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af
fa
af
fa
ll
s)
one
l
iness
Share your thoughts on Cumming’s poem with us.
Do you think this is poetry?
What words could you see?
Do you like/dislike the poem and if so why?
ll
s)
one
l
iness
Share your thoughts on Cumming’s poem with us.
Do you think this is poetry?
What words could you see?
Do you like/dislike the poem and if so why?
p(the
spear
wished
he
could
be
a)
lane
as
he
was
flying
throue
the
air
Hi Morgan,
What an original idea. It’s a very clever idea to think that a spear would wish to be a plane.
Keep on working on your original ideas.
lo
ve
the
li
fe
go
od
ti
me
Hi Jaiden,
Thank you for sharing your poem.
Why did you decide not to use brackets? How has it helped you to make your message clear?
that was a really good poem
(ski
ing)
do
wn
a
hl
i l
Hi Jessica,
Sometimes it’s a good idea to consider how your poem would be different if you made different choices.
How would your poem be different if you split Skiing at the start and end of your poem?
A
(do
g
fa
lls
do
wn
th
e
st
ai
rs)
In
jur
ed
HI Tirell,
Thank you for sharing your poem with us.
I think the delay of “injuired” increases our sympathy for the dog.
Keep on working hard and sharing your poems with us.
Bright Flowers
pe be
ta com
ls ing
ope bri
ning ght
(wi tur
de ning
ly) blue
HI Zelal,
Thank you for sharing your poem with us.
A title can be very important in creating a mood and yours works well especially as your last word is blue.
Keep on sharing your poems with us.
Space
ju(a
pi
ter
s)
th
eon
ly
bi
g
(a
cl
ou
d
sh
in
ni
ng
bri
ght)
Ha
pp
il
y
(HPA
AY ANSWER
PW
DRL A HAPPY WORD A BETER PLACE:)
O)
T
RB
E
PA
LE
C)
(the
wo
rl
d
br
in
gs
pe
ac
e)
to
us
Dub
ai
(ha
s)
th
e
(lar
ges
t)
sk
y
scra
pers
and
it
hold
s
a
wor
ld
reco
rd
wi
th
the
long
est
bea
ch,
the (be
st)
ho
tel
wh
ich
is
seven
star
an
d
th
e
tall
est
bu
il
ding
in
t
he
wo
rl
d!!!!
(smi le)
(a
(t what)
ever the world
throws at
you
t)M
ake
(Fun
ny)
me
lau
(hings.)
Can someone guess this?
Maybe Love
There’s(lo
ts)
of things(th
at nee
ds)
to be(sa
id th
at)
I’m(fal
lin) 4
u!
Week 1-E.E. Cummings
D(ness
Ark
Fa
ll
s)
desp
air
app
roaches
mur
awa
der
its
your
he
pre
art
cious
well done
niceusage of McKay’s language
The fire breather
H{th}e
brea{e}ths
{sna}fir
{ke}e{starts}
ont{scorching}o
th{soul}e{s}weak
{bringing}an{them}d
{ont}poo{o}r,{the}
destroy{othe}ying{r}evi
{sid}l{but}rebui
{fai}lding{ls} the
{to}rubble in
to a
kingdom{o}of
{wea}God{k}
A fantastic religious and powerful poem showing Cummings style and the power of God over evil
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ly
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