Hi all,
We hope you enjoy the final poem by Bronte.
As always, please share your wonderful responses and opinions on the poem with us.
Soon you’ll be receiving the details of this year’s competition and you’ll start to work on your own poem.
Hi all,
We hope you enjoy the final poem by Bronte.
As always, please share your wonderful responses and opinions on the poem with us.
Soon you’ll be receiving the details of this year’s competition and you’ll start to work on your own poem.
The turquoise sea is swaying round me,
The warm wind is gently blowing,
But an exotic spell binds me,
And I desperately don’t want to go.
The tropical emerald green trees are swaying gently,
The delicate golden sand,
The scorching sun is shining down brightly
And I desperately don’t want to go.
Heaven beyond heaven looks down on me
Paradise beyond paradise holds me below,
Nothing can prevent me from seeing the sea
And so I cannot go.
Its yery goooooooooooood.
The trees swiftly swayed,
The sapphire blue sea looked wonderful,
The trees were blinded with colourful leaves,
The sun quickly entered the emerald sky,
I can go, can go.
The mysterious, serious sea
It had a black deep hole,
The fishes swam but couldn’t find the key.
I can go, can go.
Monkeys munching,
Parrots squawking,
Bears crunching,
I can go, can go.
sevgi’s poem
The trees swiftly swayed,
The sapphire blue sea looked wonderful,
The trees were blinded with colourful leaves,
The sun quickly entered the emerald sky,
I can go, can go.
The mysterious, serious sea
It had a black deep hole,
The fishes swam but couldn’t find the key.
I can go, can go.
Monkeys munching,
Parrots squawking,
Bears crunching,
I can go, can go.
Sevgi’s second poem
Life is like a family group,
Think about your brothers they’ve always loved you,
They probably took care of you when you was younger,
They are nice bigger and there kind to you,
Always think about your family,
There the ones who played with you,
Think about them,
Life is like a family group because we have different relationships.
Inspired by E Bronte
The turquoise sea is swaying around me,
The warm wind whispers softly,
An exotic smell binds me,
And I desperately don’t want to go.
The beautiful sound of trees blowing,
The irresistible sight of the saphire sea,
And the sumptuous taste of coconuts cracking,
And I desperately don’t want to go.
Sun beyond sun over me,
Sand beyond sand below,
But nothing drear can move me,
And I desperately don’t want to go.
by Zeynel pakeman primary
well done i think you used good vocabulary and organized your stanzas very well
Paradise
The sapphire sea is swaying around me,
The bright light does love to shine,
But the ecstatic spell has bound me,
I desperately don’t want to say bye.
Emerald green trees bend upon me,
Their leaves stay above me,
And the sand will always be below my feet,
Yet I cannot let myself see.
Light blue sky above me,
Wastes beyond wastes below,
But nothing can move me,
I will not, cannot go.
rain water
by the schoolyard,
whistle-pipe, and played a tune.
Its head
summer heat.
they heard the
bear with burning coat of fur,
they paid a penny
aching eyes,
the poppies blow
mark our place;
the guns are dead.
short days sunset glow,
loved ones were loved,
the torch;
hold it
though
boards torn up,
all the time
and reachin’ landin’s
set down
still climin’
crystal spell
cannot.
bending
i cannot go.
cannot go.
I wrote this poem because it is full of mysterious things and that you want to know more. And that you think that it is full of things you want to know about. because we used non capital letters unconventional grammar.
Circus life
Beside the
White chickens, my mother saw a dancing bear
And played a tune
And all the children
Laughed
And then, my mother said,
“the bear with the burning coat!”
They paid a penny for the dance
Still bravely singing,
Sunset glow,
Hands we throw
Hold it high
We shall not sleep
Though.
I wrote this poem because… it is an inspiration to mothers and kids to circus life because most of the time animals take the show.
so much depends upon,
white chickens ,by the schoolyard,
the keeper stood,
lifted up his head and lifted up his dusty feet ,and all the children watched it march. they heard him
as he cried, `Now, roly-poly! somersault !`.
they paid a penny for the dance, but what saw was not the show.
I wrote this poem because its different from other poems.
A red wheel barrow,
saw
the keeper play a tune
in the summer heat.
I wrote this poem because it makes me thing of something happy
a red wheel barrow
saw a dancing bear
they watched it march they watched it halt.
“Now roly – poly somersault!”
A red wheel barrow
Saw a
Whistle-pipe
laughed to see summer heat.
The keeper cried
For the dance.
The larks, still bravely singing.
I wrote this poem because I wanted to make the reader feel alive
Red wheel barrow with white chickens
Saw a dancing bear by the schoolyard
White a chain and brand and whitest-pipe
And played a tune all the children laugh
When the Queen dead they heard the keeper
Cried my friend said we are the dead. And now
We li in Flanders’s field.
