Hi all,
Thank you for your brilliant responses to Umbrella and Migrants.
In week 3 we are studying the film “Black Hole”. Please share your thoughts, writing and responses below.
Hi all,
Thank you for your brilliant responses to Umbrella and Migrants.
In week 3 we are studying the film “Black Hole”. Please share your thoughts, writing and responses below.
The man was too greedy and stole a lot of money so he is a greedy man. He gained a lot but still wanted more and ended up facing a big consequence. We think this has a moral telling us not to be greedy.We really enjoyed this as we really liked the amount of suspense.
I think the man in the film black hole is being greedy because even though he knew that he took all the money he could. He could of just poked his head in instead of putting his whole body in. The consequences of his actions is that he fell into the vault . I think the film was funny.Because i would do the same thing like the vending machine. I like this film its relatable.
Hello! I really enjoyed this short film as it shows greed is not the answer.
As he found a black hole he tried to take advantage of it. He walked into the room and tried to steal all the money that there was. That’s wrong. never take everything for yourself its not and it will never be the right thing to do.
I think the moral of this film is to not to be greedy. The man in the film was greedy and that is why he had a bad ending. No matter how much power you have you can’t do bad things.
I personally didn’t like it because it was short. If there were more scenes where the man was doing bad stuff it would be more entertaining.
What would you add Aleya?
I liked how in the first bit it set the scene and how it showed us the man being impatient with the printer and the printer prints out a black circle. Then he puts his cup down and it sucked it up. I also liked how he used the black whole to get a snickers bar which i personally found funny. At the end I think it showed a message saying don’t be greedy because he got loads of money and he went inside to get more but he got stuck.
The short video was good but scary because the guy went though the black hole and it was fun when he got chocolate from the vending machine for free. I think this film shows that we shouldn’t be greedy
I didn’t like it because its not good to steal and at least it teaches him a lesson not to steal because people worked hard to get all that money and hes deciding to take all of it.
I saw that hes a lazy worker cause his hairs messy and he decided to steal all of the money,but he does stay late working hard when nobody is doing anything trying to earn money.
Thank you Ciaran. You’ve clearly watched the film carefully.
As I thought this short movie was really good, it was also quite scary.
All of a sudden an ordinary man who is printing out something, while he waits for the other sheets to print, he puts it down and also his drink, when he goes to pick it up again,he realises his glass is gone .That’s when he decides to check it and put his hand through it. It’s gone. His hand disappeared into the paper. That’s when he decides to take advantage of it.He puts the paper on a vending machine and takes a Snickers.He sees a room which says ‘Do not enter’ which he then proceeds to still go in. He finds a safe inside and get’s money from it. Although he has a lot of money,he still goes inside and bang! He gets stuck inside and learns his story.If you have gotten a gift, don’t ask for more.
Thank you for the recount Anisa.
I liked the film because it was so funny especially at the end when he got trapped in the safe box and that he stole the money from the safe box. This shows us not to be greedy about money. And I like the fact it ended on a cliffhanger.
I like how when he tries to steal he gets greedy and tries to get more he gets stuck inside the safe. I also like how it ends on a cliff hanger and I don’t know if he will survive because he will waste all the air unless there is little holes for air to come in.
I like this film because because it had a scary element to it. When he found the black hole he could do anything he wanted with it which I really liked.
Yes it has scary elements. What genre of film do you think it is?
In my opinion the moral of this film is to not be greedy or something bad might happen to you.If someone is greedy and they watch this clip they might change.Overall I really liked the film but I found it quite annoying that it ends on a cliffhanger, because I would really like to find out what will happen to the man.
Thank you Kinga. What do you think happens to the man after the film?
Hi Michael,
this is my entry of the man in the safe writing to someone.
Dear reader,
I’ve found something. It’s a black hole. It can go
I like this film and don’t like it as stealing is bad and karma is funny plus
It’s his fault for being greedy and going in head first and how he thought i piece of tape is gonna hold him up
Dear Reader,
I have experienced great troubles today. Someone sneakily wandered into my office
Hello this is my letter on The Black Hole (Intro and Paragraph 1)
Dear Whoever is reading this,
If you are reading this you’ll probably see A LOT of money on the floor…..
You’ll probably hear this on the news that someone is missing that is probably me…
Let me tell u my side of the story…
I was working late and i was the last one in the office and when i was printing my work there was a black hole and the crazy thing is you can put your hand through it!
Me and my mum were running low on money and i was doing my best to help.
So i got my black hole and went to the safe and got a lot of money but i was so stupid to go in the safe and the paper fell…I beg for mercy and forgive.
From Jacob
We are writing letters in the character of the man in The Black Hole.
Dear Darren (my boss),
If you are reading this, I’m probably dead, but I want to tell you what happened and I want to make an important confession.
You’ll probably be hearing about this on the news but I want to tell you my side of the story and I hope you’ll forgive me.
