Week 1 Cummings

“l(a”.
l(ale
af
fa

ll

s)
one
l

iness

Share your thoughts on Cumming’s poem with us.

Do you think this is poetry?

What words could you see?

Do you like/dislike the poem and if so why?

28 thoughts on “Week 1 Cummings

    1. Hi Morgan,

      What an original idea. It’s a very clever idea to think that a spear would wish to be a plane.

      Keep on working on your original ideas.

    1. Hi Jaiden,

      Thank you for sharing your poem.

      Why did you decide not to use brackets? How has it helped you to make your message clear?

    1. Hi Jessica,

      Sometimes it’s a good idea to consider how your poem would be different if you made different choices.

      How would your poem be different if you split Skiing at the start and end of your poem?

    1. HI Tirell,

      Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

      I think the delay of “injuired” increases our sympathy for the dog.

      Keep on working hard and sharing your poems with us.

    1. HI Zelal,

      Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

      A title can be very important in creating a mood and yours works well especially as your last word is blue.

      Keep on sharing your poems with us.

  1. Dub
    ai
    (ha
    s)
    th
    e
    (lar
    ges
    t)
    sk
    y
    scra
    pers
    and
    it
    hold
    s
    a
    wor
    ld
    reco
    rd
    wi
    th
    the
    long
    est
    bea
    ch,
    the (be
    st)
    ho
    tel
    wh
    ich
    is
    seven
    star
    an
    d
    th
    e
    tall
    est
    bu
    il
    ding
    in
    t
    he
    wo
    rl
    d!!!!

  2. Maybe Love
    There’s(lo
    ts)
    of things(th
    at nee
    ds)
    to be(sa
    id th
    at)
    I’m(fal
    lin) 4
    u!

  3. The fire breather

    H{th}e
    brea{e}ths
    {sna}fir
    {ke}e{starts}
    ont{scorching}o
    th{soul}e{s}weak
    {bringing}an{them}d
    {ont}poo{o}r,{the}
    destroy{othe}ying{r}evi
    {sid}l{but}rebui
    {fai}lding{ls} the
    {to}rubble in
    to a
    kingdom{o}of
    {wea}God{k}

  4. Week 1
    Hate
    Th[Dem]e an
    [ons]gle
    Son[son]
    Your[en]
    Em
    [is]ie[you]
    [re]
    Are
    [ally]evil

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