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l think the lady looks like she is looking out of her window and she can see children playing outside .She looks like she is enjoying her old tunny guitar.she looks so overwheled and she looks like she is having fun.
I think she likes playing the guitar.I think she is looking at her family.I think she is
rich because she looks like she is wearing expensive clothes.I think she is happy
because she has a little smile on her face.I think she has a posh family because
she has posh stuff.
Today I went to visit my mum in America for five days. When I got back I brought a new guitar and, started to play it straight away. Until I saw my brother, I stared at him for five minutes. I couldn’t believe he actually came to see my show today at noon. I hugged him for hours until I realised that I was late for my show. I rushed to the show as fast as I could. Once I finished my show me and my brother walked home happily.
dear diary,
today was surprising when a painter came to my old house which belonged to my grandmother. on my birthday I got distracted when playing my fashionable guitar which was a present. I also got a pearled necklace , a golden fur coat and a dress of shiny golden splats of paint.
Dear Diary,
I am filling extremely happy because it is a special day for me it is my Birthday. I was eve happier when everyone was taking about me and saying happy birthday. after that my dad came a bought me a beautiful silky dress,a coat and a guitar that has a golden part. I felt very rich.
The girl feels like I might play the guitar at night.
She feels so happy because she never felt this joy. She likes his room today . She looks at the boy , the boy gives her a guitar. She loves the guitar <3 because she always wanted one of her own wen she was a kid she feels like in love with the boy .And she want to talk with the boy because gave the guitar to the girl.
Dear , diary
Today I am looking forward to my birthday. I am feeling a bit nervous about my birthday because, my mum gave me a golden guitar for my birthday and my mum also said that I have to play in front of some people in the night at 9:00pm. The artist Johannes Vermeer is probably feeling thrilled seeing me play in front of him and he’s going to create a picture of me playing my guitar. My mum said good luck!!! However people say that I’m a good player but I don’t think I’m a good player.
Today it was my 17th birthday! I was so excited! I woke up and mother told me to go and get changed and that we were going to the market to get a new shiny dress for a “surprise” later that day. So we hurried out the door and a brought a BEAUTIFUL white, silk and satin dress. The whole time I was so anxious and looking for the “surprise “that father was going to give me! I begged mother to buy me this gorgeous yellow and white furry dress that I saw out of a shop window. She finally said Yes and I went and bought it! At last we got home and father told me told me to go to my room because it was a mess. When I opened the door , my jaw dropped I saw my favourite EVER artist Johannes Vermeer! He told me to come in so that he could draw me. A flood of happiness broke into my body. A few minutes in it was completely silence when my father, mother and my younger brother burst into my room! I almost fainted!! that’s why I look distracted in my photo.Anyway got to go tomorrow we are going to see Buckingham palace to see the royal highness. I cant wait !! I just cant!!! Bye!!!
🙂
JGL
The girl who played the Guitar ( That’s what people call me! )
Today I was playing my precious guitar. Someone knocked on the cracked door, then my lovely, kind servant opened the door. Surprisingly , an artist came. I thought why did he come? Then I remembered my dad booked a appointment on Saturday. When he came in he painted me beautifully. I had to stay really still. My dad came in and I got distracted. I looked at my dad strangely. The artist was kind of angry, he whispered my name but, I didn’t listen. I told the artist to stop immediately, so I could talk to my dad. The rude artist ignored me and carried on painting.
Dear Diary ,
I am so excited that its my birthday today! That I went to the shop, then my dad brought a cake. That I am going to eat at my party! I felt quite happy that I was distracted playing on my guitar because it was my cake. yum! yum! I had a fantastic time!
Dear Diary,
Today was my birthday and I had so much fun I Bought new clothes and a guitar for my present it had gold in the middle of it and it was very delicate, I loved it so much . Later that day my dad called a painter to paint my favourite place for me and when he finished he hook it up for me .In the evening my mum called a photographist to take a picture of me with the painting hooked up on the wall but he cancelled on me, so instead my dad called a professional painter without me knowing, I was soo sad then the professional painter came and drew me by surprised I was just sitting there for hours smiling ,well kind of not a full one though .I stayed up till 3:00am and I woke up really late at 1:00pm .
dear diary,
today I had the best present ever! I was so delighted because my mum bought me a present .inside the present there was a fluffy silky dress. a artist called Vermeer painted me. after the painting I sat in a room all by myself and played my guitar. I was looking forwards to wear these clothes every day!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dear Diary,
Today it was my birthday ,my dad bought me a yellow, white and fluffy coat with a yellow, white and fluffy dress. Then my dad called an famous artist called Johanness Vermeer to paint me my old, wooden guitar next to an old picture in Kenwood house.
Dear Diary
Today, I was gobsmacked because my friend was really funny and I was like surprised to see that she was really funny.So when I got home I was soooo tired I played a little tune to wake me up a little bit. After I finished playing the Guitar I was completely relaxed.
Dear Diary,
Happy birthday to myself I had so much fun everybody came even my cousins from another country. Photographers came and took a picture of me and felt so nervous . After a famous person called Vermeer painted me so good but I haded to wait two years !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I played the wooden guitar which had a real golden circle in the middle . My dad bought me another guitar when I packaged the surprise boxes . And we had fun when we opened the cake and we ate it.
Happy birthday to me !Today has been absolutely fabulous , I have a guitar which has a golden hole in the middle of it and it looks like it is made from oak wood. I started to play the guitar and then realised that my father bought me another WONDERFUL dress. It made my heart burst with joy and happiness because I LOVE DRESSES.I like dresses with animal fur and silk and my father got just that ! But the best part is that it is my favourite colour YELLOW! I am looking forwards to wear it because it looks so good!
Today I feel really happy because it was my birthday. Also a mysterious miserable man came in and realised how beautifully I played the guitar, so he called up his family to our house . I felt so famous when everyone kept on taking pictures of me ,and an artist came in and drew me , I am looking forward to be eating delicious chocolate cake. I have also taken music lessons and showed everyone how perfect I actually am. People said I look gorgeous in my new beautiful golden dress I told them its made of real gold! and people believed me but it was really fake. Then a nine year old didn’t realise how much fun I was having, she was jealous and tried to ruin my party by
-eating all the chocolate cake
-spilling water over everyone
-Trying to upset me
-calling me names
I felt really sad .
