Hi all,
I hope you enjoyed studying Landseer’s Hawking in the Olden Times.
Please share your thoughts and ideas with us here.
Hi all,
I hope you enjoyed studying Landseer’s Hawking in the Olden Times.
Please share your thoughts and ideas with us here.
Ridwan’s writing, the right way up!
well done Ridwan for your splendid writing keep up the good way!!
Hi Ridwan
You are very good at drawing. As a result, your letter is marvellous to look at.
Ridwan i really like your work
Hi Ridwan,
Congratulations on your letter.
You use description well to paint the scene that unfolds.
It’s interesting that you found the scene disturbing. Do you think the figures in the painting would have felt the same?
Not everyone has finished their writing yet but I was so impressed by the quality of Kaan’s writing I had to share it. He had a very clear beginning and ending to his letter. Unfortunately the ending was on another page in his book.
“…I dreamt that they were in house alive, hugging me.”
Also he used some shorter sentences for effect.
HI Kiann,
Thank you for sharing your detailed letter with us.
I like the way you’ve focused on the moment we see in the painting but also the before (journey from the tent) and afterwards (return home). It’s impressive you can build a story beyond the painting.
Keep up the hard work!
Due to the fact that you used lots of openers i think your writting is amazing
hi michael walsh my name is actually kaan not kiann
Apologies Kaan.
we did that
Thank you very much for liking my writing Michael walsh
I like how the heren was flying