM NOT VERY GOOD AT IT CAN YOU GIVE ME SOME TIPS
I loked this poem as it is fun to create a symol of myself. My symbols are
Lips as all I do is chater, chater, chater.
A microphone as my favorite subject is singing.
Ice-scates as I go ice-scating and I enjoy it a lot.
Cooking as when I’m at home I cook all the time.
By Holly Fay
Grafton School
Hi Holly,
The lips are a good symbol to represent your love of talking… Remember a symbol is something that stands for more than itself rather than something you like….
Think of the dragon in the poem….it seemed to represent more than the dragon.
I think that the lips are a great symbol it also symbolizes me. I love chatting and do a lot of it, but i should stop doing it as we have SATS this year.
Ruqayyah Rahman
Grafton Primary School
My symbol would be a cupboard because a cupboard keeps all your things in there and keeps it tidy and i like keeping things tidy. So im quite the same
Hi Baris,
Thank you for sharing your symbol with us… I suppose sometimes people are surprised by what they find in a cupboard..does that apply to you too?
I think that this is a very good symbol but this does not apply to me.
Ruqayyah Rahman
Grafton Primary School
I would choose a microphone or water. I would choose a microphone as I’m very out spoken and have a loud voice and practically sing my way through life. And water because I love swimming, find rain fun and will do almost anything inn water
Hi Kayla,
The microphone symbol works well… I like the idea of it representing being out spoken.
Thank you for sharing your symbol with us.
I really liked this poem because you
have to draw a symbol that describes
you. This is my symbol and why.
My symbol is a small flower because its colorful
and i also wear bright colors and brighten up the
place.
i would also choose a path way because
the path leads you to somewhere and i also lead
people to the right path and not the wrong
by Maisha Begum
Grafton Primary School
Hi Maisha,
The path symbol is an interesting one and a symbol many poets use too. A poet called Robert Frost wrote a famous poem called “The road not taken”…it uses the symbol of road.
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-road-not-taken/
I really enjoyed the explanation about your symbol and i really understand on why you chose to be a small flower and how you also chose a path as your symbol because you are so well behaved and how you mostly wear bright coloured clothes.
Joyce Li
Ambler Primary School
I enjoyed reading pattens poem and making a symbol of my own.
The symbol that represents me are a light bulb and joystick
Because I’m full of bright ideas and love playing games.
Ahura Farhadi
Grafton school
HI Ahura,
The light bulb symbol is one we see often to represent bright ideas even beyond poetry. It’s a great attribute to be able to have new ideas.
I really enjoyed the poem of symbol . My symbol that represents me is books,books represent me is because i really like reading.
Hi Hamda,
Thank you for sharing your symbol with us. Are there any other ways in which you are like a book?
Keep up the hard work.
Hello Hamda. Me and you have the same symbols. Keep up the great work
I liked the poem so much and having to create are symbols my symbol is leaf because leaves can give u a lot of things that u need like oxygen, paper and card. And I think I am helpful and giving
Hi Jaden,
I’m very pleased you enjoyed the poem. What did you like about it?
I like your symbol of a leave and the gifts it gives…
Keep up the hard work.
A SMALL ALIEN!!!
I’ve discovered a peculiar alien under my bed
it caught me very much by surprise
alluring my eyes, making me freeze
with a cute,cuddly and chubby face.
I jumped of my bed,it came out further
I picked it up, then cuddled it
It stared at me cutely,like it wanted to cry
Were did it come from, was it always under my bed?
My bed must be amazing it must go to another dimension
If you beleive this i will come
But actually i will wait to see if you come my way.
I like the poem so much. I also liked having to create symbols that symbolize yourself .A paint brush will symbolize me because I absolutely love painting,I love painting because it refreshes my mind and it makes me happy ,it also calms me down .I also think that a person laughing will symbolize me because I think Iam a little bit crazy, mad and funny.
Ruqayyah Rahman
Grafton Primary Schoo
Hi Ruqayyah,
I’m so pleased you enjoyed the poem. Did you find it mysterious?
Thank you for sharing your symbols with us… remember a symbol represents you rather than shows what you like….so the dragon in the poem could be seen as representing faith.
Keep up the hard work.
Thank you Michael for replying to my statement
Ruqayyah Rahman
Grafton Primary School
The symbol that i would choose to represent myself is a Bookshelf because a book is full of fun and exiting things just like me.
Blertina
Grafton Primary School
HI Blertina,
Thank you for sharing your symbol with us.
Are there any other ways you are like a book shelf? For example do you help to support things/people?
i was very intersted in the peom.
