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it makes me want to do better in everything maths,language,English,science and behaviour in my life
That’s wonderful Joshua. I’m sure you can do even better in all subjects.
me too
that was a nice poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow so cool! joshua!
Wow jousha i love this so much !!
It’s hard to make friends,hard to keep them,
as friends can be all around us,
We all have a connection
We stay together for protection
We put our differences aside
Our kindness and care we provide
We are strong and young
Smart and clever
Never sad,never mad
Together forever,Happier than ever
We are seeing the united way
You create a very forceful rhythm with short lines and your use of commas. It works very well.
renee this is a very good i love it
Nice poem Renee. the short sentences really have an impact on the poem.
Helpful feedback Molly. Thank you.
This is a very good poem, you never know when a friend will switch on yu
i have a poem as well
A Good Friend
there is nothing like a good friend
to tell your troubles too.
someone o open up with,
the highs, the lows,
the everyday struggles,
someone who knows,
your every quirk and flaw,
someone who understands your ways,
and loves you after all
I love this!
Even though this was a while ago.
That was really nice i really enjoyed that poem you made!
Its hard to hope,hare to cope not being accepted in this world we can make a difference we can hope together we all can have rights this is our world we can do anything nothing can stop hope we will fight for hope
Pain:
What is pain?
Pain is strong,
Pain is powerful,
Pain can lead you to have depression all your life
The respect we choose comes from your heart,
The respect we choose can make you feel loose,
We all come from good and bad,
This is not always gonna be good,
This is not always gonna be bad
Well one of the key to success is to follow your heart,
Make your own decisions and don’t let anyone rule your heart
Dear Bettina Magala ,
Your poem has really taught me what pain feels like. Thank you so much for posting this poem. It really does help people with depression to not let people walk all over them or make them feel worst. This poem taught me to make my own decision based of my problems
Thank you.
good poetry
That is sooooo amazing,nice poem
Together we could do no wrong
as long as we get along
united we stand against hatred and racism
don’t cry worry about the chances you miss when you don’t try
If you believe you will achieve
You have no option never give up
nice poem 🙂
very good rhyming at the start
Beautiful on the inside and out
It’s hard to fit in when you feel you dont believe,
in the things you can cry for and the things you dont see.
people struggle with racism, sexism and more,
but what you dont see, is your beautiful, inside and out.
feeling unloved, people struggle with the most,
so go for a walk, thank the ones you love,
and stand against your rights, to fight, for your life.
because you are beautiful, inside and out, without a doubt
so share your faith and believe in your success.
dont stay in the dirt, and cry all night,
come in the light and speak for your rights.
A great message Taegan. Thank you.
Lovely message!
amazinnnnnn 🙂
It’s hard to hope,when not being even
together,,we could achieve everything
Giving up is not a choice
To be one,to be united is a great feeling
we work together and stand up for eachother
It’s time we continue with our life
No giving up or we lose everything
Always stay strong
At the end we will unite
its hard to hope hard to be expect by owe see racism see red to be united we stand a reat things turn the page forever and live united racism awares curing together comming together is succes as time of stres its hard to archieve for when we live to give always respect others race apperances united now for ever
It’s hard to hope. hard to fit it by all.
To be united is a great thing but being respected for who you are is 100x greater!
We may come all together and be one big team ! we may stop bullying, racism, homophobic, sexism, because that lets all the stressed out! We may be treated all the same. lets all flip the page and re star!
we can come a strong team
stand strong
look strong
and be strong!
I like the idea of flipping the page Oshen.
very nice powerful and amazing 🙂
United we stand
Against all that can hurt physically and mentally
Bullying,racism,sexism and so on
Words can hurt
Sometime more than you think
But its part of life
Everyone goes through the same
For when we’re united we’re greater
A hopeful poem Elliot. Thank you.
its hard to hope to cope not feeling accepted while we might be all alone, wh’ve never been more close because we will only weather this unknown together so we have to fight for our right we work we dont break even when we bend
Thank you for sharing your poem Archie.
Some people are just so rude
Black people are seen as something that should deliver their food
Just because the colour of our skin
People think we belong in the bin
Racial abuse shall not be of use
Out of the mouth it shall not be spoken
Noyone will use it so it wont be woken
why cant we all be together
If we were a bird why shave the black feather
If we all were to be united
All of us can sleep at night
And we will live without a fight.
I like the bird allusion Noah to make your point.
I really like this poem as it talks about racism ad we must fight it.Someone people get abused by skin colour,and it really talks about.Overall,I think this poem deserves to be known more!
love the peom good point
I love this coz I’m black (as u know) and a lot of people struggle.
United now, united forever
We’re always been brighter together
Today we face many foes
Today we made another choice
Success requires united and united needs you
If you bend we’re here because united is the way to be
So don’t worry there is hope
As the greater good is here again
A super opening line Roni. Thank you.
I really like your poetry skills and your message in your poem is one of the most usefull ones there
It’s hard to hope, hard to deal with mental health.
To be one, to be happy. But it’s better to be kinder.
If you TRY you will might even accomplish something.
if you open you’re mind to the contaminated air,
you will repel all that negative around you.
Brave is the scent and Kindness is the key.
Try next time please, to raise awareness about metal health.
An inspirational poem Sebastian. Thank you.
This world is never divided
Unless the world is trying to hide it
This world needs you before it divides
unless it somehow rides this crisis
and you cannot hide this
so be the worlds sun
and be the worlds hun
This world could get better
If you get letters
This world is never divided
Unless this world is trying to hide.
It’s hard to hope,hard to survive
While we might be all alone,
We’ve never been more far apart
Because we will only weather this homelessness
So we get to fight
We give,we don’t break even when we bend
Somewhere,another person donates,
Somewhere,a child hugs his bear,
We are the community that keeps families close
Making our future brighter,greater
Fighting for the love of mankind in the street
We becoming of the helpful good
So there to help and give,
To be hope-sighted,never thrown apart,
For when we live to give,we always thrive.
It’s hard to hope, hard to hope with crisis
While we might be all alone, we’ve never been more together than one
Because we will only weather this if we are strong together
So we will get to work
We work together, we don’t break even when we bend
Somewhere another will help each other
Somewhere where we show we’ll help each other
We are the common world
Making our world brighter, greater
Fighting for each other life’s
We becoming of the common good
So there to be welcome
To be hope-sighted, never divided
For when we live to give, we always care for one another
A lovely poem Layla. Thank you for sharing.
very good!!!!
United way
Its hard to hope, hard to breathe
While we might be alone, we’ve never been more together
Because we will only weather these disastrous mysteries
Its hard to believe we are polluting our beautiful seas
So we get to planting treas
We help, we don’t break even when we bend
Somewhere another species is saved
Somewhere another bottle is thrown into a lake
We are the future
Making our world brighter, greater
Fighting for the good in what we believe
We become the protectors of trees
So there to hope
To be hope-sighted never blinded
For when we live to give, we always smile
An interesting idea Maggie to change the focus of the poem.
lovely poem
It’s hard to hope,
hard to cope with life
while we might be all alone,
we’ve never been more stressed
because we will only
weather this journey
hi this isnt my real name but I wanna say my poem if I can remember
“It’s hard to hope, hard to cope
we have never been more something something I don’t remember
It’s hard to fit in when you feel you dont believe,
in the things you can cry for and the things you dont see
but be kind care for each other
look out for one and another
for it’s our grief that gives us our gratitude,
Shows us how to find hope, if we ever lose it
for there is always light
To give to live we always live United
What a super line Radwa: “for it’s our grief that gives us our gratitude,”
Dear Future people
Sorry, sorry we changed the world’s future
Sorry no one listened our globe deserved better
To us the globe felt nothing
Forgive us
Help our special earth.