At work last night I was photocopying documents when this large piece of paper with a large, black hole in the middle. This may sound ridiculous but it defied walls! After I realized its power, I went into your room.
I was low on cash so I went to your safe and started stealing your money. I was finding so much so I went fully into your safe, but the black hole fell off. I’m sorry for what I did but please try to get me out.
I don’t care if I go to jail, just get me out of here. Anyway, you’ll probably be too late, but I promise I will change.
Best wishes, Bob.
I think black hole is about how a man working alone at work one day or evening he discovers the black hole.At first he thinks it’s just a normal hole on some paper.Till his cup is absorbed by it.He takes some time to notice its something out of this world.Then he goas to get a snicker bar,out of the vending machine.He then realizes the power he holds.So he goas to a room holding a vault.Greedily then ever he starts taking more and more money.Till climbing into the vault.The black hole then sadly falls of the vault.Leaving him trapped inside,
With possibly no oxygen to breath.
-Frank
Hi Michael,
this is my entry of the man in the safe writing to someone.
Dear reader,
I’ve found something. It’s a black hole. It can go through objects! this isn’t a time to be excited though. You are probably wondering, “Where did this STUPID not come from?!”
Well, look up. I’m in that greeny- grey safe in front of you. I’m probably dead by the time you are reading this, but what you are about to find out is much, much worse…
I’ve done a lot of bad things in my short life, but me breaking into the safe was a bad idea. I’ll tell you why. My mother is tight on money, so I wanted to reward her with some.
NO! NO! Wait! don’t steal the money, put it back. Don’t bother calling the police, I might be dead. You don’t want to pull out a rotting corpse from a safe, do you? I know I don’t.
I promise, if I do get out, I will be a changed man. If I get out alive, that is. All the nights I slept in this safe I thought about what I did. I did a bad thing. Please, tell my boss I’m sorry, and I will never forgive myself. Anyway, I’m running out of air now, so,
Send help,
Bob the office man.
13th floor, Boring co.
Dull street,
Sleepyville.
I hope you enjoyed my extract and enjoy reading If you haven’t already.
Dear Manager,
I am terribly sorry for what I have done. I didn’t realize it would go down like this and I feel like I should go to prison for this. It’s probably hard to believe but a black hole appeared from my printer and I could put my hand through it! I was shocked at first but I
thought of all the possibilities! And I’m sorry but I stole stuff.. I went to the safe and stole money not for a theft purpose but for a giving us money purpose i want to apologize because what I did was stupid I’ve been stuck for 72 hours please send help I didn’t want it to be like this please!
Your only Tom.
Dear Fellow Worker,
I need help.Im stuck In a vault and Oxygen in running out.
Firstly,Let me tell you how I got in this terrible mess.
When,I was printing the last newspaper,A paper with a black dot appeared.
I ignored it at first but then realised it was a black hole!
Not thinking,I went and took a snicker bar and only 50,000 pounds.
Dear boss,
I’m sorry to inform you. For what you’re about to hear. In case I die I want you to hear it from my side.
You’re probably thinking what could be that bad but it is that bad. Anyway, so it was an ordinary day at the
office. I was just printing some stuff until something out of the blue. A black hole printed! Out of nowhere, it was very strange I could but my hand threw it. So I took my chance, and I went to the vending machine. Using my powers
I grabbed a chocolate bar.Then from the corner of my eye, I saw it at the boss’s office. Walking over there sneakily tip-toeing.Over jamming the handle, I went over to it…… the safe. I went closer and closer until I put the piece of paper on it. I took money, money, money, and more money I started to get greedy a bit too greedy. So I climbed into the safe and then. The piece of paper fell, and now I’m in here cramped sweaty area with extremely low oxygen.
I did it to help my mum out and for once in my life I had power.
If I do get out, which will take a miracle, I promise to be a better person even if I go to jail.
Sincerely
Josh
Dear whoever is reading this letter,its probably too late you already heard the news let me tell you my side of the story,I was printing paper when a black hole was on one and i dropped my cup on the paper it went through the hole, I put my hand through it and got the cup back and then i put my hand through it again i also put my hand through the safe to get money and got stuck in the safe. I am sorry for my actions i needed the money , i was past bills overdue i could of got my pay tomorrow i just want to say a message to everyone, do not be a robber do not be murderer and much more.if i ever survive i will be a better person .I will help people and i cant make an excuse,i will take my time in jail and i will never steal again.
Dear whoever finds this,
If you are reading this i am most likely no longer with you.I loved everyone at my job (except for Paul,Brittany,Steven,Cat and Jason) and i’m so so so sorry i cant watch Isac grow up. I’m sorry for being a selfish, greedy, rude, vile and disgusting person, I’m sorry for not being good enough for this world. But i have one last essence of pure greatness , the piece of paper outside this safe, is in fact mine and it always will be but it is great for science stuff but i was never good at that stuff so you do that work and any money made an eighth goes to the scientist and all the rest goes to Isac.