Dear, diary There was a 25 years old girl playing her brown guitar . I think she is in the bedroom in her own house. She is smiling playing her instrument and she is wearing her yellow and white dress. I can see some books and there’s a white radiator. There are blue Kurten’s , a brown cupboard And a black shiny pole.
Today I had the best day because it was my birthday!
In the morning I was sitting quietly playing my guitar when there was a knock on the door I answered “Who is it?” feeling like I was in trouble for playing my guitar to loudly.When they answered it was my butler coming to tell me to get ready for my party. I wore my golden armed silky dress with my snow leopard furry coat that is so comfortable I could just fall asleep in it. Once I was ready my mum asked me to play my guitar in front of my whole family.
SIMILARITIES
There are many similarities between the guitar player and the girl with the pearl earrings.The pearl earrings lady is wearing a dress .They both have pearl accesories. They both have make-up.
DIFFERENCES
They are in different rooms .Ones playing the guitar and the others doing nothing.
earrings.The pearl earrings girls wearing a dress and so is the guitar player.Theyhave
Similarities: There are many similarities between the two paintings. Some of them are the following. Both girls have pearl accessories. Both girls are wearing dresses. The painter has painted both girls with the same eye colour. The girls were both painted by the same artist. Differences: The backgrounds are different because in the first painting you can see the setting but in the second one you can’t. In the first painting you can see the whole body but in the second one you can only see the head. One has lipstick one does not. The girl in the second painting is a midwife. The girls use different clothing. The first girl looks richer than the second girl.
There are many similarities between the guitar player and the girl with the pearl earring.
They both have makeup. They both have pearl accessories. Both have fancy clothes. They have beautiful coloured eyes. Both faces are turned. Both have white on outfits.
A similarities is guitar player and the girl the pearl earring is the back round.Because one is house and one black back round.They are both from same artist .Also they both have jewellery.A another similarities they both the same skin colour.
A difference is one of them haves makeup doesn’t. One looks more royal.Also a different hair colour.And different clothes.One shows the body.
there are many similarities between the guitar player and girl with the pearl
earing. They are both girls .Both greirls have jewelly both girls wear wearing
dressis .Both girls have same colored eyes. both girls have faces. Both girls
have backround.
Both girls have eyes.Both of the girls have dresses. They are painted by the same man.They are both wearing old fashion.Both of them have lipstick .They are wearing pearl accessories.
Dear dairy,
Yesterday I was watching my mum play the guitar and something struck me . I was wondering if I could play the guitar. So I asked my mom if she could teach me me how to play the guitar. She said of corse. When she was teaching me I saw my dad painting a picture of me . I went over there and asked him “what is that painting supposed to be “he said it is surpassed to be some trees and you at the bottom of the painting”. So went to do more guitar practice she wasn’t there. So I carried on doing my practice by myself .a week later I was told she went abrored . I asked why they said she’s preparing for a competition I asked how long she had gone for . They all cried 1 year . My face dropped terror but then I had an idear. But for that idear to work I needed to it to become a pro guitar player .day after day . I thought about her over and over again . Then my guitar broke . So I asked my dad if I can get another one he said after the painting had finished . Three months later he’s fished. So when can I get a different guitar. Luckily they were 50%of. 1 week later as I went abroad and we met my. Mother she exclaimed WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!! We whispered to see you .. the end
There are many similarities between The Guitar Player and the Girl with the Pearl Earring .They both have pearl acsessories. They both have a background, dresses,Eyes,Hair.
Dear diary,
Yesterday,I bought a guitar and ever since I’ve been playing it. I’ve even written my own song. But something was very wrong with the guitar,it was magic. Well I think so any way because it was playing its self for me so I left it alone for an hour. After an hour I started playing it again but it was still magic so I thought well it can’t be that bad can it? The next day, I saw that my guitar was not were I left it so I panicked and my mum said “Don’t worry we’ll get a new one” I said it’s ok as long as I have one. The new guitar my mum got me was a magnificent,beautiful guitar so quickly grabbed it saying” thank you so so so so so so much.” And so I was the girl who played the guitar
Jsnsnenndndndnndndhdhhdhdhenhd THE END
Dear diary,
I am Victoria wellington .Princess of Ireland I know some girls would die to have such a special role but to be honest it’s not so incredible.What I mean is your always expected to be perfect and wear dresses.Trust me I do like dresses but sometimes I get hot and want to wear shorts and a sleeveless top.A lot of the time I just get my guitar which my granny gave me and strum the strings confidently.Sometimes mother can be curious because she doesn’t know what I’m doing.Yesterday,I was at the royal ball where my mother wanted me to find a boyfriend. I danced with seven different boys (who only wanted to be with me because I was royal. I felt so worn out I went to my room and was about to fall asleep when I remembered my guitar!So I grabbed my guitar from under my bed and played a sweet tune.
Dear diary,
Yesterday,I was having the queen up to listen to me play my guitar . I was distracted by the lovely tune . I was playing to the queen.I was playing a happy,joyful song that me and the queen loves laughing to.Today before the queen came I played in the garden with my dogs . Also I baked some red velvet cupcakes. And had a fashion show to see what I should wear for when the queen comes round. I had to have a special,precious rehearsal which was also my last practise I was really confident and I was sitting on the most comfortable sofa in the world . I’m probably going to dance to the rhythm by the looks of it. After the queen went I played with my parents and siblings. Happily, when I’m older I want to be a guitar player maybe a singer or the queen
Love ❤️ from
Chloe xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Dear diary,
Yesterday I heard a lovely sound comming from the music room I walked through the door and I saw my dad gently playing my incredible guitar. I thought I might try it out because it makes a lovely noise. I want to change my charming, beautiful gown so it would be easier to play I thought. I put on a plain black fur coat. I started to strung the guitar I wasn’t that good at the star. In my room, I started to think I couldn’t play! I started to play again I was destracted by my kind, loving dad who is telling me to keep on playing and never give up. This guitar has go.d parts and a glossy brown base. When I pluck the string it glistens but you can’t see the strings. Later on I had tea and went to my room and my guitar was gone. I asked everyone but no one had seen it. It was a trying day so I went to bed and I had to find it in the morning. I woke up in my palace and the first place I went to look was the music room. There is so many places to look. I heard a sound like my guitar but it disappeared then I went to the dinning area but it also disappeared I headed it again I opened the music room door and there was my little sister playing my guitar. I felt really upset that my little sister can play and I can’t so that’s what happened in the past few days.