Our sympathy was gone
Dear future people,
sorry,sorry we changed the wourlds future
sorry no one listend
to us the gone felt nothing
fogive us
help are speshol erth
oure sympathy was gone
Dear future people
Sorry, sorry we changed the worlds future
Sorry no one listened our globe deserved better
To us the globe felt nothing
Forgive us
Help our special earth
Our sympathy was gone.
nice poem
Dear, Future World Leaders
help us
sorry,sorry … the world is hot enough…
sorry 55m x
never we listened to talk
to do nothing
don’t forgive us
save are special earth
the truth is gone
Future Generations,
I speak for us when I say
Sorry with our mess of a planet
Sorry that we were caught up in our own doings to
listen to people who made nothing
you forgive us
We didn’t realise the earth was
Like a marriage going wrong
We know what we had, it was gone
Future Generations,
the rest of us say,
sorry,we left you with our mess of a planet.
Sorry that we were too caught up in our own doings to do something.
Sorry
to do nothing.
I hope you forgive us,
we just didn’t realize how special the earth was,
like a marriage going wrong,
we didn’t know what we had until it was gone.
Dear Future,
The rest of us say sorry,sorry we left you our mess of a planet.
We were too caught up in our own doings to do something.
Sorry we listened to nothing.
I hope you forgive us.
We realise hoe special the earth was,
now its gone.
Dear Future,
Sorry we left you with a mess of a planet
Sorry we listened to people who make excuses
Forgive us
We just didn’t realise how special the earth was
We didn’t know what we had until it was gone…
Dear Planet,
sorry that our doings,
do nothing I hope ,
we didn’t realise G,
we didn’t know,
what we had
good poem with the sincere feeling that you’re sorry
Dear future,
sorry we left you with a mess of a planet
we just didn’t realise how special the earth was
we didn’t know what we had until it was gone
Dear Future us,
I think i speak for the rest of the future
sorry that we dont respect our future
Sorry we listened to people who made excuses
Please,please forgive us
We just didn’t realize how important the planet was
We didn’t be grateful for stuff until now
Please forgive us future
I like the repetition of please Veli. It makes it sounds as if you’re pleading.
Dear Future
for the rest when I say
Sorry sorry
that we were too caught to do nothing
I hope you forgive us
like a marriage
It was gone
Dear Future I think I speak for the rest of us when I say sorry, sorry we left you with our mess of a planet.Sorry that we were too caught up Sorry forgive us,like a marriage going wrong,
we didn’t know what we had until it was gone.
Dear Future Humans
Theres one thing i have to say
sorry sorry for the polution in the ocean
and sorry for the all the litter
SoRrY
I think that I speak for every single one of us,
Were using too much plastic,
Were killing all the animals,
Doing Backflips and all those tricks,
Won’t help the enviroment,
We need to start helping,
We need to start working,
That’s why we say Sorry.
A powerful poem. Thank you Karen.
really amaing
good poem karen
extinct: i think i speak for us when i say mess of a planet people who made
excuses
like a marriage gone wrong
for example you probably know the amazon desert right believe it or not it was once the amazon rain forest. amazing ….. billions of trees i mean they clean up pollution
oh it burned we burned it down we cut them with brutal machines 40 fields every minute 50% of all trees in the world all gone why?and we call this
”progress”
Super simile Tiphanie. That works very well.
life is good (based on mother to son)
Life is the lottery,
You won’t win every single time,
Trust me I know it gets better,
But there are many obstacles,
Also many choices,
For you to choose,
Still young lad so you,
You choose not us,
As i said,
Life is the lottery,
You wont win every single time
AMAZING WORK
Ahmad
AMAZING poem
really good! I love it
life (based on mother to son)
Life is a video game,
You don’t know what is going to pop out.
It will make you jump make you run,
but you can get passed it.
life is like a video game,
it will scare you and jump and run
nice i like how you said life is a video game
good poem
DON’T GIVE UP (based on mother to son)
Don’t give up
Don’t give up
Life is a pencil
Never know when it will break
Life has up and downs
So does life
Life is a dice
The number is mystery
Just like life
Don’t give up
Don’t give up
nice duaa i like how you said life is like a pencil and you will never know when it breaks.
NICE POEM DUAA
GENIOUS
LIKE WHEN YOU WROTE
LIFE IS LIKE A dice
(life is hopefull)
life is like a game.
seeing people getting tackled
Make sure to not get hurt.
you never going to kown who going to win.
one team will stand.
life is like a game.
make sure to not cry.
you never going to kown team loseing.
you never kown if you meet your favourite football player.
nice istak i like how you said life is like a game
NICE ISHE/ ninjabest555
GOOD POEM
AMAZING
Life is hopeful [based on Mother to Son]
Life is like art
Because you can put your
Heart into it
Life is like a game
You never know what you
Can win
Life is like a dice
You never know what you
Can roll
Putting your heart
Into it can be hard work
Life isn’t a game because
You can’t control it
Life is life and that
Is it
Love your poem myana from your bestie shannon
nice myana i like how you said life is a dice and you will never know what will happen
nice poem myana
i like it
Life is like a box of presents
You don’t know if you will dislike it
You might like it
Life isn’t always gonna be a clear ocean with a distant horizon
There’s gonna be waves or vicious sharks.
You could wake up hearing your dreams came true
Or to get stabbed hearing it was a dream
The point is you can get bad news but it isn’t the end of the world
Life could give you a gift
Or a rock to the head
but everyday is a gift
Like a box of presents you can love it or hate
[Based on Mother to son]
nice isaac i like how you use life is a present and you will never know if its good or bad 🙂
well done seems like you worked really hard on it
crystal star(mother to son)
Life is like a star bright are dark
Shinning over mars
We might not live next to the stars
But remember we are not crystal stars
No rich no poor
No great no sore
NO CRYSTAL STAR
You can look out your window tonight
and you’ll see all the stars oh so bright
NO CRYSTAL STAR
and if your in pain you can wipe your tears away
With just looking up!
NO CRYSTAL STAR
As bright as can be
The stars are there for you no mater what
They live apon the galaxy
and remember one day you’ll find your star that loves you
For you even if your not a crystal star
you’ll have that star just beside you.
Thank you Lylah. I like the way you’ve used repetition to structure your poem.
great lyhla
Life is like a lucky block ( based on mother to son)
Life is like a lucky block u never know what you get,
There can be good things and bad in life,
Life cant be situation,
Life can be a stair case
Life can go up and down like stairs,
Life is is not a book you cant skip pages and skip words
but Life is special
(based on mother and son)
Life is a meme ya never Know when your gonna have a laugh
You cant laugh for ever sometimes things are not going to be fun
“WHAT DO YOU LIKE ABOUT LIFE?””
Life doesn’t always go as expected
Sometimes you have UPS AND DOWNS in life
As I said you cant laugh forever
nice dilan i like how you siad life is like a meme and you dont know if its funny or not
crystal stair[based on mother to son]
life is like a dice
you don’t know what life is going to be like
it could be a six really good
or it could be a one really bad
but remember life isn’t no crystal stair it’s not always the best
maybe you should look further than your nose
and you’ll find a world of imagination
NICE GREAT JOB
🙂
yo jack good work love keep it up
life is fun (based on a mother to son)
life is a book,
you never know what will happen
what page or chapter you will turn
it never last forever
it can be
scary,funny,sad,boring
and you never know how it will
end.
i love that peom
LOVE IT MILA YOUR AMAZING
GENIOUS!!!!
GOOD JOB
Great job
Mila I like how you described the peom like a book
life is like a dice)mother to son.
Life is like a dice
you never know what your gonna roll
life is a surprise
so carry on one minute life is fine
the next
you take a wrong turn.
