Well done Maryama!
Your feelings put in to there almost made me cry.
We were doing those letters today and only a few people added a bit about the wife dying
Well done!!!
Me and my class have also been working on Rembrandt we got to try on a red dress (like the one Rembrandt is wearing in the painting)and read out are diary entires.I thought it was really fun!
This is Betty’s diary entry for Rembrandt. I really enjoyed the character she created, imagining that she was Rembrandt. He may be ill and unhappy, but he certainly hasn’t lost any self-belief…!
I love Omar’s simile to describe Rembrant’s emotions.
He wrote, “..I feel like a room closing in and I feel like there is nothing inside my heart..” for those who can’t read it.
Hi Omar,
That’s a fabulous simile “like a room closing in”… it really captures Rembrandt’s pain.
I hope you’re proud of your work. You should be.
I liked Maryama’s imaginative interpretation of how his wife died.
Hi Maryama,
This is a powerful diary entry. I like the question you ask at the end …it captures Rembrandt’s frustration.
Keep up the hard work.
Well done Maryama!
Your feelings put in to there almost made me cry.
We were doing those letters today and only a few people added a bit about the wife dying
Well done!!!
well done Maryama
your powerful felling’s made me fall of my chair.
we are doing dear diary’s only some people write the wife dying in the dairy
bye
🙂
wow Maryama I really like your work
I admire all the emotion expressed in Cairo’s diary. I especially like how he asks his imaginary reader questions to express his shock and disbelief.
Hi Cario,
Thank you for sharing your writing with us.
I like your colloquial expressions “In truth” and your writing recognises Rembrandt’s desire to be remembered as a great artist.
Keep up the hard work.
i think my writting is fantastic and i am very proud of my work
Hi Cairo I think your work is amazing it almost made me cry.
Here is pg 2 of Cairo’s diary.
This is impeccable work I am also learning about rembrandt as well
Me and my class have also been working on Rembrandt we got to try on a red dress (like the one Rembrandt is wearing in the painting)and read out are diary entires.I thought it was really fun!
Here is Jemima’s Rembrandt diary (Yerbury, 4B).
Bruno’s diary (Yerbury, 4B)
Tommy’s Rembrandt diary (Yerbury, 4B)
Louisa (4B, Yerbury)
Marly (4B, Yerbury)
Jemima – the right way round!
Catherine’s Rembrandt Diary
Bradley’s Rembrandt Diary
Demi’s Rembrandt Diary
Selin’s Rembrandt Diary
This is Betty’s diary entry for Rembrandt. I really enjoyed the character she created, imagining that she was Rembrandt. He may be ill and unhappy, but he certainly hasn’t lost any self-belief…!
Niaz’s (From Winton) diary entry about Rembrandt’s life. Page 1
Niaz’s diary entry about Rembrandt’s life. Page 2
I love his comment about being submerged in a bounty of golden coins
Tasniya’s biography of Rembrandt