Dear diary,
In this piece I will say instead of I one because it’s my preferred word and anyway I’m a princess any who lets get on with it…..
Yesterday,one had an inset day and decided to bake a cake it was sparkly blue with a white chocolate star on top it was very special to me.While,the cake was baking one decided to strum on her guitar in my palace,and listen to the rhythm.After,one will take the cake out of the oven and go and play with the 13 corgies .
One is looking forward to being an amazing guitar player
Dear dairy,
Yesterday my mum took me to a insterment shop and She bought me a guitar.I was so pleased that as soon as we got home I stared playing it . My mum came in and shouted at me because I couldn’t play it. She said “she would teach me because she new how to play. The guitar. After a few lessons I actruly got quite good. My mum said that I was special but that’s what every mum says right? She also said that I had an incredible talent to play a guitar . At that moment my e little brother came over and started to sing the songs that I was playing .
Dear diary ,
I got distracted by my dog barking on the other side of the door, the queen talking to me, mother playing drums, cat meowing quite because he’s hurt, dad screaming get some fancy clothes on, aunt telling someone off, cousin putting rock music on and uncle screaming foods ready. Today, I went to Africa to play the guitar and give the money to the homeless, eat breakfast, visit my friend, go to mum and dads work, and go school for 10hours. I feel terrified in case I get told off. Next, I’m going to do jobs for my family, give food to elderly people, donate money to charity, do home school because my parents are teachers and go shop for the hole family. What I’m looking forward to in the future is to be rich so I can give money the poor so they can get food and house, being the best at guitar, being more helpful towards family because at the moment I can’t because I’m young.
Yesterday, my grandad bought me a golden lovely guitar. I felt special. I did not know how to play . Until my grandma taught me a incredible rhythm .
Excitedly I ran up stairs quickly to my room and started strumming that excellent music on my comfortable chair . A couple minutes later I was playing the same tune . Then my mum distracted me so I went of track .
I went outside to play my guitar I herd my mum and dad and my grandad and my grandma leave the house. When I was outside I’d daydream of me being a professional guitar player .
After, I heard my front door fall down and the robber stole my guitar I was really upset.
Dear diary,yesterday,me and my dad went to the music store to pick me a instrument that’s suitable instrument e so I chose a guitar. Once we got home I ran upstairs to to give it a test. I stumped one note and it sounded like a bell ringing.So that’s why my dad gives me private lessons twice a week. On the third week my dad became ill so I had to practice by my self and the rhythm was brilliant. I was distracted by my mums call for dinner and it was almost a silent meal because we were all sad.
A few hours ago , I was at a recital for my guitar and I was super nervous because I am a princess and more than 2000 people were there , that’s half the kingdom!!!!!!!
However, I was nervous because everyone was staring at me and what if I messed up ! Yesterday, before the recital I was practicing in the music room, I thought I needed it, even though everyone was shouting out, ” You’re incredible!”or”You’re excellent on the guitar “But I was curious about one man who had a long ,bushy moustache and he was twirling it mysteriously. I think he’s up to something! When I was at the recital , I was smiling this was because there were about 62 cameras aiming at me like guns . After that, I was autographs ,which took ages . I signed about 2372 autographs
In the future, I’m looking forward to being the queen just like my mum.So I can rule the kingdom and wear a large gold crown . I’m feeling excited and confident to be crowned !
Dear diary,
I had a fancy ,pretty dress on.And a rich beautiful robe on .I got on my guitar and started singing.I heard something so I stopped playing my guitar because I didn’t like people listening to my music the reason why was because I always thought that my family was going to laugh at me. I felt really scared because when my brother entered the room I shivered because I thought he would start laughing. Then ,when I was singing I was thinking about what my future job was going to be. I thought that I should be a guitar player. I could teach other people how to play the guitar and inspire them to love music.Also,feel the flow of the song and the tune of the song .I keep on singing and I saw my mum smile but I reacted like I like did not see her .I didn’t know that my mum could ever support me because I always thought that everyone laugh at me but now I know that she supports me in ever time and ever day.
Yesterday,I got a gold,soft,wooden ,guitar and played the song magic in my eye it me happier and full of enjoyment . On that day I got the guitar and song to her. I said” I wrote this song my self.”she said “wow it’s amazing!” I felt the Queen was really nice. I was looking forward to be a famous guitar player. The Queen looked really pretty. She gave me a blue gem . I think it was because of my great guitar skills. The next day, I looked out side it was raining I wanted to go out side to play my guitar but then I went into my room and played it.Everyday I improved my skills
Yesterday,I was in the house,in the studio I was getting very bored so i found a old guitar that my dad gave me for my birthday,the guitar had a big good circle in the middle and around it was black thin lines.Then I started to play a wonderful rhythm I was starting to really like it but I got interrupted my mum because she wanted to know what I won’t for dinner.Then it was my sister on her phone talking to her friend.
At noon,me and my mum went shopping for a box to put my guitar in,then I went to my friend house to record a song for my guitar.
In the future, I want to be a guitar teacher and teach children.
Dear diary,
Yesterday,I was playing the guitar when I heard a noise outside and it was my friend happily ridding a beautiful horse.My friend wanted to become a horse riding Techer . I said I wanted to become a professional guitarist.After doing my homework I decided to go get some fresh air so I went into the secret garden next to a little pond with frogs.The lovley blossomed tree spreaded it’s lovley branches high in the air raining down pink ,delicate petals. When I got back to the mansion there was a pink poofy dress .To be honest you may think having a rich family is cool well your wrong . You have to do extra homework and wear pink poofy dresses . Also one of the most annoying things is that my professional hairdresser really hurts my hair when he curls it .
Dear diary,
yesterday, my mother said that I should try playing on the guitar.I went happily to the music store to buy a guitar.When i got home i went to my room to try.I was really good so i decided to keep practising and became a musician. one day, the queen invited me to her palace to play some music for her. while i was there, i was very nervous. when i was finished she got me a very expensive goldon guitar. i got home and it was dinner time so i showed my family and ate my dinner very fast so i could play the golden guitar. i had written a whole song full of happiness. my mother and brother thought it was a fantastic song.and then i dashed off to bed.
Yesterday , me and my mum went to the shop I said ” Mother look look it is a guitar it looks like a gem and it is gold in it . ”
My mum said ” Why not . ” So we got it and then we got my dress.
“We can go home now and play a song .” My brother came and sat down . I played every night to be the best in the future .