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Nice Rian
Life is like a dice {based on Mother to son}
Life is like a dice you never know what you will get
But its not always bad don’t you forget
Its got its ups and downs
Its got its smiles and frowns
But trust me it will be fine
Some day you will achieve your dreams
Even though it doesn’t seam
If life gives you lemons
You make lemonade
If you do a good deed
Some day you will get paid
You wouldn’t always get a 6
You will sometimes get stones and sticks
But do remember…
Life is like a dice you never know what you will get
[based on mother to son]
Life is an infinite ocean with its currents floating forwards and backwards
Its fluid movements float around or into obstacles
Its waves can be weak and strong, deep and shallow and can be gentle and aggressive
Life is an infinite Ocean it goes up and down
we may come across hard things in life, those setbacks fill with sorrow but makes us stronger
Life hasn’t been a smooth path, it its rough and bumpy
On that path you find solutions to your problems, you find a way to solve them
At the end of that path, you are FREE
Have your freedom feel your happiness and let it run through you as your heart pumps faster and let down your tears of joy
You create a wonderful rhythm in your poem Yanis especially the opening two lines.
Life is like a roller coaster
(based on mother to son)
Life is like a roller coaster
With ups and downs when you least expect it.
I’m sorry when I say this but,
Bad things will happen in your life
But… that’s normal and we should keep on going
Just like the ride!
You’ll be scared at the start
But throughout the ride it will get better!
And you will always get good bits in your life!
Life is like a roller coaster
Life’s ups and downs(based on mother to son
Life is like an escalator
because there are ups and downs
Life is like a circle
because it goes round and round
Life is like pop corn
It keeps popping up
Life is like ice
it doesn’t last forever
Life is like caramel
Life is like a game
you might win or lose
It can be sweet or salty
Life is like a rainbow
It can’t stay forever
Life is like a cloud
with all of your emotions
Life is like an escalator
made with ups and downs
Lots of imaginative metaphors here Shannon. Thank you.
great poem shannon i love you simile’s
Life is hopeful (based on Mother to Son)
Life is like Christmas you never know what you get,
Life is like a pencil you never know when it breaks,
Life is shiny ocean just like your shining future,
Life is like a Diamond just like a shiny ocean.
Life(based on mother to son)
Life is like a dice you don’t know what you will get
Sometime it can be hard sometimes it can’t
Life is like a box sometimes you could get stuck
Life is like a story tell with a happy ending.
hope[mother to son]
Life is like a claw machine you never know if you going to get a prize
Your not always going to get what you want in life.
Life is like a game your not always going to win
somtimes your going get hurt but always stand up
Life for me isn’t princesses and fairies,
Its like my life has been broken into millions of pieces,
Like broken glass,
At night i could only hear my tears running down my face,
Life for me isn’t as easy as counting to ten,
Ill never turn back cause life is like a roller coaster,
But know for me it is as good as a daisy,
There’s not a single star in the galaxy to prove my happiness.
Great job Chrystal
Life wont always go your way,
sometimes you need to understand,
have hope,
and believe.
Hope might and might not work,
but if you have it with you,
you’ll advance.
Never give up,
our planet is cruel,
it will make you descend,
and fall from your dreams.
Just have hope and you will,
succeed!
So listen here,
you will be great,
you will triumph,
and you’ll be free.
Thank you Keyley. It’s interesting how changing the speaker of the poem to someone more impersonal alters the feel of the poem.
Well son, I’ll tell you,
Life doesn’t always go your way.
It’s had ups,
And downs.
It helps you up,
And then it pushes you down in a quick of a flash.
It’s like a roller coaster.
So boy, don’t betray me
Don’t let life take you back,
Because you’ll find it harder.
You be you.
There is always some hope in you
No matter what happens.
But always remember what I said,
Life doesn’t always go your way.
Thank you Demian. Like the original poem I think you capture a speaker in expressions like: “t pushes you down in a quick of a flash”.
Life hasn’t been the easiest for me.
Racism has changed my life.
One day I was strolling down the street and with the corner of my eye I saw groups of black and white groups in my head I was thinking what life was coming to.
But
I had hope that life would evolve into a peaceful place were we lived in harmony.
Hi its Shannon in CYAN class I love how you feel about the differences But your right I also have hope that black and white people will evolve to peacefulness
Carry on climbing
Yes,son, I’ll tell you:
Life hasn’t been like an imagine of a crystal,shiny window
It’s been the opposite
It’s been like climbing a mountain without any preparation.
But all the the time
It does actually feel like grabbing onto the hooks on the mountain
Reaching and climbing as the trees dance in the cold breeze.
So boy, don’t you turn your back.
Work hard and make sure you never
stop climbing until you
reach that flag.
Ah yes using a simile of a mountain works well.
Son… im sorry but we can cant spend more money, we have nothing above our heads
We havent eaten in ages, we are reading all these books and flipping all these pages, dont you give up on your life. Life for me aint not going good: barefoot on streets. Please don’t be sad, think about when we become happy again! But sometimes life is what it needs to be.
So son. Think about your future, we will still get better, honey. Im still climbing that mountain until we have a roof under our heads. We are going to recover our life and hope that we will also recover ourselfs in the future my lovely, I will still carry on and confirm our dreams. Just keep on following your dreams.
I know you want those mashed beans. I’ll climb as hard as i can just to get us better. Always remember whatever happens in the dark always comes to light.
😀
Life has not been easy for me and my maths,
It’s been like a rolieckoster ,
Maybe it is just hard for me and other people ,
In the future I am getting better and better,
Now it is cuit fun.
I had a dream that black and white people could play in a playground with out being jugged and get dirty with all the mud and can hold hands, walking down the street skipping and prancing all about.so tonight when we all go home and to bed think about this, think about the future
Life for me aint been like having a normal day in the sun.Its like walking up the stairs with spikes and like 36 steps up.Always waking up 6:00 in the morning to go to school.But it wil change.It will be way better. Thats why you should keep going.
Life is not like a walk in the park for me it is like my life is fading away in to the darkness life is challenging life is not like going to school in the morning or like riding a scooter what an saying is life is hard for everyone in the world life is like when a friend or family dies in your life but we all have hope in all of us
sooo hi Tyler it me Ahmad from cyan class i never knew you did this great piece of work love the first metaphor by Ahmad your best of friend
I’ve been by your side,
Life isn’t fair dear child,
Take care of yourself dear child,
You have always been my dream of life,
Future ahead of you,
Education is in your hands,
So dear child,
Life isn’t fair,
Money is not powerful,
Life is powerful,
Don’t think,
Dream big,
Go to school dear child,
Your phenomenal,
A phenomenal women,
Like me
Great poem Malaika. I like the way the speaker in your poem is very different from the one in Mother to Son but it works well.
well done
Well I’ll tell you:
Life for me ain’t been the same since my friend went away
It’s had sad times in it
And like a cold wet day
And boards that cut and hurt my feet
And places with no soft carpet on the floor
But all the time
I’se been a marching
And reachin’ for the stars
And I keep being happy
And sometimes goin’ in the
Dark cold waters
Where there ain’t been no sunny days
So boy, don’t you turn back.
Don’t you set down on the broken floor
‘Cause you finds it’s kinder hard.
Don’t you fall now
For I’se still marching, honey,
I’se still reachin’ for the stars
And life for me ain’t been a piece of cake.
A touching poem. Please remember to leave your name.
well son ill tell you life for me was never fair and now your life is going in the dark where there’s no light.Think about your future and my future oh may you not turn back.You have always been in my heart and have always been in my dream to have a boy.I have always been by your side.
nice poem
Life for me hasen’t been the easyes’t life in the hole world,life has a maze where you have to escape some times. There’s not all ways stairs so that you can clime,and wen you clime that stair’s your life will be more beter than ever. you can only see darkness, but i will never give up, i will all ways kip traing
life is like a stair case (based on mother to son)
Life is like a stair case,
The more you walk the higher you get
But some times you fall
Just get up carry on walking my friend
Don’t run you’ll lose your step
And you’ll trip once more
It happens to everyone including me
Ignor the bugs
And look outside for the view
Keep on climbing that stair case
You only have one chance
Life is like a stair case,
The more you walk the better the view
Life isn’t like a fairy tale ( based on Mother to Son)
Life isn’t like a fairy tale
It isn’t full of sparkles and cupcakes with rainbow icing
No happily ever after
No money or even a pence
People may laugh and laugh
But you must keep on moving
Or let them have their way
Life is sort of like a 4-leaf clover
Every one you find
The more good things you will find
Yeah
Life isn’t like a fairy tale for me
But I keep on moving on anyway
Like a river
Going forward
No fear in it’s mind
Just keep on moving
And you’ll be fine
A great idea Nawal and well executed.