And how do poets do thing like that
my symbol would be a stech of a lady. Because i am very still and quiet
and i don’t really do anything exciting as a lively painting
plus i love drawing a porait of my self
Grafton Primary
I found a baby Phoenix wrapped in a shallow purple blanket.It had hope,light,love and family reflecting in its eyes. As I unwrapped it from its blanket, I felt its fur.
I found a scarlet petal in the woods ,
It had symblized death and blood
I fed it with love and care but
When the spots were clear
death was near.
i thought that mini poem was great mini poem
I found two roses growing together in the wood,
I brought it in and put it in the same vase,
One was dead,
The other was dying as if it needed the other one,
Every day i watered it.
Days later it was dead.
MY symbol is a eye because seeing is believing and your eyes show you the wonders of the world.
I found a baby Phoenix wrapped in a shallow purple blanket.It had hope,light,love and family reflecting in its eyes. As I unwrapped it from its blanket, I felt its fur. It was as soft as a flower bed smothered in feathers. I fed it with destiny and aspiration. And slowly it flew away without a single sound. Something was pulling me closer to this creature. But what it was, it was a mystery waiting to be revealed.
That was amazing! You catched my heart!!
In the forest i saw,a flower blossom with rain dropping all around it.
Its petals was as soft as doves wings.
I poured kind words onto it.
In the night the rose closed up and opened a shiny fire in the distance and it slowly faded away.
I found love in my grave ,
I found care in my grave ,
I found paradise in my grave,
that comes from when caring for other
the white flower is a symbol of death and love
i love yrs , it is really touching
I found a crystal eye in the woods.I had sparkles reflecting in my eyes.I fed it with love and cair but it changed in a strange sort of way.
The symbol that represents me is books becouse I love books so much
angelina you must be very very very smart
The symbol that represents me is the Islam star and moon because I am very religious
The symbol that represents me is th islam star and moon because I am very strong about my religion.
I totally agree Mohamed Jama. Thank you for sharing with us!
My symbol is Yin and Yang because its just like me and the balance is that purity should rise upon evilness ;also it describes me as calm and angry , as they are negative to each other. Thank you.
The symbol that represents me is a dove because I am a very peaceful person and I always behave myself ,and I am also very balanced.
Joyce Li
Ambler Primary School
The symbol that represent myself as is weight because weight will describe me as muscular,powerful and I work out and I’m exceptionally active.
A strange black weight
I’ve discovered a strange black weight in a desert.
Think it must have come from a wild zoo
because it is heavy and shiny but dark on the sides
however it still makes you develop more muscles.
I’ve eaten healthy food, I even drank raw eggs,
nothing has changed my muscle,brain and speed,
but it has changed my weight like everyone says,I need
to grow.
I have finally developed muscles and abs,
unlikely like babies but teens can,
I’ve tried this and
it has transformed me.
very good axel you have a heart for poetry
In the dark,something caught my eye
Was it a person or a creature?
Nobody knows.
I strolled threw the deep dark forest,
to see what is was with my eyes,
but it vanished like a gggghost.
Scared to death I looked around
there was nothing their
I heard a voice
it said ‘we are coming to get you’
i ran to safety but it was no use
because it just followed me
so I committed suicide .
….We were just going to invite you to our party .
A voice whispered.
THE END
well done daniel I loved our poem I reallY feel for you character, what a sad ending.
My symbol is a ying and yang because iam good at football and bad at skateboard!
my symbol is ying and yang because im good at football and im bad at skateboard.
In my pocket !!! By RAZZY : Aged 11
In my pocket,
I stumbled across something,
Im not really sure where it came from,
However its beauty and unusualness made me think that it was nothing usual !
I tried to give it away,
But it stuck with me,
And at one point i decided that i HAD to keep it !!!
It became closer to me,
I became closer to it,
Oh, what a lovely dog she was !!!
( You get the twist )
The symbol that represents me is sports balls and weights because i am very fit and like sports especially football and basketball
Junior Halley
Ambler Primary School
MY spiritual energy
my kai is strong the strongest of all it surpasses yours and yours.
You may think i’m weak but you thought.
But when i beat,you were false
my kai is strong the strongest of all…
mistrys are bound made from a deep energy with in me.
i felt in harmony its my kai showing don’t be laid and if you train hard enough you get the strength you seek
does anyone like my poem
What symbol represents me ……….. By RAZZY : Aged 11
In my opinion I suppose that the sun represents me for i am bubbly and bouncy for sure however i am also a muslim so i think the islamic symbol ( the moon and star ) represents me aswell !!!!