Dear dairy,
Yesterday I went shopping with my mama and bought a. Guitar. I started to get tired so I went to sleep.On 17 may 2017 i started to play my guitar soon a hole croud of people came knocking on my door ,they were all there to watch me play my guitar. Some man was painting a picture of me.I was wearing a lovley coulored silkey, yellow and white dress.”it looked like she was playing a nice , calm relaxing. Song that her and her grandma wrote together . After she might be going to eat at a fancy restraint with mum dad and sisters. She might be felling really happy because she never thought that people would never listen to her music.THE END!!!!!!
Dear diary,
I went to the shop yesterday I bought a guitar and I went home to test it out it sounded beautiful. I was singing to my mum and dad. Later today, my dad passed I played a song I have three sisters and two brothers and my mum and a guitar broke a string. I wanted to go shop but it was raining I didn’t have a hood I wasn’t cold and warm I got home my hair was soaked I want into the bath my mum gives me a kiss and i brush my teeth.
Dear diary,you won’t believe what happened to me yesterday! I went with mum and bought a guitar and when I got home I began playing to granny and grandpa, I started to feel a rhythm coming on.Later that day, I started listening and strumming along to some classical music,all of a sudden, grandpa crept in and began observing me and especially the guitar he said,”I’ve never seen a golden guitar before,”he said I sounded incredible and that I should enter a competition.I went out to feed my swans in the pond that lies in the centre of my secret garden and I saw something curious looking but as I got a closer look, I saw an innocent, little gosling gliding through the water alongside her mum.After spending some time with the new member of the family, I went to practice more calmly in the quiet, peaceful hills.
Dear diary,
Yesterday I was confidently playing my incredible new guitar it is the most special thing to me.While I was playing my precious new guitar to my friends I herd someone come in to my room it was just my mum asking if we were oki said yes.Whenever I play my new guitar I allways sit next to a pile of books and in front of a beautiful painting of a tree sitting in the sun set .On that day ,I was wearing a white, silky plain dress with a yellow,wide gown with real fur and black dots on it and a neclesswith real pearls.My hair was down and curly with plats at the side pined up. Today I am going out for dinner with all my friends and family and we might see a film after dinner.When I grow up I want to be a singer or a guitar artist.
Dear diary,
Yesterday ,was excellent my mother Elizabeth and my nan the queen bought me a special,lovely guitar I was so thankful of them . Earlier that day , I had my tutor come round.Maths is my favourite and art . so I done education for 3 hours 7:30 till 10:30. But then excitedly I got given my guitar . I went to my music room and I strummed my guitar for 2 hours . That’s when I got interrupted by my grandparents to go have some lunch with them . It was really nice but I would have preferred to play my guitar. Anyway , I have to get ready for the royal ball that’s in my honour. I have to get everything ready and have to ask if I can play my guitar at the ball . They let me so I did and I had a magnificent time!
Last night, I was practicing with my golden guitar, playing infront of a crowd, I had done excellent, they were clapping, but something caught my eye. There were noises coming from a door, i had just moved in, so i expected something like this, i was curious, maybe i could develop a new room? But i got back to playing and it was normal.
Today i did it again, but better, some people actually came up and gave me money for it, the total i got was £3000 money, i could buy a full gold guitar with that money. The strings will be way better, the tune will be louder and maybe even more money, ill be rich.
Im planning on making some money from people, im really happy, ill split my money 50/50 with my parents. Obviously, because they’ve encouraged me enough to come to practicing, to really good guitar playing, my parents are the best, i cannot be able to thank them enough, but ill be going to play infront of even more crowds, ill enjoy it, i wont be nervous though, ill be confident.
In the future, im gonna become a professional at guitar playing, and im currently incredible, so i need practice to become better, i need luck, im gonna go to a wedding or party and play my guitar there, maybe they’ll love me, either way, i hope ill do better.
today I woke up , I had breakfast in the castle and I saw my little brother and he said, “Hi!”. So I went on with my day. So after that, I went to go get dressed. I decided to wear the white white dress and yellow fur coat and I wanted curls in my hair and my pearl necklace . After that I went to the guitar shop but on a guitar it had gold in the middle and black and white stripes on the outline. I invited all my friends to hear me play my guitar when they all came to my home and I started to play, they loved ❤️ it ! When they left I had dinner with my family . I put on my PJs and went to bed.
your diary entry was really nice and I also love it when you wrote” I decided to wear the white dress and yellow fur coat and I wanted curls in my hair and my pearl necklace”
Dear diary,
Yesterday I got a fancy guitar my mother and father bought it for me because I was doing so well with all my music.I made a big improvement.I wrote lots of happy songs and I got a pretty dress it is huge at the bottom with lace and its yellow . My mother and me made a song my mum played the paino and I played my guitar its called little gem . But my little brother was messing about and annoying me so we only got half way through the song .
Dear diary,
yeasterday, I brought a guitar and i wanted to learn how to play with pride.My mother wanted me to change my life to play the guitar.I made many mistakes but i thought too myself i can inprove.Arfter i started to play weddings , partys and festivals.And when i did all of that My brother snapped my guitar.when it was my birthday my mum got me a new guitar.I promised my mum i would do better in the future.
I like the way how you dis ribbed what is going on I could really build a picture in my head I like when you added “My brother snapped my guitar in half” it really set the scene. There is just one thing please check you punctuation and you have missed at a few words but the most important thing is it is about art.
l think the lady looks like she is looking out of her window and she can see children playing outside .She looks like she is enjoying her old tunny guitar.she looks so overwheled and she looks like she is having fun.
I think she likes playing the guitar.I think she is looking at her family.I think she is
rich because she looks like she is wearing expensive clothes.I think she is happy
because she has a little smile on her face.I think she has a posh family because
she has posh stuff.
Dear diary,
Today I went to visit my mum in America for five days. When I got back I brought a new guitar and, started to play it straight away. Until I saw my brother, I stared at him for five minutes. I couldn’t believe he actually came to see my show today at noon. I hugged him for hours until I realised that I was late for my show. I rushed to the show as fast as I could. Once I finished my show me and my brother walked home happily.
dear diary,
today was surprising when a painter came to my old house which belonged to my grandmother. on my birthday I got distracted when playing my fashionable guitar which was a present. I also got a pearled necklace , a golden fur coat and a dress of shiny golden splats of paint.
What distracted them Misha?