Life is a wheel (Based on Mother to Son)
Life is like a wheel
It spins around
It goes fast and slow
It stops
It starts
It goes to different places
You never know when a nail will hit
You can never expect a flat
Its visible and not visible
It mixes in colour
It gets wet
It gets dry
Life is a wheel
Thank you Nathan. I like your use of line breaks to shape your poem.
Nice job nathan
I like how you described it
Rooftop(based on mother to son)
Life is like a roof,
You can go up but not always down,
you might fall down,
but soon the building might crawl away,
Away from everyone you know,
You need to catch up with it as fast as a lion,
Then you realise you’re know-where to be seen,
there you know you can’t go back up
life is like a puzzle [based on mother to son.]
life is like a puzzle .
some times you finish it.
but sometimes there’s missing pieces .
you have to make your own puzzle like a ghost finding it way to the light .
when you finish it it’s a picture formed for you .
you can look back and remember it the same way you finish it……
Life is like a day after another (based on Mother to Son)
Life is life a day after another,
Sometimes they’re good
Sometimes they’re bad
Although you need to go through them
You’ll leave them the next morning
And you make the day start again.
Life is like a day after another,
Sometimes they’re good
Sometimes they’re bad
You never know what you’ll get
Just like a dice.
Life is like a roller coaster
(Based on Mother to Son)
Life is like a roller coaster
It has its ups and downs
Twists and turns
It goes fast and slow
But it doesn’t stop me
Because i’m holding on
There’s cracks and no cracks
But nothing stops me
Because i’m still holding on
Nothing can stop me
Nothing
Because i’m still gripping on tight
Holding on
Because life for me is a crazy roller coaster
And i’m holding on
Breakfast poem {based on my life}
You know what they say
Breakfast is the most
Important meal of the
Day so i wake up but
Before i switch of my
Alarm i put on my socks and
Sliders and its because i
Haven’t had breakfast!
So i go down the stairs and I’ve put my toast
In the toaster i’m putting jam
On my toast so i need a knife to cut
It in half but guess where i go in
The cupboard to get another
Spread and its because i haven’t had
Breakfast! so I’ve eaten my Breakfast
And then i go to brush my teeth I’ve got my
Toothbrush and i go to get toothpaste
But instead i get my step dad’s razor
And its because i haven’t oh wait i
Have had breakfast i think its just me not thinking
Right.
Thanks Lailee. It’s great to read poems on themes you select.
lailee cool poem
When things are wrong as they always will be when the road is turning uphill when the gas is low and the bills are high .We never walk away and never give up
Life is like your mum (based on Mother to Son)
Life is all about your mum
Since Birth to now
Your parents have taken care of you for long
Even though they ground you they do it for a reason
You never know when they are going to go mad
When they do you cant stop them
But they still buy you stuff
But you never know when its going to end
There are always ups and downs in life.
good poem
Balloon (based on mother to son)
life is like a balloon
it floats until until it pops
some times you will get blown away from what you love
some times you won’t
but you’ll still be floating up and above
until you don’t
but im still floating
just like a balloon
but soon you’ll be at the moon
and be floating no soon
Thank you Albert. I’ve never read a balloon response before. Very interesting.
No free money tree (based on mother to son)
Life for me ain’t be no free money tree
It had falling leaves
And all of the bad air scattered around
Well life for me ain’t be no free money tree
The leaves on the tree grew me a paradise
But i fought for my life
As my right
At that time
Life for me ain’t be no free money tree
It had moss
Deadly wooden splinters
But i got through it all
I had now the heard earned money
But ill tell ya
Life for me ain’t be no free money tree.
This is great Jaden. An original idea and you capture the voice of the speaker too.
Life is like a staircase (based on mother to son)
Life is like a staircase
there are cracks in it
It’s wobbly and shaky
And you never know if your going to take your step up or down
If you make it up you will achieve your target and reach the crown
But if you take your step down
Never give up work hard
And take your step up
its very good I like it
nice poem
This is one of the best poems Waleed. I LIKE IT
Life. (Based off poem Mother to son)
Life is like a painting
Are you going to mess it all up?
Or start all over again.
But the difference is
You cant erase your mistake
Not even a tiny one
All you have to do is keep on standin
Stand tall
Keep on going,keep on trying
Nothing can try break you
Not anymore
Stand tall with a smile on your face.
Because its your time to shine
Shine bright and camouflage with the stars of the night.
Shine brighter then ever before
Block out the negative
And in with the positive
But just remember
Life.is.like.a.painting
Thank you Maisy I like the idea of exploring the simile of life being like a painting.
I like how you used life is like a painting and you cant erase a mistake i really like this poem
Great poem Maisy. I like the simile for a painting!
Life Ain’t Easy (based on Mother to Son)
So you thought it was easy so now you know,
For what comes just goes
Cheating for a smile hoping for a lie
Like a marriage gone wrong
Also many choices
For you to choose.
Life is not a fairy tale
no happy ever after
in books and movies nothing comes in a click
you have bills ,tax ,kids and work
you have to worry about the world pollution , global warming.
life is like a book (inspired from mother to son)
you never know how many chapters there are
unless you read and if you just flick through books it just like missing important bits of your life you can get paper cuts but keep on going
and get stopped by tricky words but never ever give up.
sorry future (based on Dear Future Generations)
Dear Future Generations
I am sad to tell you that all seas are pouluted with junk.
Sorry for leaving you in a smelly dump.
Sorry we didnt bother to put our trash in our bins instead of our lovely Oceons.
Wait sorry you probably dont know what oceons are right?
Oceons are where lovely animals were used to be.
You probably will know fish the extinct animal species.
You could swim in seas like a swimming pool.
Sorry for kill our oceons and fish.
We failed im sorry.
Wait actually im not sorry.
I wont let this happen.
it all depends on us.
If we dont take action this problem will be a mess.
A problem is not a mistake if we work hard things will go back to normal.
I am not letting this mess happen.
We got to do something fast.
Before we go extinct.
Im sorry.
FUTURE GENERATION
DEAR FUTURE GENERATIONS
I’M sorry that we caught up of our own doings
Forgive us
Is every thing going wrong?
I’m sorry i didn’t know how spacial the world ment to you
Sorry we ruined the trees
I’m sorry we ruined your life and your personallity
Is the marrige going wrong?
I’m sorry our home is destroyed
We didn’t know you had feelings
Sorry i douted you heart
I didn’t know how much you love
This world
FOR THE LAT TIME
SORRY
FROM DESTINY !!!!!!!
Future future,
We’re sorry for doing this,
We kinda cut all of the trees,
For a piece of paper with numbers,
Every day we cut,
With a tree doing down like a rain drop,
But what did the trees do to us,
They give us oxegen ,
And take away the carbon,
Trees have life too,
Some put green paper,
Over trees,
Even over family,
We use trees for lifestyle,
Have you heard of litter,
Some do but still litter,
You know littering can kill us?
But some still do,
Do you even know that you can,
Kill your self by,
Littering so sorry future generations,
Sorry for how we treat the earth,
If we keep doing this,
We will put us in danger,
So stop get some help by the future generations.
Baka I’m not sorry,
We can fix this as a community,
We can do it for the future,
Because if we don’t well,
Danger for all of humanity,
And yes,
Baka I’m not sorry,
Humanity is nature and if we destroy nature,
We are destroying our selfs,
And we will be gone forever.