I feel i should tell you why i am here – by the way this is totally true. I was minding my own business when a robber came into the room of the safe and poured out a bunch of money, so i went to beat him up which i did really well but he flung me in the safe and ran off! But he probally didn’t take any money because i made a siren noise with my phone, voila, i’m a hero!So yeah and by the way tell the boss the reports are on his desk.
Farewell dear earth,
Bob Jingles.
This is my letter if i was the man in the safe.Dear boss,
I’m sorry to inform you.For what you’re about to hear.Incase i die i want you to hear it from my side.
You’re probably thinking what could be that bad but it is that bad.Anyway so it was a ordinary day at the
office.I was just printing some stuff until something out of the blue.A black hole printed!Out of nowhere, it was very strange i could but my hand threw it.So i took my chance, i went to the vending machine.Using my powers
I grabbed a chocolate bar.Then at the corner of my eye i saw it at the bosses office.Walking over there sneakily tip-toeing.Over jamming the handle, i went over to it…… the safe .I went closer and closer until i put the piece of paper on it.I took money, money, money, and more money i started to get greedy a bit too greedy.So i climbed into the safe and then.The piece of paper fell, now i’m in here cramped sweaty area with extremely low oxygen.
I did it to help my mum out and for once in my life I had power.
If I do get out, which will take a miracle, I promise to be a better person even if i go to jail.
Sincerely
Josh
This is my work witing as the man/ letter in the vault to loved one.
Dear Sister,
Before i explain i want to say, i love you and wish you the best in life now let me explain what happened with the black hole.
It all started when i was printing some files but amazingly it printed a black hole.I know it sounds crazy but its true you can put your hand through it!When i found it i was amazed, i tried it out by getting a snickers from the vending machine i decided what to use it for.
I put it on the mangers door and unlocked it, i needed money i was about to loose my house so i decided to steal the money. When i got in i saw the safe. This was it i taped the black hole to the safe and started pulling out more and more money i decided to put my hole body in and well you know the rest…
If by some miracle i get out i will chang i understand now how important life is and how you should be good.I am so sorry and i regret everything, i never wanted to be a bad person.I hope you understand and one day forgive me.
Love Tom
Dear Mom Dad and Boss
So one day, at work i needed to work double shifts and i needed to close up so i was printing something before going home and then the printer wasnt working so i kicked it and it was a black circle i have never seen it before and i putted it down and i got my coffe and i put it down and it went threw the black hole i have never seen anything like it before i was so greedy i went and stole some snickers bars but i was thinking why dont i save the world but i was so greedy i went inside in the keep out room and there was a vault .
So when i went in the keep out room and i and putted tape on the black hole and i putted it on the vault and i went inside it and i was stuck i was so greedy so who ever see this i am dead give my will and my respect to my boss and my famliy.
From patrick.
In 5 green we are doing last letters to loved ones, and this is my one as the man suck in the safe.
Dear Mum,Dad or anyone who is reading this
I want to tell you i’m probably gone and i want to say i love you
and I want to tell you my side of the story .
You’ve probably heard of all of the missing reports and stories there are all FAKE !
I was doing an overtime shift as i’m underpaid and whilst i was printing a random black hole
appeared i was confused so i placed it down and my cup accidentally hit and it went throgh
And it was REAL.
Greed got the better of me so I went over to the vending macine and tested it to see if I was just being delousional but I wasn’t and stole a Snickers bar . I saw the manager’s office and a bad idea popped up in my head. I broke in with my trusty black hole and put my hand in the safe .
I felt greedy so i went in body first and i was fully in and the black hole fell down so im trapped.
If anyone reads this, don’t involve the police and get the owner as he knows the code and we can all forget what happened and move on with our lives . If owner doesn’t listen use black hole on safe us hand to grab me out and i will change my ways i promise
Yours sincerely
Tom
Dear reader,
This is the most terrible thing in the world. A thief came to the keep out door with a black hole that makes holes and he went to the vault.Then he got so greedy he got the money and went in the hole and i went for him but he got out and made me stuck.
My will:
Son:My house and precious belongings.Take 1/2 of the money
Daddy:You can have my car and 1/4 of my money.
Mum: get 1/4 of my money.
wife get every thing else
Love Joe Patric
DEAR Elon,
This is probabley going to die soon anyway so… I Miss you but I found a cool piece of paper with a black dot on it. Anyway, I hope you live a long and healthy life and also beat the heart, lung, brain, bone and muscle cancer.
Now I want to apologize for attempting to steal the money from the safe I only did it so I could pay for the medical fee also i’m dying so goodbye but if I am to survive I promise to be a better person and never steal again
Yours sincerely Jeff
Dear Mum and Dad
Sadly,I have messed up again,but first let me tell you what happend.I saw a black hole print out of the printer and it could go through objects,firstly I decided to grab a snickers bar through the vending machine, and then I went to go take some money out of the safe so i crawled in and without a warning the black hole fell leaving me trapped and the oxygen is depleating.