Misha remember you need to add capital letters
Dear Diary,
I am filling extremely happy because it is a special day for me it is my Birthday. I was eve happier when everyone was taking about me and saying happy birthday. after that my dad came a bought me a beautiful silky dress,a coat and a guitar that has a golden part. I felt very rich.
She feels happy because its her birthday she got cake and she got presents and she got an wooden guitar.
Dear diary,
In the picture, the girl is feeling happy because she is playing her guitar. She is playing her guitar to practise for her music teacher.
The girl feels like I might play the guitar at night.
She feels so happy because she never felt this joy. She likes his room today . She looks at the boy , the boy gives her a guitar. She loves the guitar <3 because she always wanted one of her own wen she was a kid she feels like in love with the boy .And she want to talk with the boy because gave the guitar to the girl.
Dear , diary
Today I am looking forward to my birthday. I am feeling a bit nervous about my birthday because, my mum gave me a golden guitar for my birthday and my mum also said that I have to play in front of some people in the night at 9:00pm. The artist Johannes Vermeer is probably feeling thrilled seeing me play in front of him and he’s going to create a picture of me playing my guitar. My mum said good luck!!! However people say that I’m a good player but I don’t think I’m a good player.
Dear Diary,
Today it was my 17th birthday! I was so excited! I woke up and mother told me to go and get changed and that we were going to the market to get a new shiny dress for a “surprise” later that day. So we hurried out the door and a brought a BEAUTIFUL white, silk and satin dress. The whole time I was so anxious and looking for the “surprise “that father was going to give me! I begged mother to buy me this gorgeous yellow and white furry dress that I saw out of a shop window. She finally said Yes and I went and bought it! At last we got home and father told me told me to go to my room because it was a mess. When I opened the door , my jaw dropped I saw my favourite EVER artist Johannes Vermeer! He told me to come in so that he could draw me. A flood of happiness broke into my body. A few minutes in it was completely silence when my father, mother and my younger brother burst into my room! I almost fainted!! that’s why I look distracted in my photo.Anyway got to go tomorrow we are going to see Buckingham palace to see the royal highness. I cant wait !! I just cant!!! Bye!!!
🙂
JGL
The girl who played the Guitar ( That’s what people call me! )
Hi Zahra
I really loved your discribted work<3 🙂 I like the way that you said what birthday it was otherwise it could of been 8th birthday<3
Dear diary,
Today I was playing my precious guitar. Someone knocked on the cracked door, then my lovely, kind servant opened the door. Surprisingly , an artist came. I thought why did he come? Then I remembered my dad booked a appointment on Saturday. When he came in he painted me beautifully. I had to stay really still. My dad came in and I got distracted. I looked at my dad strangely. The artist was kind of angry, he whispered my name but, I didn’t listen. I told the artist to stop immediately, so I could talk to my dad. The rude artist ignored me and carried on painting.
Dear Diary ,
I am so excited that its my birthday today! That I went to the shop, then my dad brought a cake. That I am going to eat at my party! I felt quite happy that I was distracted playing on my guitar because it was my cake. yum! yum! I had a fantastic time!
Dear Diary,
Today was my birthday and I had so much fun I Bought new clothes and a guitar for my present it had gold in the middle of it and it was very delicate, I loved it so much . Later that day my dad called a painter to paint my favourite place for me and when he finished he hook it up for me .In the evening my mum called a photographist to take a picture of me with the painting hooked up on the wall but he cancelled on me, so instead my dad called a professional painter without me knowing, I was soo sad then the professional painter came and drew me by surprised I was just sitting there for hours smiling ,well kind of not a full one though .I stayed up till 3:00am and I woke up really late at 1:00pm .
dear diary,
today I had the best present ever! I was so delighted because my mum bought me a present .inside the present there was a fluffy silky dress. a artist called Vermeer painted me. after the painting I sat in a room all by myself and played my guitar. I was looking forwards to wear these clothes every day!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dear Diary,
Today it was my birthday ,my dad bought me a yellow, white and fluffy coat with a yellow, white and fluffy dress. Then my dad called an famous artist called Johanness Vermeer to paint me my old, wooden guitar next to an old picture in Kenwood house.
Hi Mashfi,
I like the way you discribted the dress
Dear Diary
Today, I was gobsmacked because my friend was really funny and I was like surprised to see that she was really funny.So when I got home I was soooo tired I played a little tune to wake me up a little bit. After I finished playing the Guitar I was completely relaxed.
Dear Diary,
Happy birthday to myself I had so much fun everybody came even my cousins from another country. Photographers came and took a picture of me and felt so nervous . After a famous person called Vermeer painted me so good but I haded to wait two years !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I played the wooden guitar which had a real golden circle in the middle . My dad bought me another guitar when I packaged the surprise boxes . And we had fun when we opened the cake and we ate it.
Dear Diary,
Happy birthday to me !Today has been absolutely fabulous , I have a guitar which has a golden hole in the middle of it and it looks like it is made from oak wood. I started to play the guitar and then realised that my father bought me another WONDERFUL dress. It made my heart burst with joy and happiness because I LOVE DRESSES.I like dresses with animal fur and silk and my father got just that ! But the best part is that it is my favourite colour YELLOW! I am looking forwards to wear it because it looks so good!
Hi Natan
🙂 🙂 You do really good work
Dear Diary,
Today I feel really happy because it was my birthday. Also a mysterious miserable man came in and realised how beautifully I played the guitar, so he called up his family to our house . I felt so famous when everyone kept on taking pictures of me ,and an artist came in and drew me , I am looking forward to be eating delicious chocolate cake. I have also taken music lessons and showed everyone how perfect I actually am. People said I look gorgeous in my new beautiful golden dress I told them its made of real gold! and people believed me but it was really fake. Then a nine year old didn’t realise how much fun I was having, she was jealous and tried to ruin my party by
-eating all the chocolate cake
-spilling water over everyone
-Trying to upset me
-calling me names
I felt really sad .
Dear, diary There was a 25 years old girl playing her brown guitar . I think she is in the bedroom in her own house. She is smiling playing her instrument and she is wearing her yellow and white dress. I can see some books and there’s a white radiator. There are blue Kurten’s , a brown cupboard And a black shiny pole.
Dear Diary,
Today I had the best day because it was my birthday!
