Week 1 Writing Gallery

Please share your writing inspired by the paintings here.

Remember to write your name and school.

Feel free to leave comments on other pupils’ writings but keep comments positive.

96 thoughts on “Week 1 Writing Gallery

    1. Hi Yasemin,

      Thank you for sharing your work with us. I like the categories you chose for your Top Trump cards. Respectability is an interesting one.

      Who are the two people in the cards?

    1. Hi Serdil,

      What a lovely sketch of Mrs Musters. The second one reminds me of the paintings…

      I agree she looks more beautiful in the second card.

      Keep up the hard work.

    1. Hi Tya-Rae,

      What an interesting idea to compare the two Mrs Musters portraits. I like your choice of categories too. Beauty, wealth and youth would have been highly valued at the time.

      Keep up the hard work.

  1. We enjoyed Ridwan’s attention to detail in his drawing and his decorative handwriting.

    1. Fantastic work Ridwan. I hope you’re very proud of yourself.

      The sketch is very similar to Reynolds and I like your categories.

    2. hi Ridwan,

      WeIl done! I like the drawing of hebe and I also like the categories magic, clouds, power and speed!

  2. We admired Omar’s careful drawing of the eagle. As you can see beauty and speed scores much higher points then power and skills!

    1. Congratulations Omar on creating your Top Trump card.

      I like the inclusion of magic in the categories as mythological figures can perform many magical feats.

      I hope you enjoyed the activity.

  3. Here is Hope’s top trump. As you can see, she decided that as Hebe is the godess of youth, then her MORTALITY must score extremely low!

    1. Hi Hope,
      Thank you for working so hard on your Top Trump card and then sharing it with us. That’s a clever idea to give Hebe a low mortality score and shows you’ve planned your work.

    2. I really like the way drew Hebe with the eagle and all of the background detail.

      Can you explain why her mortality is so low?

      1. STAR POST

        This is helpful feedback Sia.

        You clearly explain what you like about the card and draw attention to details.

        I can tell you’ve read it carefully as you ask a question based on the card.

        Thank you for helping others.

        1. Hope my friend I can’t believe how much work you got and how hard you tried I knew that you was going to be so determined and look at your beautiful oh! beautiful work I bet your going to be a legend like Michael Jackson or handsome Michael Walsh the one and only who made this website. You tried your best and made an ultimate success.

          KEEP UP THE WORK AN DON’T HOLD BACK BECAUSE
          BELIEVE IN YOU

      2. It”s because she is a goddess and she can”t die that”s why she has -100 for mortality. Thank you for your question.

    3. hi hope wow I did not know how good you could draw . sorry that I ever doubted your pictures, you were DETERMINED RESILIETN ENTHUSIASTIC ABITIOUS MOTIVATED AND CONFIDENT.

      FROM YOUR CLASS MAIT CAIRO

    1. I really like class 4B Top Trumps cards . I think there all good and amazing pice of art.

      There took good care of there Top trumps cards.

    2. Hi Yerbury,
      These look great. I hope you were able to have a game with them. It’s great to see you all working so hard as a class.

      Keep it up.

    1. We like this because it is very detailed. We were fascinated by the amount of effort you used to create this detailed piece of art work.

    2. Imaginative work Izzy. I like the way you’ve decided to expand the task and focus on different mythological figures. Armageddon certainly seems daunting.

    1. Great idea to invent your own figure Dulcie. The talking skeleton could be from the underworld.

      It’s encouraging to see you willing to experiment with your work.

  4. CANONBURY :
    We hope you enjoy our Top Trumps based on Greek Mythology, just as much we enjoyed researching these Gods, Goddesses and mythical creatures.
    Here are some examples of the work we created this week, by Elifsu, Ava, Poppy, Lali, Arianna, Alfonso and Giorgio.

    1. Hi Canonbury,
      Thank you for sharing your work with us. We really like the way you’ve created your Top Trump cards electronically. We particularly liked the Minotaur and Medusa.

      4B, Yerbury

    2. We, in King Class, really enjoyed this task and making these – we even improved on some of our I.C.T. skills of research and changing size and style of font.

    3. I like this piece of art because they took their time and they thought about the colours they were going to use!

    4. Wow Canonbury! This is my favourite piece of art. The Top Trump pictures are awesome!

    5. Hi Canonbury,

      I imagine you had to use a number of different skills to create these. Research, planning and presentation. I’m sure you’re pleased with your final Top Trump cards. Keep up the hard work!

    1. Hi Winton,

      Congratulations on creating an informative Top Trump Card. It’s clear you’ve researched the goddess first before making this. I’m sure some pupils didn’t know Hebe was the daughter of Zeus so you’ve helped others to learn too.

      Thank you for sharing your knowledge with us.

    1. Wow! Winton School, we at Canonbury, think your work is mind-blowing! Your illustrations are fantastic and add so much to your Top Trump cards – they are really stylish. We also love the way you have added extra information to the Top Trump Cards – we have learnt a lot from them.
      Well done,
      From Year 4 Rowling Class, Canonbury

    2. What a wonderful sketch. It’s so colourful and lively and gains our attention. Again the research you’ve undertaken is very helpful and helps us to learn more about Hebe.

      Keep up the hard work.

    1. Hi Rotherfield,

      Like Yerbury above, it’s great to see you all working together as a class. The Top Trump cards look impressive and I hope you had a game with them.

      Keep up the hard work.

    1. Hi Olivia,

      Thank you for sharing your Top Trump card with us. It’s great we can all learn more about Hades from you. I take it that’s Cerberus the three headed dog in the sketch? That’s a lovely touch.

      Keep up the hard work.

  5. Here is an example from 4G at Rotherfield Primary School. We have turned our Top Trumps into a printed set of cards so we can play in the classroom.

    1. HI Rotherfield 4G,

      I’m so pleased to hear you’re playing with your Top Trump cards….after all that’s what they should be for.

      I like the way you’ve formatted your cards… with clear columns and categories.

      Congratulations on your impressive work.

    1. Hi Yiota,

      Thank you for sharing this with us. It’s a wonderful drawing and I think the expression on Hebe’s face reminds me of Mrs Musters.

      Keep up the hard work.

    1. Hi Evie,

      Congratulations on an impressive Top Trump Card. Your last category made me smile: dress sense but again your sketch captures Hebe and her youth.

      Keep up the hard work.

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