Now i can not get out. Im sorry that i stole and shouldn’t of done that but i wasn’t thinking propably im so sorry please forgive me.
I promise I’ll be a better person I realy do.I do also deserve this karma but I dont deserve to be put out of my mysery,please forgive me I didnt know what I was doing
Dear Mum,
Unfortunatley, if you are reading this then I am probably dead. I’m in a safe and the oxygen is depleting. I’m sorry. I should’nt have stolen from the vault. By thism point you’ve probably noticed the piece of paper on the floor with the black circle on it. Here’s how it all started : I was on my night shift printing dozens of reports when a mysterious sheet of paper came out of the printer, it had a black circle on it. Soon, i figured out what i could dowith this powerfull black hole.
In class we have been watching a short film called the black hole and we are writing a letter about it
Dear Mum,
If you’re reading this I want to say that I’m really sorry for what you’re about to hear…
You might have seen it on tv but i wanna tell my side of the story.I was at the office printing stuff off then i put my cup down.Then It disappeared i was shocked,i try to get it back and after a little while i got it back i was really confused.I try putting it on a vending machine and i reached into it and i got a snickers bar.
I needed money to pay of the debt so I went to my bosses office and took lots and lots of money.Suddenly the paper fell of the vault and now I’m stuck…
If you see this i can become a better person if i can get out
Love bob
Dear, family
If you are reading this, I probably are no longer with you. I am so sorry I have been so selfish and I hope you will forgive me. I know my death will be a shock you but remember I will always be with you.
It is my fault I am gone, and I regret my choice to steal. I am so sorry I will never be able to speak to you ever again. I am sorry I will never for get you. Please tell Tom I’m sorry that I’ll never be able to celebrate his 1 birth day with him. My oxygen is depleting so goodbye.
David
Dear Police,
I know I have to explain what happens so I will. First I tried to print a report out but instead it printed out the black hole. I am sorry to say that greed overwhelmed me and I went over to safe and started to take money but then I climbed inside and the opening
sealed behind me
I wish that all my money and belongs go to my family.
David
Dear Parents
I am slowly dying so here are my last words,I was printing paper until this piece of paper had a black hole which I found out later,so I robbed a vending machine but then I had my eyes on the room that said keep out.
So I immediately opened the door and i saw a vault ,quickly I used the black hole to steal cash I am now really sorry that I committed a crime my will is all my money will go to my parents.
If I get out I will make sure this world has no crime and i will be a better person
From: Jeffrey Hostson
Dear Mum,
I just wanted to say Goodbye you might of found out what happened to me but I am pretty sure you know.
Weirdly,I was printing out a report my boss needed when I find this black hole thing .A few minutes later,I realised what the black hole was for. Then,I go to the hidden safe that I always wanted to get money out from .Greedily, I went in the safe and just was so desprate to see what else could be in there. The black hole fell of and I’d be stuck in there forever.
I was really worried and I still am today I have less oxygen and I am scared I will die. I miss you so much.
I really hope you read you read this letter.Love you more than anything.
Yours Sincerly
Gareth
Today we learned to write in a role of a character so I will write a letter to somebody to get the man out of the safe.Here we go.
Dear A random person ,
If you are reading this letter, I might be dead or alive,I really need help getting out of this safe.I think I have forgotten the code.
In this exact office,I was printing some paper with work on it, about boring stuff.However,the paper did not have work on it , it had a random black hole sitting in the centre was printed.I found out that you could stick your own hand through it.I stuck it onto a vending machine so I did. I put my hand through and I got a big, juicy chocolate bar that said SNICKERS, they were my favourite I got a couple of them.
Whilst I was chewing I had a great idea to get some money because I wanted to enjoy my life. I walked into the bosses room and unlocked the door, I got closer and closer the black hole was ready I went in and *thud* I’m trapped I am scared and very claustrophobic in here.
I want every body to know that I am sorry for what I did and I promise to become a better person. If you come I will survive.Oh by the way I in a locked up safe.
Best Wishes, from tim,
Dear daddy
please get me milk if you ever see you again im stuck
and this might be my last letter to you .In relay sorry that i made i you leave for the milk and never reunited and read this letter im relay sorry .And i need help its been a year daddy mummy said i will meat you in a place could milk land im relay relay stuck and im on low
Dear mum
i realy rely love you mum i need help i sor a print a and it got out a black hole and if i dont survive give my money to the homeless peapole mum this mighty be my last letter to you
Dear brother
i hope you get this letter i think mum and dad misses me and i will see you in place called heaven bye brother……
Dear mother
If you find this note I want you to find is … My phone is on 21 % my oxegent level is low. my love for money is never good,I never want you to end up in this situation. Your love is somewhere deep down in my heart I no it is like a black whole in your heart but that was suitable for my need.
But always make sure you find it was a stupid printer which created a stupid black whole which provided my troubles for my choices in life.