In the morning I was sitting quietly playing my guitar when there was a knock on the door I answered “Who is it?” feeling like I was in trouble for playing my guitar to loudly.When they answered it was my butler coming to tell me to get ready for my party. I wore my golden armed silky dress with my snow leopard furry coat that is so comfortable I could just fall asleep in it. Once I was ready my mum asked me to play my guitar in front of my whole family.
There are many similarities between the guitar and the player and the girl with the pear one earring.The differences is the backround is differenet.
Thanks Guney. What similarities did you spot?
SIMILARITIES
There are many similarities between the guitar player and the girl with the pearl earrings.The pearl earrings lady is wearing a dress .They both have pearl accesories. They both have make-up.
DIFFERENCES
They are in different rooms .Ones playing the guitar and the others doing nothing.
earrings.The pearl earrings girls wearing a dress and so is the guitar player.Theyhave
pearl accesories .They both have make-
Similarities: There are many similarities between the two paintings. Some of them are the following. Both girls have pearl accessories. Both girls are wearing dresses. The painter has painted both girls with the same eye colour. The girls were both painted by the same artist. Differences: The backgrounds are different because in the first painting you can see the setting but in the second one you can’t. In the first painting you can see the whole body but in the second one you can only see the head. One has lipstick one does not. The girl in the second painting is a midwife. The girls use different clothing. The first girl looks richer than the second girl.
What difference does it make including the background in “The Guitar Player”?
There are many similarities between the guitar player and the girl with the pearl earring.
They both have makeup. They both have pearl accessories. Both have fancy clothes. They have beautiful coloured eyes. Both faces are turned. Both have white on outfits.
Well spotted. Why might the artist have their face turned? Was this typical of paintings at the time?
A similarities is guitar player and the girl the pearl earring is the back round.Because one is house and one black back round.They are both from same artist .Also they both have jewellery.A another similarities they both the same skin colour.
A difference is one of them haves makeup doesn’t. One looks more royal.Also a different hair colour.And different clothes.One shows the body.
sony you have a great diry entry i liked the way you discribd and said somthing cachd my eye
there are many similarities between the guitar player and girl with the pearl
earing. They are both girls .Both greirls have jewelly both girls wear wearing
dressis .Both girls have same colored eyes. both girls have faces. Both girls
have backround.
Both girls have eyes.Both of the girls have dresses. They are painted by the same man.They are both wearing old fashion.Both of them have lipstick .They are wearing pearl accessories.
They are bouth girls. They bouth have pearl acesoresres . And have the same coulord eyes. The same Artist peanted them .And they have a background
They both have a dress .
Dear dairy,
Yesterday I was watching my mum play the guitar and something struck me . I was wondering if I could play the guitar. So I asked my mom if she could teach me me how to play the guitar. She said of corse. When she was teaching me I saw my dad painting a picture of me . I went over there and asked him “what is that painting supposed to be “he said it is surpassed to be some trees and you at the bottom of the painting”. So went to do more guitar practice she wasn’t there. So I carried on doing my practice by myself .a week later I was told she went abrored . I asked why they said she’s preparing for a competition I asked how long she had gone for . They all cried 1 year . My face dropped terror but then I had an idear. But for that idear to work I needed to it to become a pro guitar player .day after day . I thought about her over and over again . Then my guitar broke . So I asked my dad if I can get another one he said after the painting had finished . Three months later he’s fished. So when can I get a different guitar. Luckily they were 50%of. 1 week later as I went abroad and we met my. Mother she exclaimed WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!! We whispered to see you .. the end
There are many similarities between The Guitar Player and the Girl with the Pearl Earring .They both have pearl acsessories. They both have a background, dresses,Eyes,Hair.
A very good piece of writing, good use of inverted comma’s Aarons.
Hi Aarons
I like your idea with mother going abroad and everything but make sure you check your spellings 🙂
Dear diary,
Yesterday,I bought a guitar and ever since I’ve been playing it. I’ve even written my own song. But something was very wrong with the guitar,it was magic. Well I think so any way because it was playing its self for me so I left it alone for an hour. After an hour I started playing it again but it was still magic so I thought well it can’t be that bad can it? The next day, I saw that my guitar was not were I left it so I panicked and my mum said “Don’t worry we’ll get a new one” I said it’s ok as long as I have one. The new guitar my mum got me was a magnificent,beautiful guitar so quickly grabbed it saying” thank you so so so so so so much.” And so I was the girl who played the guitar
Jsnsnenndndndnndndhdhhdhdhenhd THE END
Hi Maddison,
That’s an interesting twist to make the guitar magical. I wasn’t expecting that.
I licke your aideas
Dear diary,
I am Victoria wellington .Princess of Ireland I know some girls would die to have such a special role but to be honest it’s not so incredible.What I mean is your always expected to be perfect and wear dresses.Trust me I do like dresses but sometimes I get hot and want to wear shorts and a sleeveless top.A lot of the time I just get my guitar which my granny gave me and strum the strings confidently.Sometimes mother can be curious because she doesn’t know what I’m doing.Yesterday,I was at the royal ball where my mother wanted me to find a boyfriend. I danced with seven different boys (who only wanted to be with me because I was royal. I felt so worn out I went to my room and was about to fall asleep when I remembered my guitar!So I grabbed my guitar from under my bed and played a sweet tune.
Dear diary,
Yesterday,I was having the queen up to listen to me play my guitar . I was distracted by the lovely tune . I was playing to the queen.I was playing a happy,joyful song that me and the queen loves laughing to.Today before the queen came I played in the garden with my dogs . Also I baked some red velvet cupcakes. And had a fashion show to see what I should wear for when the queen comes round. I had to have a special,precious rehearsal which was also my last practise I was really confident and I was sitting on the most comfortable sofa in the world . I’m probably going to dance to the rhythm by the looks of it. After the queen went I played with my parents and siblings. Happily, when I’m older I want to be a guitar player maybe a singer or the queen
Love ❤️ from
Chloe xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Dear diary,
Yesterday I heard a lovely sound comming from the music room I walked through the door and I saw my dad gently playing my incredible guitar. I thought I might try it out because it makes a lovely noise. I want to change my charming, beautiful gown so it would be easier to play I thought. I put on a plain black fur coat. I started to strung the guitar I wasn’t that good at the star. In my room, I started to think I couldn’t play! I started to play again I was destracted by my kind, loving dad who is telling me to keep on playing and never give up. This guitar has go.d parts and a glossy brown base. When I pluck the string it glistens but you can’t see the strings. Later on I had tea and went to my room and my guitar was gone. I asked everyone but no one had seen it. It was a trying day so I went to bed and I had to find it in the morning. I woke up in my palace and the first place I went to look was the music room. There is so many places to look. I heard a sound like my guitar but it disappeared then I went to the dinning area but it also disappeared I headed it again I opened the music room door and there was my little sister playing my guitar. I felt really upset that my little sister can play and I can’t so that’s what happened in the past few days.