Thank you Ahmed. I like your opening simile comparing the fallen tree to a tear drop.
nice good job ahmad
Yanis Hargrave[based on dear future generations]
Dear future generations
Im sorry to say… our life has expired
Believe it or not life used to be everywhere
Trees,flowers and wildlife
Animals used to roam around
You cant believe how many species we found i’m…
Sorry,sorry we destroyed life itself
I don’t know how we got the courage to say that this for the best
That we fulfilled our duty
Now we have to walk around with oxygen masks on our face
We have to pay huge ransoms just to breath AIR
Our population is declining fast
One of our biggest questions are… why did we do this?
Its extremely rare to find one leaf
One leaf cost’s millions just to breath one strand of air
I’m… you know what … i’m not sorry
We can make a miracle we can redirect our mistakes to corrections
Death to Life, brown to green and pollution to air
We may live in dystopia but we can change it to haven.
Thank you Yanis. I find the opening with “our life has expired” very moving.
We can change [Based on Dear Future Generations]
Dear future generations
Im sorry to tell you about the people who didn’t care
About the earth our source of life
The nature that we chopped down
For a dollar bill.
I am truly sorry that we were to careless,
To care about our own enviorment
that everyday there are 40 more new football fields
But in cost for 50% of trees cut down For what?
Animals also suffer for the litter thrown into the ocean
Forgive us future generations
Forgive us for even CONSIDERING! to call destruction progress
Wonderful living creatures could suffer the moment of dying
Or newborn babies being born with asthma just because people would idle their cars
Or people who litter
Chop down trees or smoke
How do you be so selfish for money
You know what Im not sorry
It is up to us to fix this
Only we can stop this
How we could plant trees or even
Use less petrol
Just have faith we can redirect this
Into a whole new improved planet
WE must end global warming
Earth is our home.
TO give up on Nature
Is to give up on us
Earth isn’t Dystopia
It’s paradise.
Super poem Isaac. Your examples are moving and you build a convincing argument.
To the future{Based on Dear Future Generations}
Dear Future Generations,
I’m sorry about the trees,
we noticed that the trees were very important to us,
I just want to say sorry we are soo sorry,
Do you want to know what we cut them off?
Well let me tell you,
We cut them off because of the money,
we were too greedy,
i wanna say sorry,
sorry because we were being greedy,
Now look at the countries,
some of the countries are now poor because they were being greedy,
I’m so sorry,
We also realized that the ocean was full of rubbish,
Why would they do that?,
Now let me tell you,
The ocean is now full of rubbish that means few ocean animals died,
see look what we did,
im soo sorry i just wanted to get money,
Thats why we cut of the trees,
trees were very important,
Do you want to know why the trees are very important?,
Because you can grow some fruits,
just like oranges,apples and other fruits that you grow on the tree,
Sorry dear future generations (based on Dear Future Generations)
Dear future generations,
I’m sorry.
I’m sorry that we.
Decided to treat our planet this way.
I know we didn’t want it to go this way.
For example by burning all the trees we don’t realise how much gas is polluting our clean, precious air.
Some of us don’t realise how precious the air is to us sometimes we don’t realise how were treating it.
For example the Amazon Rain Forest.
It used to be a forest with fresh air and a bunch of trees now its merely a desert.
Why?
Because its all for one thing and that’s money.
People are really getting rid of our air for money.
You know what i’m not sorry because we were the ones that did this.
We destroyed our own environment.
That’s why I leave this to the future generations.
I hope the future generations can carry on our dreams.
This is all in your hands future generations
Future (based on future generations)
Dear future generations
I’m sorry we didn’t care about you
I’m sorry we destroyed all the good things we had
like trees and water
Sorry we weren’t responsible to look after
are world like it is now a big ball of junk
Sorry.
Sorry ,sorry we destroyed all the trees
sorry we weren’t thinking
we was just being mean
Every time we do it loosing
trees that is why we are just being mean
it time to get it right
it’s time to do it right
which is why we should do it right,
before it comes to a end.
It’s up to us to do it right
it is now time before it junk
so keep the streets clean
before it destroys
so we got to stop littering the streets
like can’t you keep the streets neat?
Just stop do you think you are doing something right?
Look around there’s plastic on the street
Do you think it is OK?
No,no it not so
care
Powerful ending Donika.
a lot of typing, good effort
Dear future (based on dear future generations)
Dear future generation,
I’m sorry for cutting down 50%
Of the trees.
Which is why i am so sorry to tell you that,
We did for profet in stead of helping people.
I’m sorry for the pollution,
I’m sorry the climate change.
Do you know about the amazon desert?
It was once called the amazon rain forest.
Wait you don’t know do you yes,
Sorry we are sorry to tell you that
We burned them we used machines and we
Destroyed 50% of all trees gone
You know i’m not sorry
Let me suggest that you,
Be like farmers look at the roots and not the leaves
So i’m not sorry
You should stop chucking things in the oceans ,
You should stop copping down trees
We can grow it back
We can do it we are nature
so stop just just stop with everything.
Sorry.
Life is like a game
you never know what life your gonna get
a game is like a mode
which one are you gonna get
3 modes are your destiny to experience
or to live forever and ever 1 frown 2 smile 3 usual
you can change life it will be easy peezy lemon squeezy
when we try our best to succide
nice Suhalia
Good job bouba i like how you said you don’t know how many chapters there are
Future generation (based on future generation)
Sorry we left with a mess of a planet
I’m sorry that they cut trees down
You probably don’t even know what trees are
Sorry we put people in front to do nothing
Sorry we were greedy when we never needy
Wait no, cut the beat
I’ll go a capella
Because this is about positivity and priority
And if you don’t have that you don’t have loyalty
To the trees, to the planet
To the people
I really like the switch in tone half way through Tommy.
i like how you rhymed it in the second paragraph
oh my dear friend
life is like a flower
you never know what petal is going to fall off next
there may be growing thorns coming your way but just ignore them and throw them away
there are ups and downs that you have to go through but at the end there is a surprise waiting for you
if you push along more and more and throw away those bad comments that come to you
just push them away whenever they come back
b brave stand up for yourself
your not a toy
you have heart and feeling too
if you stay low your going to be scared but if you aim high
you will stand there
as i said life ain’t no perfect flower for anyone
we all have ups and downs
but you just need to keep your had up and push them away
so life is a flower
Thank you Alina. The flower simile works wetland you develop the poem with subtlety.
Thank you
really like how u made it rhyme
i am from fifa
from bikes and holidays
i am from funny and helpful
i am from a lion which makes noise
i am from england
pasta and nazy
i am from rollocoasters
im from be quiet
and love you
i am from sports
football
“never give up”
I am from fifa
from thomas the tank engine and holidays
I am from funny and smart
I am from a tiger which is fierce
I am from Mauritius
from chicken and ice cream
I’m from you’re smart
and I love you
Here
I am from sporty
Football
Bring me up
Where I’m From
———————-
I am from Disney
from ‘Bambi’ and ‘Dumbo’
I am from funny and loud
I am from the seaside(my favourite place)
I am from Romania
from chicken,noodle soup and shepherds pie
I am from riding a horse all day
I’m from ‘never say never’
I am from ‘ Burito’
seaside at sunset
never give up
i am from games
from toys and games
i am from kindness and happiness
i am from bridge
i am from London
I am from fashion
from teletubbies and the myth momo
i am from funny and crazy
i am from lizards
(two lizards who sadly died. RIP)
i am from a birth pool,
curry and saltfish.
i am from barbie dolls.
i am from tiggy bum
and ‘in the name of father. sun and the holy spirit’
Super ending Taegan. You capture many different aspects of who you are.
I am from rice addictions
from small rooms & large houses
I am from activeness & friendly people
I am from ferocious tigers rading forests
I am from fields, beryani’s and pati-bola
I am from playing with random kids
I’m from being good and scaredy cats
I am from praying five times a day
from villages and dangerous women :0
Super poem Alisha
i am from football and fifa and i specific ordinary item realating to know from funny and good at sports two specific ordanary items to the past i am fromi had anerf gun and was playing toys
we are together (we are united)
Me and everyone else we fight for,
Fairness we are a community,
Together we live together if we are united with each other,
It’s not hard to believe,
Boy or girl,
White or black,
Gay or not,
We are still connected,
As a community.