My choices in life where never right but now or ever this put me to my limite. And I failed I regret everything I did, my snicker , my 50 grand double bag I just wish t0 be wirh you right now.
The person I am will forever change everything will change i promise I just want to rewind my choices my days the people ,the night ,the printer , all ended me up in this situation my oxegent level almost depleted those where my final words please sendhelp.
OSCAR SERRIA
In english we are writing a letter from the perspective of the man in the film the black hole.
Dear whoever finds this letter,
I am in need of urgent help . I am stuck in the safe that this letter is stuck to . I will have to tell you the story of what happened so I apologize for what you’re about to hear .
I was printing out some things for work in the morning , when a black circle on a piece of paper was printed. I know it sounds unba- .
Sorry I have to make it quick . As I was saying, you can actually make your hand disappear .
I really had no choice. My mind was all jumbled and I couldn’t concentrate, it was late and I zoned out. I swear so , not on purpose , I stuck the piece of paper on to the vending machine and then opened the door to this very room . I thought that my life would be a little more exciting with more money in my bank account because I’m having some money problems and I need some help. So I decided to steal the money
If I ever escape or someone comes to rescue me , I have decided to change my ways and become less greedy . I am terribly sorry and I Promise never to do it again. Take me to the police if you like. I just want someone to help me out of this horrendous claustrophobic vault before I know ….. Die from the lack of air.
I hope one day I will be forgiven and become trustworthy once again to all of my colleagues please save me
Sincerely Alex
P.s. ask the boss for the vault code
I will be dead by the time you get this. I want three things 1. I will be cremated 2. All my money will be given to cancer research uk 3. All my teddies will go to you. I am trapped in a safe. I got here by finding a paper with a black hole on it so I went over to the safe and crald in and the portel but it fell. Love you so much, best mum ever.
here is some work at ashmount:
Dear Mum,
If you are reading this I am probably dead. I know, wait, I can explain. You will hear this on the news and you would probably be ashamed of me so here is my side of the story.
It was nearing midnight and I was doing a few over-scheduled prints to be ahead of time. The printer was working perfectly until a pitch-black perfect circle appeared on the last page. I picked up my cup, and left it standing up onto the blackness of the A4 .Without warning, I heard the sound of paper being crushed. With that, I spun round and saw the cup was gone! I know, strange, right? Anyways (I’m running out of oxygen), I reached inside ! A flat 2d piece of paper ! Starving, I walked over to the vending machine , put the paper over, reached inside and took out a chocolate bar!
Hi we have been imagining what his letter that he would send under the vault could be.
here is mine:
dear manager or worker,
If you get this letter, somehow i would like to say that i am very scared
in this vault.
See, as you know, i am in here but i would like to tell how.
So, it started with me working late as usual but then i accidently printed a black hole.
Now i know that sounds crazy but it is the truth.Now, once i discoverd it i tried to use
it in my bosses office. So, i opened the door and i saw this vault.
Quickly, i grabbed as many cash stashes as i could.
Dear Mr Remal
I am currently trapped in your money safe and rapidly losing oxygen. If you are wondering what this letter is for and why I am in your money safe then continue to read on.
It feels as if days have passed and the reason this has happened is all because of Sive Mocoland.
To whoever finds this letter,
please help me I am trapped and cannot get out, my greed took hold of me and cannot escape. This might be my last message, it is explainable what had happened today this is the end of my work here.
The oxygen is depleting and there are no bars on my phone I cannot contact anyone so if you are still reading this I am trapped in the safe.
To the finder of my body,
If you are reading this then I am probably dead .Let me tell you how I got in this uncomfortable position. Well I was just just doing my job copying out files when a black hole came out of the printer. A black hole that allows the user to reach through solid objects. So when I figerd out how it worked J went to the safe and desided to give myself a pay rise .But as I went into the safe to get it the black hole fell off the door so now I am stuck.
So now you know my story. So as the chances are that I will die I will write my will so firstly I give the black hole to the scientists of the world for I have learnt first hand that it is no toy. Next I give back the money that I have stolen to its rightful owner. Thirdly, I give my money to my family to share.
Great opening Billy.
Dear mum,
Inside the the safe not able to breath at all.Lonely and board trying to get out.I have bean
stuck in hear for atleast for one hour, I need your help of saving me. If you get me out then i will give you a SNICKERS bar and i am seriaus not joking.
Dear whoever finds me ,
I am writting to let you know how I have landed in this terrible situation I am lowe on air however if you find this you will know that I have been through great troubles.
Lt was a miserable Wednesday with non stop rain when I was printing the documents for Mr Boss however a black hole appeared soon I realized I could put my hand through it .The first thing that poped in my head were snickers .All of a sudden ,I heard noises from the (keep out) room .I oversly had see what was going on it out just in case someone was there when I opend the door I found a man coverd in black.Heb was trying to get as much money as possible he thought his hands werent good enofe for him so he used his entare body .I grabed him untile he swange me into the black hole.There was no noise at all.If I make it out aliveI will promise to be a better person .