Hi Olivia,
I like the way you use details from the actual painting to inform your diary entry.
Dear diary,
In this piece I will say instead of I one because it’s my preferred word and anyway I’m a princess any who lets get on with it…..
Yesterday,one had an inset day and decided to bake a cake it was sparkly blue with a white chocolate star on top it was very special to me.While,the cake was baking one decided to strum on her guitar in my palace,and listen to the rhythm.After,one will take the cake out of the oven and go and play with the 13 corgies .
One is looking forward to being an amazing guitar player
Dear dairy,
Yesterday my mum took me to a insterment shop and She bought me a guitar.I was so pleased that as soon as we got home I stared playing it . My mum came in and shouted at me because I couldn’t play it. She said “she would teach me because she new how to play. The guitar. After a few lessons I actruly got quite good. My mum said that I was special but that’s what every mum says right? She also said that I had an incredible talent to play a guitar . At that moment my e little brother came over and started to sing the songs that I was playing .
Dear diary ,
I got distracted by my dog barking on the other side of the door, the queen talking to me, mother playing drums, cat meowing quite because he’s hurt, dad screaming get some fancy clothes on, aunt telling someone off, cousin putting rock music on and uncle screaming foods ready. Today, I went to Africa to play the guitar and give the money to the homeless, eat breakfast, visit my friend, go to mum and dads work, and go school for 10hours. I feel terrified in case I get told off. Next, I’m going to do jobs for my family, give food to elderly people, donate money to charity, do home school because my parents are teachers and go shop for the hole family. What I’m looking forward to in the future is to be rich so I can give money the poor so they can get food and house, being the best at guitar, being more helpful towards family because at the moment I can’t because I’m young.
Dear diary,
Yesterday, my grandad bought me a golden lovely guitar. I felt special. I did not know how to play . Until my grandma taught me a incredible rhythm .
Excitedly I ran up stairs quickly to my room and started strumming that excellent music on my comfortable chair . A couple minutes later I was playing the same tune . Then my mum distracted me so I went of track .
I went outside to play my guitar I herd my mum and dad and my grandad and my grandma leave the house. When I was outside I’d daydream of me being a professional guitar player .
After, I heard my front door fall down and the robber stole my guitar I was really upset.
Dear diary,yesterday,me and my dad went to the music store to pick me a instrument that’s suitable instrument e so I chose a guitar. Once we got home I ran upstairs to to give it a test. I stumped one note and it sounded like a bell ringing.So that’s why my dad gives me private lessons twice a week. On the third week my dad became ill so I had to practice by my self and the rhythm was brilliant. I was distracted by my mums call for dinner and it was almost a silent meal because we were all sad.
Dear Diary,
A few hours ago , I was at a recital for my guitar and I was super nervous because I am a princess and more than 2000 people were there , that’s half the kingdom!!!!!!!
However, I was nervous because everyone was staring at me and what if I messed up ! Yesterday, before the recital I was practicing in the music room, I thought I needed it, even though everyone was shouting out, ” You’re incredible!”or”You’re excellent on the guitar “But I was curious about one man who had a long ,bushy moustache and he was twirling it mysteriously. I think he’s up to something! When I was at the recital , I was smiling this was because there were about 62 cameras aiming at me like guns . After that, I was autographs ,which took ages . I signed about 2372 autographs
In the future, I’m looking forward to being the queen just like my mum.So I can rule the kingdom and wear a large gold crown . I’m feeling excited and confident to be crowned !
Dear diary,
I had a fancy ,pretty dress on.And a rich beautiful robe on .I got on my guitar and started singing.I heard something so I stopped playing my guitar because I didn’t like people listening to my music the reason why was because I always thought that my family was going to laugh at me. I felt really scared because when my brother entered the room I shivered because I thought he would start laughing. Then ,when I was singing I was thinking about what my future job was going to be. I thought that I should be a guitar player. I could teach other people how to play the guitar and inspire them to love music.Also,feel the flow of the song and the tune of the song .I keep on singing and I saw my mum smile but I reacted like I like did not see her .I didn’t know that my mum could ever support me because I always thought that everyone laugh at me but now I know that she supports me in ever time and ever day.
Dear diary,
Yesterday,I got a gold,soft,wooden ,guitar and played the song magic in my eye it me happier and full of enjoyment . On that day I got the guitar and song to her. I said” I wrote this song my self.”she said “wow it’s amazing!” I felt the Queen was really nice. I was looking forward to be a famous guitar player. The Queen looked really pretty. She gave me a blue gem . I think it was because of my great guitar skills. The next day, I looked out side it was raining I wanted to go out side to play my guitar but then I went into my room and played it.Everyday I improved my skills
Dear diary,
Yesterday,I was in the house,in the studio I was getting very bored so i found a old guitar that my dad gave me for my birthday,the guitar had a big good circle in the middle and around it was black thin lines.Then I started to play a wonderful rhythm I was starting to really like it but I got interrupted my mum because she wanted to know what I won’t for dinner.Then it was my sister on her phone talking to her friend.
At noon,me and my mum went shopping for a box to put my guitar in,then I went to my friend house to record a song for my guitar.
In the future, I want to be a guitar teacher and teach children.
Dear diary,
Yesterday,I was playing the guitar when I heard a noise outside and it was my friend happily ridding a beautiful horse.My friend wanted to become a horse riding Techer . I said I wanted to become a professional guitarist.After doing my homework I decided to go get some fresh air so I went into the secret garden next to a little pond with frogs.The lovley blossomed tree spreaded it’s lovley branches high in the air raining down pink ,delicate petals. When I got back to the mansion there was a pink poofy dress .To be honest you may think having a rich family is cool well your wrong . You have to do extra homework and wear pink poofy dresses . Also one of the most annoying things is that my professional hairdresser really hurts my hair when he curls it .