We are the worlds neighbour
So this is how we can help everyone
We can BE KIND
We can make our community greater
If we help
So this is how we can be united
making our communities better
Making our communities,helpful
You can give charities cloths
Money instead of throwing away
Your ripped or bad cloths charities
Need it a lot more
global citizen
while we might all be alone
you could go out there
and help someone out there
and on the way pick up any rubish
fighting for rasim, LGBTQ+ or anything
and any little helps
Where i’m from
I am from sunny Jamaica
and no means no land
and football Friday
I am from my 1st birthday
and chicken Saturday
and my 1st Christmas
I am from Cousins birthday
and a limo rolling on the road
Ah a “limo rolling the road”. A super image to end your poem with.
(where i’m from)
i am from
chicken and chips on the weekend
and seeing my family on Christmas day
i am from
going to Tenerife every year
and
i am from where people say easy peasy lemon squeezy
i remember when i had a baby cousin born
Thank you Jack. I like the way you capture voices in your poem.
It’s hard to believe what can’t be believed in
to stick by are community is our role as a true citizen
you can’t change what can’t be changed
but we can be great
we can’t do all of this
we should we should be UNITED
Once again
United way
We are the worlds shield.
We determine what happens here.
Distruction , littering and polution.
This all has to come to a close.
We have to be good global citizens.
We have to stop this mess.
This lovely world dosen’t to deserve this.
We should care about our world.
We should keep our lovely sky and seas.
And stop using petrol transport.
Be a good global citizen.
united way
you think your alone but you always have your
friend and family with you
we are the world global citzen
we are always fighting
to make world better
making are comunites safer
so can live in peace with no harm
Deep down we are altogether,
All forever.
Making our community stronger,
Then our hopes will be higher.
Somewhere someone is experiencing the same,
We are all equal.
In a equal world.
Be a good citizen for the world you live in,
You are the world’s citizen,
It is your choice to be good.
I am begging you to be a good citizen,
PLEASE!!!!!!!
A lovely message Duaa.
Where I’m From
I am from duck wings in China.
And making my youtube channel.
Playing in my birthday partys.
I am from gaming.
I am from editing videos.
And christmas partys.
Surprises of ipads.
I am from microsoft coding.
And making games.
And a gaming clothes designer.
And weekends shushi.
Thank you Ray. I love the opening line.
Altogether Now (based on United Way)
Making our communities better,
Fighting to stop discrimnation
It’s easy to be a good citizen,
You just need to help others
We should come together,
We should live in harmony
Global Citizens.
Its hard to be a Global Citizen,
But we will do our best,
We will always fight for the world,
We are never gonna let the world down!
But i have a question,
How can we be a good Citizens??
Let me give you an answer,
To be a good Citizen you have to look after the world
and also For example if your neighbour is ill you will have to help them
because if you dont help them then it its a bad thing,
You have to look after the world,neighbours,family,friends,
Thats the answer of how to be a good citizen,
Always remember to Look after your things and the world and
EVERYTHING!!!!!.:^)
Belive Based on United way
While we might be all alone
And it can be hard to cope
Everywhere around the world
Is a neighbour next door
Who would give a warm welcome
Or a frosty greeting
On the dear planet earth
Is a friend in need knocking at the door
It’s better to be united
Then blown by a thunder storm
Somewhere another cheer
Or another yell
But we are earth’s community
All in one not one apart
its easy to be pessimistic
But the worlds a wonderful mystery
Nice isaaq I see you worked hard
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united way
Together were united
But we will stand
To fight for global eqality
To have equal rights
So we can all be the same
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Title: Global Citizen(Based on Amanda Gorman is The creator of the poem United Away)
It’s hard in a world full of corruption
Unless you have hope I can cooperate without hope but I survive
We need to FIGHT for racism fight while we’re FIGHTING for life
Fighting for nature fighting for
OUR PRICE FIGHTING for the gold fighting for the the world
SINCE I KNOW IN THE END THAT WE
WILL REUNITE
FIGHTING for the people fighting for their life’s BECAUSE IN THE END
WE WILL FIGHT
Very powerful poem Denzel. A rousing message.
MY UNITED WORLD
You,we are the ones
keeping the world alive
If we stay united we will
glide like the wings of a bird
This is my way,
This is my time
And it is our world
So don’t ruin it
Make it grow
Make the world better
Making the communities better by picking up the litter
Be kind to one another
Every time we can donate to one another
While we might be alone
We will apart of home
It time to be kind and thoughtful of others
It time to get better and helpful to one another
Les driving car more riding bikes
I’t better to keep safe and keep it great
So listen care keep it fare
where i’m from
I am from AC untd
from the macdees king
to micky macky boo baa boo
and bob the builder can he fix it
I’m from saturday match at arsenal
against rubish teams like Norich
That made me smile Tommy. Thank you.
Dear future
I speak for the rest of us when I say
Sorry we left you in a mess of a planet
sorry we were to caught up in our own buisness
sorry we listened to people who do nothing
I hope you forgive us
we didn’t realize how special the earth was
Like a marrige gone wrong
we didn’t know want we had untill it was gone
Thank you for sharing your poem Roni.
You make a powerful message
Based on we are united
Seperation causes destruction
We are miles away from reproduction
United we stand divided we fall
We will make equality for all
Different gender does not matter
For we are one
Hate empty heart full
United we stand divided we fall
Our friendship is a maze
One side is good, one is bad
We make decisions that tear us apart or glue us together
You are not alone for we are one even if your far or close you are not alone
Electric Scooter (Based on where I’m from)
I am from Xaiomi 1S Electric Scooters
From a safe electric world
I am from Arthur Hugo Cecil Gibson
I am from someone who has a big and smart brain
(Less pollution, less deaths)
Xaiomi Home controls me for how fast I go
I am from Bluetooth
Charge and use
I am from a charging socket
And I will never switch to fuel
AND NOW
I am from 1S and Pro 2’s
Thank you Nathan. Your interest in technology shines through.
I’m from Nissan GTR
from little puppies and teddy bears
I’m from loud, weirdo and angry
I’m from cars
taking nice pictures with them
I’m from Kosovo and prishtina
macaroni and pizza
I’m from Peppa pig, Wolly and Tig and Ben and Holly’s little Kingdom
I’m from clean your room and share
and Billie Eilish
“Isn’t lovely all alone heart made of glass my mind of stone tear me to pices skin and bone hello welcome home”
Fascinating poem Alina. What do the last lines refer to?
where i’m from (based on where I’m from)
I am from electric scooters
from small houses and family meals
I am from loud and fun
I am from parks
(having fun and enjoying myself)
I am from Ireland
from lots of cousins and family
I am from pizza and chips
I am from skateboarding
I’m from habits of mind
and striving for accuracy and precision
alone
I am from a community
from a community
I am from music
Thank you Courtney. We get a sense of who you are.
Dear Future Generations ( based on future generations)
Dear future generations
I’m sorry for not saving the melting ice-caps
While we had the chance
I’m sorry that we have too much water that we don’t use
Sorry we have turned our Earth into a desert
No food to eat
No water to drink
Sorry about the Amazon Rain desert
It used to be called the Amazon Rain forest
It was full of green
Glossy leaves
Unruly bushes
Lurching trees
And bursts of colourful wildflowers
It was a explosion of nature
Now it’s all gone
Some people say,
Like Sara Palin
They love the smell of toxic fossil fuel
Well I dare you to go to Beijing
And if you still haven’t saw it
Kids have to where pollution masks
Just to go to school
Sorry.