Mr boss I want to let you know that I hate printing the documants and I hope for a better job.If I make it out alive.
Thank you Haya. Your opening greeting made me smile.
Dear Anybody
If you are reading this .I need help immediately.I am so sorry for what i have done. I wish I didn’t do it .I regret it so much .I hope you can find me in time .It is really hard to breathe in here.
You are probably wondering where I am. This is going to be your last guess.But i want to tell you part of the the story .I know you are not going to believe me but .It was a late night at work doing my last print until i can go home .I was waiting patiently for my work .It was ready so i opened he printer .But i sor something what i did not print it was a black hole .I have never sor in my life .Here the bit when you wont believe it but i could put my hand in it .It was crazy !
I was so hungry i went to the vending machine to get my favorite chocolate bar.I had a really dum idea .The idea was to go get money from the safe .I did it because i want something .But anyways i was going to give some to my mum and my family.I thought it was not much so.I went in dumly to go get more
money .The next bit will shock you. Suddenly I couldn’t get out .I was so scared i was banging on the safe door as hard as I could .I dont know how long i am going to be in here for so i started to write this letter
From Alex
HELP NEEDED
I liked this film because it has a lesson hidden inside it, which was ‘don’t be greedy, the world will find a way of making you pay’ and ‘with great power comes great responsibility’.
I expected the film to be like a science document not a fiction story. No, the title did not help me predict. I thought `The Black Hole’ meant the hole in space.
It made me think that he would use it for worthless things like, sweets or candy bars, but he stole money and payed the price. I also thought it was magical and he could use it for good like helping the poor.
It made me feel a little sad for the man who got trapped in the safe where he probably died/perished. He was a greedy man so mostly I felt like he got what he deserved.
I made up that instead of a safe he gets trapped in a story (harry potter) and can’t get out. Everything he does gets added to the written copy of the book.
The black hole is probably on of my favorite ones so far. This had a perfect plot and was set out with the perfect execution.
This showed a moral to not to steal or you might regret your actions and feel bad about what you have done. When I found out that the paper was magic I was at the edge of my seat wanting to know what would happen next.
If I was in that mans shoes I would keep that secret.
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I like this film because I like scary and horror film. I was pretty scared when he put his hand through the piece of paper. In the film there was magic and fantasy. He likes money and he got trapped in the safe because he was greedy and crazy.
I thought he didn’t get paid much and just wanted more money. Karma went against him. I think the film is interesting. He like snickers (its chocolate bar). He thought putting his arm in the safe was ok but it wasn’t.
This film made me feel like I was being taught a lesson and that I should not be greedy.
At first I thought the genre off the film was action because the title looked like an old fashioned action movie but then after I had watched the first few seconds of it I thought
it was a mystery movie as it had many things that you wouldn’t have on a normal day.
I think that one of the mane moto’s of the movie was , with great power comes great responsibility because the main character had a great, powerful object and used it for bad reasons and for power. When it was discovered what the black hole could do a whole new story popped up. The man could have used it for the greater good or many other reasons .
If I could change the ending I would make it so that behind the door was a pipe room and there was a door leading to a maze that the man got trapped in .
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I like the idea of a maze.
Personally I really enjoyed this film because it had a great ending and it was also quite dark. This is probably my favorite film I really enjoyed the moral of the story as well it is was good how they made it clear that he was angry at the printer every thing was so clear I love this film.
when I realized that the black hole was magical I found it really cool but it also would have a its down sides because some people will use for the worst and not the good.
The film made me feel a bit happy because people get what they deserve but if I got to choose the ending I would’ve boss to find him in the room and he would get arrested
The Black Hole was a very different film by future zone, this short film genre is mystery with a hint of horror. It made me feel uncomfortable since you always expect something bad to happen. I did not predict it would happen because when the tittle said ‘Black Hole’ I thought of space. The alternative ending I would have chosen was that he got caught stealing and had to go to prison.
I enjoyed this short film because at the end he got revenge .The saying is to not be greedy. “whatever you put in the world it has a way of coming back -BIG TIME-
When I realised what the black hole did I was curious what he was going to use it for .I thought he was gonna use it for silly things like to unlock the door. I was shocked to find out that he was greedy and stole money.
The short film made me wonder why he was working early or late .He was annoyed at at the printer malfunctioning.
if I could change the ending it would be that he ended up in different places like Charlie and the chocolate factory.
The film made me feel relaxed and calm. When the man put his hand hand through the vending machine, he got a snickers. I had watched the first second i thought it was a
mystery movie .I think the film was grate to watch
I felt very happy and exited and I think the film was very grate to watch the characters had a Grate power . the black hole could do new story.
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We think that the movie was quite dark, mysterious and tense because of what power he had. From the title, we expected for this clip to be set in space .We predicted for the character to use the black hole for good but it was the opposite. Greed ate him up.