I wrote this poem because I like it
a red wheel barrow
saw a dancing bear
they watched it march they watched it halt.
“Now roly – poly somersault!”
I wrote this poem because I wanted to amuse the reader.
a red wheelbarrow
glazed with rain water
By a the schoolyard,
a day in June.
The keeper stood with chain and bar
And lifted up his dusty feet,
And all the children laughed to see
The summer heat
They watched it somersault
And then my mother said:
In Flanders field the poppy’s blow
Guns below.
We are dead
We throw the crystal stair
Don’t go.
I am writing this because we can do anything with a random poem.
So much depends upon a
A dancing bear
With chain and bar and whistle pipe
Lifted up its dusty feet
As for the queen it died
The keeper he cried
Now
We are the dead short days ago we lived
Sunset glow
And now we lie in Flanders Fields
The torch
Yours to hold it high
If break faith we shall not sleep
Though poppies grow in Flanders Fields.
The reason I wrote this poem is because I think it’s important to remember things and to remember everything good that has happened.
BY AICHA
a dancing bear by the schoolyard,
lifted up its dusty feet ,and all the children
laughed
and then
only in bruins eyes,far distant forests, and the snow
flanders in the sky
I wrote this poem because you can see what the bear sees.
So much depends upon
My mother
Dancing
Stood in chains
And all the children laughed
They watched in halt
My mother said
They paid a penny for the dance
I wrote this poem because the red wheel barrow inspired me.
Water
By the schoolyard ,a day in
June
And all the children
Laughed in the summer heat.
They head,
Shaming laughter
But what they saw was only
, far distant forests,
In Flander field
We lived,
In Flander field
We shall not sleep
In Flander field
No crystals
No carpet
And
No light
Its kinder hard
Life for me
A tyrant spell bound me
I cannot go
Beyond
I wrote this poem because it is a new type of poem and I wanted to try it.
MY BLACK OUT PEOM.
The Story Of Truth
Glazed with rain
By the the schoolyard,
The keeper stood and played a tune.
Lifted up its dusty feet, all the children
Laughed in the summer heat. they watched it
March. watched it halt .heard the keeper
Cry, ‘Now, roly-poly!Somersault!’ ,there came
The keeper begging The bear with burning coat of fur,shaming
Laughter to a stop.Paid a penny for the dance,what they saw was not
Not the show;bruin’s aching eyes,Far-distant forests,and snow.In
Fields the poppies blow row on row,mark
Our place;Loved were loved,now we lie in Flanders fields
From failing hands we throw The torch
Yours to hold it high. Break faith with us die We shall not sleep,
Poppies grow in Flanders fields. Son,I’ll tell you:Life for me
Been no crystal stair.It’s had splinters, And boards torn up,
With no carpet on the floor
Sometimes
Dark ain’t been no light.So boy,don’t turn back. Don’t
I chose these words because they meant something to me, they weren’t like any other words, it seemed like they were telling a story. That’s how I chose my title.
I hope you liked this black out poem, I also hope you got what I was picturing.
I like how I put the poem together.
So much depends upon a
dancing bear
with chain and bar.
All the children
Laughed to see ,
It march.
And then , my mother said,
‘keeper with a begging – cup,’
“Stop!”
But what they saw
In bruin ‘s aching eyes
Flanders fields the poppies blow
In the sky
We are the Dead.
THE GLAZING WATER
Glazed with water
By the children against the summer heat
They watched as for the keeper cried “now somersault”
The bear with burning coat of fur saw that he had aching eyes
The snow in our place and in the sky bravely singing
“we lived and loved and we shall sleep”
Well you been no places with no light
Don’t turn back don’t fall now
The wild winds but I cannot cannot go
The giant trees are bending with snow
The storm is fast descending
And yet I cannot go.
I wrote my poem like this because it meant something to me.
The turquoise sea,
is swaying round me,
The warm wind is
gently,Blowing but
an exotic spell has
bound me And l
desperately don’t
want to go.
The beautiful sea,
that in tropical,
paradise, but the,
shining saphire,
blue sea is,
making me,
go hotter and
hotter,but l still,
don’t want to go,
I think the poem was realy good it made me think about the poem and the setting
so much depends upon a dancing bear by the school yard in June lifted up its head and lifted up its dusty feet and all the children laughed to see it march. They paid a penny for the dance, But what they saw was not the show. In Flanders fields the poppies blow between the crosses, row on row, That mark our place.
I wrote this because to remember the soldiers that fought for our country.
This is my annotated poem,
aching eyes
to you from failing hands we throw
reaching landings and turning corners
The night darkening and the srom fast descendind
yet nothing can move !
all depends on a dancing bear and all the children laght to see it roly poly. by nawal
this is my poem,
aching eyes
to you from failing hands we throw the torch,
reaching landings and turning corners.
The night darkening and the storm fast descending,
yet nothing can move!