Where I’m from (based on where I am from)
I’m from red buses,
To pink barbie dolls,
I am from passionate to entertaining,
I’m from orange foxes,
From aunties to uncles,
I’m from chicken and rice,
I am from playing in the park,
I’m from if you want the rainbow you have to put up with the rain.
Some lovely contrasts here Shady.
Old family (based on where I’m from)
I am from all my old teddy’s from family,
from all the toys and hugs from the past,
I am from the starcasim and jokes,
I am from all the plants in my home that would prance and sing and thy where just like my friends and family,My home is my memory,my home is family,
I am from all the traditional foods like Köfte and Sarma,
I am from calling family with remotes
Super poem Rozerin. I like the expressions you use and the different aspects of yourself you reveal.
From my jamaica (based on where i’m from)
I am from indigo class
From teddy
from loud and happy, funny
I am from joyful and no
I am from electric scooter(because its fast and fun to ride)
I am from home; can be a place of birth and love
Great poems everyone who made one.
Great poems. I wish I could have of sent my one but I don’t have it with me. If you love poems follow your dream and become a poet if you want.
Amazing peom
A sweet and lovely poem.
Fighting for lives,
Fighting for hope
It’s hard to cope when you don’t have hope,
How can you breath if you don’t have air?
That’s why we don’t cut down trees,
Somewhere, another plastic bag is being thrown in the ocean,
Somewhere, another plastic bag is being taken out of the ocean,
Every time I look at someone cutting down a tree I feel like I’m in a nightmare,
So let’s wake up out of this nightmare and realise reality.
Its hard to hope, to get our enchanted planet
better.
Its hard to hope
for our dreams to come true
and
to make people learn and manage there behaviour, like cutting down
trees with villainous, sinful
brutal machines,
deforestation…
Evil people have stealth as a tiger.
Good people are smooth as a glider, pure as a melody, pure as I wanna be…
Where Im from,
I am from a busy place in London. From a huge,red Archway
bridge. I am from a school up the hill of Archway.
Big, grey buildings surround me as I walk down the street. Next to the well known Whittington hospital. The red,huge buses passing me
in Archway.
Dear future Generations,
I’m sorry, sorry not a SINGLE person cared about you and
cut you down as if you never had feelings.
Not everyone is sorry but most of us are. You were as beautiful
as how the Amazon Rain Forest was.
The earth is heating up FAST. The animals are going extinct
and there is nothing without them.
The ocean is filled with OUR
FILTH. Because we were too lazy to
throw a piece of trash in a bin when it was
only THREE feet away from us.
Sorry nobody ever cared about you.
Please forgive us even if it is too late
and you are fading away
SLOWLY…
ALL OF US are sorry for making these gorgeous, friendly
animals make them lose there home
but it’s too late they are about to go
EXTINCT!
Sorry, sorry we cut you down when all you wanted to do was create a happy,healthy
life..
SORRY
Goodbye.
Where I’m from
I’m from the bus stop down the road
And big, grey buildings surround me
While I walk down the street
From markets to homes
As I walk under Archway bridge
the red, ginormous place
Where cars go by
And time flies
When I’m in Archway
Because you’ve never seen a place like Archway
Big and bold
And most of the time It’s cold
Because London is not that close to the equator
And when I’m in London
I feel safer
well done fowzia
Its hard to get together,its easy to get together,
Come lets get together ,
or it will be like this forever,
Recycle forever,
lets get together,
help me be kind,
help me be kind,
help me be kind,
lets use our mind,
I can hear the screaming sea ,
put the key in and open your mind
im sorry that earth was as beatiful as a flower growing in the sun but we sadly destroyed it but this is an apoligy for are inresponsible actions we hope u forgive us we just treated earth like a drawing in the sand on the beach being washed up by the sea. If only we could perswaid other people to start helping the earth with us. All iniccont animals wont be here stading here with us think,how much have we took frome them. They have helped us and think how fun is it to have them as pets and discover them but not we have to destroy that for them! HELP SAVE THE WORLD!!!!!
It’s hard to imagine a world with out trees
hard to imagine a ocean with loads and loads of rubbish in it
At this moment a tree is being cut down
At this moment a tree is being planted
To imagine were cutting a million trees a day
shocks me
people are killing animal homes
cutting down the life that gives us oxygen
WHY FOR?
MONEY!!!!!!!!!!!!
At this moment a piece of rubbish is being shucked in the ocean
At this moment a piece of rubbish is taken out of the ocean
it is hard to persuade people to stop doing these thing that are killing are Earth
it is hard to cope
it is hard to hope
WERE FIGHTING FOR LIVES
SO LETS FIGHT TOGETHER TO SAVE OUR PLANET!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dear Future Generations,
Sorry,sorry that our oceans are crying,
Why?
Because we keep on throwing plastic in our oceans,
Earth our Earth is slowly fading away,
Why?
because of pollution,
Cars,buses and factory’s the create pollution
TELL ME WHY? YOU WANT TO LIVE IN THIS HORRIBLE WORLD!
The air is as dirty as trash,
Before,lush,green trees
After,nothing
Are you sure you want to live in this world with pollution and trash on the roads?
‘No’, well me to…its time to make a difference in the WORLD,
Its time to end this nightmare…
Dear Future Generations,
Sorry, sorry that we made the Earth smell like a bin
Sorry that we made the Earth as hot as larva
Sorry that we listened to people who made excuses
To do nothing
Before we had trees
They gave us oxygen and…
oh
You probably don’t know much about trees do you?
It’s because we cut them down Why?
For money
Dear future generations,
Im sorry. Im sorry that the earth is hot as lava.
Im sorry that the earths heart is fading away. Im sorry our earth is getting destroyed by brutal trucks that cut down trees.
I hope you forgive us for everything we did to your planet.
We cut and burned the beautiful trees
down. they gave
us oxygen,food and mostly everything. There was a place called the Amazon Rainforest.
There was billions of trees there
so lush but
now its just a hot,dry desert.
The Rainforest was as lush asthousands of trees combined.into one.
(based on were im from)
I’m from hot cabas for after school diners
I’m from a wall of alimpion awards
and im from an amaganary world of of sports
I’m from pancacs for breakfast
And a world of family memorys
i’m from a happy neighborhood….
But im also from a world of rainy days
i’m also from a cold polooted world
I’m from a virus spreading quickly
and from a world of pain
and hate
i’m from a bench were is sit alone
with a sand witch in my face
i’m from a world of scary imaginations
i’m from a world of paitions
paitions that overcome
i’m from a land of love and break up
and a land with no hope left at all
I am from
I am from the streets of Archway,
And from the cuteness of bunnies,
Also I’m from the endless books from the library,
I am from the endless ,
Amount of taste of fast food,
And I am from the Hargrave gang,
I am the captain of Paddington,
I am from the gym you need to get the gains and on the grind,
Dodging all of the trash tag ruby players,
I am just going to TRY on your team!!
I am from Sunday macdonalds
And Christmas dinner round the table
I am from I want don’t get
And daily biking
To nans secret reicpe
I am from weekend pizza
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i am from chilly noodles and Ramadan,
i am from every single year beach,
I am from Eid,
We dress up get ready,with makeup and hairstyles,
And with jeans and shiny shoes and golden earrings.
I am from finish your food.
i am from Friday Football.
From my life (based on where I’m from)
I am from Saturday football matches.
From ‘no means no to ‘break a leg!’
I’m from holidays in Scotland
from sushi weekend
and belgian waffles
I’m from horse riding every year
from coming home to see the cats
I am from the basement we always used to run from
and the attic we always used to hide in.
From fancy dresses to white nike shoes and comfy leggings
i am from christmas day to running downstairs to look for presents
From trick or treating on the 31st of october
I am from my life.
Lovely poem Molly. We get a sense of who you are.