When we realized what the black hole did we thought it was an extremely, amazing sight .The film made us feel quite disappointed because if we have learnt anything in life it is that whatever you put out into the world has a way of coming back to you. The ending we would use would be him opening a chest full of diamonds but he ends up being trapped in Spain.
I liked this film because it has a lesson hidden inside it, which was ‘don’t be greedy, the world will find a way of making you pay’ and ‘with great power comes great responsibility’.
It made me think that he would use it for worthless things like, sweets or candy bars, but he stole money and payed the price. I also thought it was magical and he could use it for good like helping the poor.
I expected the film to be like a science document not a fiction story. No, the title did not help me predict. I thought `The Black Hole’ meant the hole in space.
It made me feel a little sad for the man who got trapped in the safe where he probably died/perished. He was a greedy man so mostly I felt like he got what he deserved.
I made up that instead of a safe he gets trapped in a story (harry potter) and can’t get out. Everything he does gets added to the written copy of the book. I liked this film because it has a lesson hidden inside it, which was ‘don’t be greedy, the world will find a way of making you pay’ and ‘with great power comes great responsibility’.
I really enjoyed this short film as it was very exiting, and mysterious. Before I watched this film, I thought it would be about a black hole in space, but instead about a mysterious piece of paper with a black hole. I think that the message of the film was to not be greedy and take advantage of the things you have. I was very shocked when the man crawled into the safe and then the paper fell and he couldn’t get out.
We expected it to be based in space and that we found out when it told us about the credits. we got into it and started to enjoy it quite quickly and it tells us a valuable lesson about to not be greedy and to just be great full we thought it would be useful for stuff and if you do bad things with your power you will get karma. the film made us feel surprised because this would not be possible in real life and that it shows what superpowers can change people.
At the beginning we thought this film was going to be a Sci-Fi genre but we discovered that the film was in fact mystery. We thought that the man was going to be an evil character because of what he was doing. The film sent out a message suggesting that if you do something bad, then something bad would happen to you. However, if you did a good deed something good will happen to you.
The film made think about stealing and why you should not do this, bad things always follow.
My alternative ending would be that the man goes in to the room but the room is on fire and a red figure locks the door and he uses the black hole to get out.
What an alternative ending!
This film was quite clever because it sent out messages like ‘don’t be greedy, ‘don’t steal, and ‘with great power comes great responsibility’.
I thought the genre of this film was going to be sci-fi but it turned out to be action and a bit of horror. I got this impression because when everything disappeared into the black hole and the man was able to pull the cup out I thought it was unusual.
I felt unimpressed when the man stole a snickers bar from the vending machine and reached to the back of the safe because I don’t think grown men would do such a thing. He was almost trying to be clever in a sneaky but wrong way. This story also included Karma that suggests that when you do a bad thing a bad thing happens to you
If I was to select an alternative ending for this video, I would chose that the man found a chair with six squirrels that start jumping and flipping and doing the splits. They could have nice tiny ,beaded dresses with hairbands
and tiny ,fancy ,black suits with ties.
I like the message “with great power comes great responsibility”.
I thought the film was quite ingenious because it creates a message, don’t be greedy and don’t steal. The genre was mystery and we thought it was going to be an adventure.
When we saw the title credits, we thought it was going to be about black holes in space but really it was about a piece of paper with a hole that gets through solid objects.
The film made us feel guilt for the man because he was stealing more than he needed (not that he should steal). If we were to remake the ending, we would, instead of a safe put a wardrobe with a fantasy world with animals that would turn into giants when they saw a human. That is what happens to the man but as the animals were about to stomp on him, another black hole would appear under his feet and he would fall until he wakes up safe and sound but then he sees he is holding the piece of paper with a black hole on it !!
This film is about a greedy man he stole a money stole a snickers bar and he got so greedy that he got into the safe
I thought the film was really good because it teached children how not to steal and if you steal you get karma for your actions if you do something bad . I expected the genre to be sci-fi and I was correct. The title credit helped a lot because it was someone printing a black hole and the person was standing next to the printer in the credit.
When the man realized what the hole did, I thought, ”This makes 0 sense because he would of died and the world would disappear to the point of no return. ”
The film made me feel a bit odd because all your short films are animated and this one wasn’t to my surprise and it made me feel interested at the beginning until he got stuck inside a vault/safe that made me say to myself will he ever get out? Or will he just die there and shockingly I don’t think he has claustrophobia or why would he be brave enough to crawl inside a vault/safe.
I would of chosen a funny alternate ending about a chicken that multiplied every time it went into the black hole or there’s another printer with a black hole and he want’s to find out what would happen if a black hole went into a black hole and he crawls through it to find him self in another universe with no escape.
It’s interesting to think of the film as teaching us a lesson.
We thought this film was interesting because when the man/worker’s coffee fell in the black hole we thought it was very interesting because it was a piece of paper and it was not possible for a piece of paper with a black dot to become alive so that’s why we thought it was interesting.