A SMALL FOOTBALL
I found a small football in the in the shed,
is flat and dirty wonce i cleand it
and pumped it up it catched my eyes.
I discovered its not cute
finshed yet i also dicovered it
had a name on it a strange
name infuct it was written in a
differnt languge or a mess of handwritten.
A small moon I discovered a small moon
Which was shinning brightly
And so were the stars seeing through my window.
Thinking if one day
When I am older
I want to reach the moon
And find out what is really there.
Deciding about what job I want do
I will decide of what job I want to do.
Strolling to go to sleep
I had an amazing dream about going
to
outer
space.
In the middle of the forest I was camping in the deepness,
while I was cooking some steaks.
when I heard rustle in the trees I took
a look owt side WHEN A CRITURE JUMPED OUT! it starteld me when I
relised it was a baby Grifine I was emased it steered at me and
it whent a corner and gased at the stars . I trid to feed it grasse , nuts, flowers,vines, then I had an Idear why dont I give it some steaks. it ravenesly eat the meat and just before I whent to bed it snogled next to me and fell asleep. THE END
I love that you used an exlamtion mark in a pomes.
Hi I’m going to write a poem just to let you know babyish ….
Roses
I’ve found a rather huge rose,
floating next to the window.
I thought of a very bright flimngo.
Not concerned who it was from,
All I did was suck my thumb.
I gave it tender love and care,
but all it gave me was longing
for home.
It made lodes of roses around it,
but it is one like no other,
It is out of place here
and it was puite silent.
By Tianna
small fox.
I have discovered a small,tiny fox while making
My cereal and he looked up at me and said
Something however I did not understand
I couldn’t believe it.
He talked to me like I was his friend so
I got really scared and shouted as loud
As I could.
I love foxs do you……
and i like your poem
A large House
I went a large house in the city
Think it must have been at least 50 years old
dealapdated and rusty the smell of ancient
reflected the room.
I tried get used to it i tried to watch tv that had no signal
A bed which was cold turned to me
as if it was saying ” you will never fit in.”
Alllured and captivated it had engraved in my mind
not as if i liked it i just had to except it
I was not going home
it was quiet silent
If you had ever felt like this i would come to you
and share my capture.
However, instead i will wait and see
if you will pass my way
hiy Saphire i really liked your poem
saphire i love your poem
A Small Dragosaurelianiderghostsaiyan
I discovered a small Dragosaurelianiderghostsaiyaninn my pocket
It caught me by a huge surprise
Captivating my eyes, illuminating my mind
with balls of fire and spotty stripy rainbows
I stepped forward and growled at it,it didn’t disappear
Hid under my bed , but it didn’t go
It winked at me happily, catching my eye
Quite out of place in this day and age
Shooted electric rather startlingly
Not unlike a ghost or a spectre
It is out of place here ( it lives in Skylands )
It is quite silent
If you believed in it I would come
Hurrying to your house to let you share my wonder,
But I want instead to see
If you yourself will pass this way.
BY UMAR
From Ambler Primary School
good and it is kind of the same poem as me but you have really listen to the teacher what to write
A peculiar alien.
I have discovered a peculiar, purple alien hiding under my relaxing bed
I thought he was a toy because he was strangely soft
He looked at me and I fell down shocked
I couldn’t believe it
It look at me,with its glittering green eyes as if it was going to attack me.
He did a scary face,which wasn’t scary, on me.
I started to laugh his face was rather funny.
What do you believe?
Aliens
dragons
tooth fairy
what ever you believe in
don’t listen to what other say.
nice poem omar …….
A small cat
i`ve found a small cat in my window it caught me
by surprise i moved to the side
to make it go away it started to roll
his eyes at me… I though it was going to attack me ,
but I went down stairs then i heard a sound then i went upstairs the cat was gone already it went the black cat …
And i never ever seen that cat again I just heard a meow down the deep and spooky forest the cat had red eyes
it then looked at me i went to sleep after, i woke up again and went to the toilet then i saw the cat again and it said “i will get you” in a wired voie if you believe this i will come and get you but don’t look at the window
don’t at the black cat thank you so much.
what a good poem genesis i like the small cat even though i dislike cats alot
I’ve discovered a baby Phoenix in the chapel, its not supposed to be here because new , glistering fiery eyes were on its face. Its face was a muddle of hope, care and family, which sees me in a new light.
I stare into his eyes, as I offered him food.
Meat, dandelions, hob-nobs and grass,
however it looked at me like it needed food
I can not provide.
Something extraordinary happened
and I become a amazing person.
I was transformed …
Thank you
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Adnan i really liked your poem i really felt the way you re-invented brian pattern poems well done.
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