Global citizenship (based on the world)
Its hard to trust,it’s hard to cope with damage
While we might be all alone in the darkness
When other people are around
It makes my days brighter
Equality
No matter your race,gender or if you have a disability
We are all the worlds neighbour
You don’t have to fit in
to be loved
Because you are here you matter
we are community
we will remember,(poem for rememberance day)
In Flanders Fieldes,
near the popies and crosses,
they lie,they say what they will be forgoten,
every petatal that falls is a new memorys
that never forgotten ever since the 11th in the book of memory’s
Remembrance day (based on remembrance day)
In Flanders field we will remember
People who weren’t there November
Near the crosses grow
They poppies blow
Sorrow crosses between peoples hearts
That’s how we know that they will always be remembered
In Flanders Field,
Where red grows,
Beneath the ground soldiers lie,
Underneath the big, blue skies,
We will remember them.
Remberance day ( based on remberance day)
In Flanders fields
the poppies grow
the crosses lie to row to row
filling my mind memory forever
for the people
who fought for us
we shall not for get where the poppies grow
It’s lovely to see you exploring “In Flanders’ Fields”. It’s a wonderful poem.
thats a very good poem
life is a cake every slice a new slice is a hole mystery something good or bad
Life is like a game you can win or lose, life is like the lottery what happens is random life isn’t the titanic, good things can happen
Life is like a parachute not knowing when to deploy.
When its broken, it falls straight to the ground like a plane about to crash.
life isn’t easy as a cakewalk, its hard as rough, boiling stone
You can get lost easily not knowing when to go back or, where to go next.
Life is like a optical illusion twisting and turning and you can never stop.
It is like a random generated maze made by steel and wood,
Never to be ever broken…
Listen,
Life is like a parachute, you wont know when it will deploy, but life isn’t a castle it more like a maze, twisting and turning and it feels like it will never end.
One day it will end and its time to go, so make as much fuss as life Until you go into the light.
it might be scary but don’t flee, just be responsible and be free!
Life is like an endless video tape going on loop
A long video on repeat never ending
In a dark room with no one to help you
With shadows covering you
When shivers past your spine
With a box of chocolate your mum gave you
When you feel better after craving something sweet
Life… is like being stuck in a reality TV show
Listen kids,
When you’re young life may seem like a piece of chocolate,sweet and delightful.
But life ain’t no magical forest.
Life is more like a knife,when it hurts you,you cry,it might be in the dark or it might be in the light.
Either way life ain’t no fairy tale book,
It’s more like a horror story.
So remember,life ain’t no strawberry shortcake,it’s more like stale cake.
Life is like an adventure,full of surprise,and full of nice,kind and caring people and is short and sweet like and is also like a game of charades every word is a guest
Life is like a grave
scary and down hearted
Life is like an endless hole
if you fall inside
you’ll cry and die
Life is like an acrostic poem
short and sweet
Life is like a deleted picture
loved and missed
Life is life
its hard sometimes but nice
it will always be okay
because its just life
life is like a water floating in the air life is a endless dark black cage
duster that will never go away like a dream lying on the floor
Life is like scissors,
Your life gets cut at some point,
and you had a nice time while it was.
Life is like data,
it keeps your memories safe,
and it can get deleted.
Life is like emotions,
it changes a lot.
Life is like a story,
it has a start,
and it finally ends.
Life is like a flower bud, you never know if it will bloom or if it will stay hidden inside, hiding from reality.
Life is like a lucky dip, your name could be picked or not,
Life is like a protest, people may join you with your fight or they might be against you,
Life is like a roller coaster, you will go up and you will go down.
The message is life is hard right? But people are here for you, to pick you up when you are down. :))
its very hard to keep freinds with you so you have to be careful from making them mad so always be nice.
Life is like a light bulb, you can’t see the right way until you turn it on.
Life is like a beautiful plant, ready to bloom anytime.
Life is like a bell tower, ticking constantly, waiting for the right time to ring.
Life is like a cliff, waiting to erode because of the beautiful flowing waves.
Life is like a mystery,
You don’t know what could happen in the next 10 minutes.
It could be surprising unknown and even unexpected
It could be long and it could be short,
You never know until it shows.
Life could be harm
It could be sweet
My Ordinary Life
I come from a generation of black people,
Who are nice, funny and sometimes angry,
I like to relax, cook and play on my PlayStation 5,
I love my family and spending time with them,
I do almost everything with them and I like my me time
because I can read in peace,
My favourite food is lobster, shrimp and rice,
I want to do boxing but my mum,
I get into a lot of fights with my brother.
This is who I am,
This is my life.
From J.C
competition entry
Dear people,
I am ten years old and not mean
I’ve always liked the sea
I live in London but my back round country is Nigeria
My favourite subject at school is History
But I still like a mystery
I like to read
But not to lead
My favourite holiday is Christmas
But I still like Easter
I have many friends that care about me
I’ve been sad many times but not angry
I hope you like me the way I am
Thank you for listening to me the way I am.
Hi Alero,
Which school are you from? You need to post this in the school page.
Hello,
Alero is from Sacred Heart Catholic Primary School.
Good poem 🙂
competition entry:
I am who i am and that’s who i’ll be
I am the only one and the original me
blooming stars reflecting the water
related to a priest yes i’m his granddaughter
our country so strong we fought for independence
I am me and that’s who i’ll always be
sometimes i question whats the real me
my name means blossom in my language
blossoming flowers on the mountains
who am i and what will i be when i grow up
i answered all the questions that’ll sum it up
i am me and i might have luck
what i need in a family is love and trust
I’m from football is life
I’m from one of the icons Johan Cruyff
I’m from happiness
I’m from games
Like FIFA
I’m from north
Islington
I’m African don’t forget
I’m from Spurs/Tottenham Hotspur
I’m from Son Heung-Min
I’m from… 🙂
I, for one has had a bad past
However, one can change.
I have worked on my behaviour
As i am good now.
I found it hard but ive changed
you will always succeed if you believe
you can change everything.
Humans Love
A warm shower on a cold night
A walk on a sunny day, with their family and friends.
But, is this it?
Surely not
We’re all different in our own ways.
So for example, maybe you might love praying
Or maybe even seeing somebody you hate!
Anyway the thing is, we all have crazy opinions!
Come on don’t lie!
Maybe you might even like experiencing something horrifying.
Or more!
I am from rice and fields
With floods and danger
From pati-bola and rice cakes
With spicy curry and chicken
From friends with everyone in the village
From eating together for a feast in Ramadan
From celebrating Eid together
With colourful clothes and yummy foods
From pilau rice and biryanis 😀
I am from Bangladesh
Where I’m from(edited):
I’m from Roblox and Genshin Impact
from Teletubbies & Monster High
I am from quiet & artistic
I am from fish
(a nice fish I had named bob)
I am from an apartment
Ramen & pot noodles
I am from Ireland, Turkey and England
Having a sucuk once in a while
I am from anime
and my cringe gacha phase
specifically songs like legends never die
here, I am from silly and truthful fun!
I am from an apartment
and this is my fun!
im from football
from family and fiffa 22
im from funny and helpful
im from lion
i am from North London.
burgur and pizza
im from picking up woodlice
im from “i love you”
and by my self”
i am from aries
i am from ‘never give up’
i am from football
from family and Fifa
i am from funny and caring
i am from tiger
i am from north London
i am from pizza and pasta
i am from picking up woodlice
i am from “I love you ”
and alone with you
i am from aquarius
i am from “never give up”
im from football
from family and fifa 22
im from funny and helpful
im from lion
i am from North London.
burgers and pizza
im from picking up woodlice
im from “i love you”
and by my self”
i am from aries
i am from ‘never give up’
I am here to address,
be who you can be whilst your still young.
Follow your inner moonlight,
dont hide the madness.
Nobody can predict the future,
so the beest preparation is doing your best for today.
And this is why,
I take responsibility for my actions,
both good and bad.
The painting is really nice and I like it because it shows that the left side is rich and the right side is poor. It was interesting to find out about the painting and the artist.
I’m glad you enjoyed studying the painting Grayson.
we have learnt about a painting called the old london bridge it was