This genre was mystery and it was what we expected. The opening title credit really helped because it helped us to understand what kind of film it was about.
Our reaction to when we found out what the black hole did was a sense of shock because we thought the black hole wouldn’t be the paper. We thought it would be on the wall or something.
The film made us feel curious because when it ended at the part he was trapped in the safe we got curious because we want to know what happened to the employee.
I thought that this film was really good as it teaches people not to be greedy and if they do be greedy they shall face karma. The genre that I expected was sci-fi nonfiction and a bit of fantasy.
When I realised about the black hole I instantly thought the amount of things that i would it.
The film made me feel sad for the person who wanted all the money and was working 3am in the early day. But near the end I thought that he deserved it because he was he stole money and some food from the vending machine.
In my opinion at the best ending is some action. The thing that is going to be action is that when he opens the door he will find robots with weapons. They both start fighting and at the end the person leaves goes and goes home.
The Black Hole:
I found funny when the man got stuck in the safe. It’s pretty horror…
Hello this character is greedy because he wanted all the money in the safe. If you are greedy you would have to face a massive situation. Also, this character is lazy because the way hes hair . And also grumpy because he kicked the printer very hard and also i fell sad for the printer. I think his a hard worker because i think it was pretty late . I don’t like this character.
The man steals from the vault he got his consenquence by getting stuck in it. 100/100.
Hello! I think he is greedy because he took a lot of money but locked himself but it is funny he locked himself. So i think this teaches us to not be greedy.
I think the man is greedy because he steals money/food and that links to being a criminal so if the police found out he was stealing money/food he would be in serious trouble.
I think he is not very smart because he shouldn’t had put his whole body in the safe he only should have put his head only
i think this show is about being greedy. Its also funny because the guy went inside the thing and was trying to get out of the thing.
I think this shows to not ever be greedy and my favourite part is when he gets stuck in the vault. I rate this 9/10! The movie is like funny mixed with horror. I loved this short movie!
Hello! I think this shows that he was being greedy because he took a lot of money and i found it funny! This shows to not be greedy. bye
We think that it was a good video but the moral of the story was that don’t take things for advantage
I think that the man is greedy and he didn’t really think well. He could of just put his head not his whole body.
It was a short film but it has a big meaning and I agree that he was really greedy.It was really funny because I can tell by the impression on his face he really wants to get more money!!
I think that the man in the video was really greedy because when he found the black hole he chose to use it wrongly. I really enjoyed this and hope it shows other people to not steal and tells them there is always a consequence for stealing and taking something that is not yours.
i think this man is greedy because he stole food and money just to show of and steal from his boss and if the manger finds out somebody stole his money the person that stole the money would get the police ivolved and will be in serious conseguenses
Hello! We loved this video, it was very funny when he got stuck in the safe. That man was very greedy, stealing is wrong. I hope he realised it’s wrong. We think the moral is to not be greedy and that stealing is not good!
I have picked up from the short video,that when the man already had enough money, he went in for more.When he put his full body in the safe, unfortunately, for him the sheet of paper with the back hole on it fell off.I felt like he needed it for stealing!
I think that the man is greedy because when he found the paper he decided to put it on the safe and took the money for himself. He deserved what happened to him because what he did was bad . I think he should have left the money and went. What ever happens in the dark always comes to light.
I think that the man is greedy because when he found the paper he decided to put it on the safe and took the money for himself. He deserved what happened to him because what he did was bad . I think he should have left the money and went. What ever happens in the dark always comes to light.
The man was very greedy and he only cared about himself. He shouldn’t have gone into to the secret room at all because it literally said ‘KEEP OUT’. I would like to know where the black hole came from because it had been mysteriously printed and the man doesn’t know where it came from.
As the photocopier began to make strange sounds, it printed off a mysterious document with a black circle on it. The man begins showing his greed by stealing from the vending machine using the document as some sort of portal. This is developed when he begins stealing money from the safe to the extent where he traps himself inside it.
I think that he was being really greedy with the money .Because people work hard for money and he just came and he stole it .He does look tired and scruffy and its only him at work .I think that`s why he stole it but straight away he got bad karma back for doing
something bad.He shouldn’t have stole the money in the first place.
I think the man is greedy because he took money that is not his.People work hard on that money and he just wants to takes it and he didn’t even get away with it. He deserves it.So let this be his lesson to know that whatever comes around goes around.
Hello this character is selfish because when he found out that the printer was not working he kicked it.Then suddenly a black hole came through the printer he didn’t know what it was.
I think the man is greedy because he got a black hole from the printer so he got a idea
to put it on vending machine so he get the snack so he robbed the safe
Hello.
After watching the video, I thought the man was incredibly greedy. I felt this because he started to get strangely happy when he realised he could start stealing things and he always wanted to grab more. Based off the clip, it clearly shows that greed is a bad thing.
I think that this movie has a nice moral because if you be greedy we’ll never have everything