Dear diary,
yesterday, my mother said that I should try playing on the guitar.I went happily to the music store to buy a guitar.When i got home i went to my room to try.I was really good so i decided to keep practising and became a musician. one day, the queen invited me to her palace to play some music for her. while i was there, i was very nervous. when i was finished she got me a very expensive goldon guitar. i got home and it was dinner time so i showed my family and ate my dinner very fast so i could play the golden guitar. i had written a whole song full of happiness. my mother and brother thought it was a fantastic song.and then i dashed off to bed.
Dear diary ,
Yesterday , me and my mum went to the shop I said ” Mother look look it is a guitar it looks like a gem and it is gold in it . ”
My mum said ” Why not . ” So we got it and then we got my dress.
“We can go home now and play a song .” My brother came and sat down . I played every night to be the best in the future .
And I say ” never give up .”
Dear dairy,
Yesterday I went shopping with my mama and bought a. Guitar. I started to get tired so I went to sleep.On 17 may 2017 i started to play my guitar soon a hole croud of people came knocking on my door ,they were all there to watch me play my guitar. Some man was painting a picture of me.I was wearing a lovley coulored silkey, yellow and white dress.”it looked like she was playing a nice , calm relaxing. Song that her and her grandma wrote together . After she might be going to eat at a fancy restraint with mum dad and sisters. She might be felling really happy because she never thought that people would never listen to her music.THE END!!!!!!
hi I love your ideas
Dear diary,
I went to the shop yesterday I bought a guitar and I went home to test it out it sounded beautiful. I was singing to my mum and dad. Later today, my dad passed I played a song I have three sisters and two brothers and my mum and a guitar broke a string. I wanted to go shop but it was raining I didn’t have a hood I wasn’t cold and warm I got home my hair was soaked I want into the bath my mum gives me a kiss and i brush my teeth.
Dear diary,you won’t believe what happened to me yesterday! I went with mum and bought a guitar and when I got home I began playing to granny and grandpa, I started to feel a rhythm coming on.Later that day, I started listening and strumming along to some classical music,all of a sudden, grandpa crept in and began observing me and especially the guitar he said,”I’ve never seen a golden guitar before,”he said I sounded incredible and that I should enter a competition.I went out to feed my swans in the pond that lies in the centre of my secret garden and I saw something curious looking but as I got a closer look, I saw an innocent, little gosling gliding through the water alongside her mum.After spending some time with the new member of the family, I went to practice more calmly in the quiet, peaceful hills.
Dear diary,
Yesterday I was confidently playing my incredible new guitar it is the most special thing to me.While I was playing my precious new guitar to my friends I herd someone come in to my room it was just my mum asking if we were oki said yes.Whenever I play my new guitar I allways sit next to a pile of books and in front of a beautiful painting of a tree sitting in the sun set .On that day ,I was wearing a white, silky plain dress with a yellow,wide gown with real fur and black dots on it and a neclesswith real pearls.My hair was down and curly with plats at the side pined up. Today I am going out for dinner with all my friends and family and we might see a film after dinner.When I grow up I want to be a singer or a guitar artist.
Dear diary,
Yesterday ,was excellent my mother Elizabeth and my nan the queen bought me a special,lovely guitar I was so thankful of them . Earlier that day , I had my tutor come round.Maths is my favourite and art . so I done education for 3 hours 7:30 till 10:30. But then excitedly I got given my guitar . I went to my music room and I strummed my guitar for 2 hours . That’s when I got interrupted by my grandparents to go have some lunch with them . It was really nice but I would have preferred to play my guitar. Anyway , I have to get ready for the royal ball that’s in my honour. I have to get everything ready and have to ask if I can play my guitar at the ball . They let me so I did and I had a magnificent time!
From
Victoria v. Royal
Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Dear Diary,
Last night, I was practicing with my golden guitar, playing infront of a crowd, I had done excellent, they were clapping, but something caught my eye. There were noises coming from a door, i had just moved in, so i expected something like this, i was curious, maybe i could develop a new room? But i got back to playing and it was normal.
Today i did it again, but better, some people actually came up and gave me money for it, the total i got was £3000 money, i could buy a full gold guitar with that money. The strings will be way better, the tune will be louder and maybe even more money, ill be rich.
Im planning on making some money from people, im really happy, ill split my money 50/50 with my parents. Obviously, because they’ve encouraged me enough to come to practicing, to really good guitar playing, my parents are the best, i cannot be able to thank them enough, but ill be going to play infront of even more crowds, ill enjoy it, i wont be nervous though, ill be confident.
In the future, im gonna become a professional at guitar playing, and im currently incredible, so i need practice to become better, i need luck, im gonna go to a wedding or party and play my guitar there, maybe they’ll love me, either way, i hope ill do better.
Dear Diary,
today I woke up , I had breakfast in the castle and I saw my little brother and he said, “Hi!”. So I went on with my day. So after that, I went to go get dressed. I decided to wear the white white dress and yellow fur coat and I wanted curls in my hair and my pearl necklace . After that I went to the guitar shop but on a guitar it had gold in the middle and black and white stripes on the outline. I invited all my friends to hear me play my guitar when they all came to my home and I started to play, they loved ❤️ it ! When they left I had dinner with my family . I put on my PJs and went to bed.
your diary entry was really nice and I also love it when you wrote” I decided to wear the white dress and yellow fur coat and I wanted curls in my hair and my pearl necklace”
Hi Israjennah and Suraya, Thank you for showing which bit of the diary entry you liked. Remember to also explain why you liked it too.
Dear diary,
Yesterday I got a fancy guitar my mother and father bought it for me because I was doing so well with all my music.I made a big improvement.I wrote lots of happy songs and I got a pretty dress it is huge at the bottom with lace and its yellow . My mother and me made a song my mum played the paino and I played my guitar its called little gem . But my little brother was messing about and annoying me so we only got half way through the song .
Dear diary,
yeasterday, I brought a guitar and i wanted to learn how to play with pride.My mother wanted me to change my life to play the guitar.I made many mistakes but i thought too myself i can inprove.Arfter i started to play weddings , partys and festivals.And when i did all of that My brother snapped my guitar.when it was my birthday my mum got me a new guitar.I promised my mum i would do better in the future.
Hi Wilson
I like the way how you dis ribbed what is going on I could really build a picture in my head I like when you added “My brother snapped my guitar in half” it really set the scene. There is just one thing please check you punctuation and you have missed at a few words but the most important thing is it is about art.
Dear diary ,
Yesterday I went shopping with my mama and bought a guitar.I started to get tired so I went to sleep.On the 17th may 2017 someone came knocking