Dear all,
Please share your writing, thoughts and knowledge on the Gainsborough’s portrait of John Joseph Merlin.
Week 3 John Joseph Merlin
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Dear all,
Please share your writing, thoughts and knowledge on the Gainsborough’s portrait of John Joseph Merlin.
I think the man is rich and I think he is in a rich family because he is wearing posh and expensive clothes.Did you know that John Joseph Merlin is holding one of his inventions.
John Joseph Merlin
John Joseph merlin was a famous English inventor!
He invented the roller skates and the skeleton clock also, the gouty chair/wheel chair and automatic swan also small weighing scale.
He invented roller skates in the 1760’s.
They both have dresses on.They both have been painted by the same artist. The both have black in there back ground. And they both have yellow on them.And they both have old fashion clothes.
Some of the back ground is different. And one of them have a guitar in there hand .and a picture in there room . and they have some earnings
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Dear Diary ,
I am Caliban and I’m feeling super jealous right now, also I feel very annoyed because I can tell that Miranda is in love ❤️ with this prince that has just arrived to the island, which I am not happy about.One of the reasons why I don’t like this man is because I hate to admit but he is VERY handsome! And as you know, I used to feel the same way for Miranda, the most charming , compationate lady I know, well the only lady I know, but still she is truly stunning.
The man’s name was Ferdinand, he had flowing, gold hair with bushy eyebrows and large ,hazel eyes staring. I am nervous to meet him because he will either be bossing me around like I’m his slave , but I’m not! Or he’ll be nice to me and not tell me off or shout at me and call me names (unlikely).
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RGshJraYkCA
I think the weighing scale is the best because it help people to cook foods
The weighing scales in the painting was for weighing money… people were paid in real gold so they carried a weighing scale to check they were receiving the right amount.
He’s an amazing inventor I can’t believe he invented two robots and invented a carousels I mean you doesn’t like carousels.
I can’t believe you invented rollerskates i love roller skates I’m getting one for my birthday this year.
I mean he has to learn how to ride roller skates first he crashed into something but he has got skill to ride roller skates while playing the violin
Do you want a faster way to walk?Well if you get these cool roller skates you don’t even have to walk!You just have to push of and you will just glide away!Come and get these roller skates now!
Did you now that He invented roller skates ⛸⛸
Dear Michal Walsh I am loving this photo
Get a look at this fantastic robot it moves it talks and it sings one one one one one one one come on half a quide get your robot it does your homework and it cooks food for you if you just tell the robot cheese biscuits that ant a food. You can take it anywhere like to the park to the musium the cinima . And it can play with you catch you can hold his hand then it walks with you. If you touch his head it can laugh and giggle at you and it can tikkle you. It can help you ride a scooter and it helps you ride roller skates it works only if you put the batteries in it can work and it can clean your living room in know time.
Body guard robot! be aware of the new body guard it will make your house sparkle.
If your not feeling well and you can’t do much his name is Rufus he’ll do it all for you.He
is a squeaking , cleaning robot but still so useful.Rufus has super speed powers.If your nearly late why bother walking just ride on Rufus .You can type it in The eyes and it will remember the name that you named it.He will give you a better life.
Why bother cleaning your room when the helpful bot can do it for you? It can do your home work for you. shhhh! Don’t tell your parents or your teachers or it will be confiscated.
Hi Abdulla,
I’m enjoying your imaginative inventions.
Roller Skates
Roller Fun!
Fun & Fast!
What can make you fitter than a pair a pair of easy, speedy roller skates? The new Roller Fun invention has come to town! It will make you slim and fit as possible! Fun and fast! Once you start skating, you will love this NEW extraordinary invention! Only £7.99! Be quick cause the sale ends on Friday 19th May! When you start skating, no one can stop you! This new product can make you fit in 1 whole week! It’s fun rolling around, so why not , brilliantly new Roller Fun? Don’t be scared, don’t be shy, just give it a try! Exciting, elegant and elating! Come and buy our new invention! The offer ends on Friday 19th May!
To Hassti,
I really like your work and how you used ” Once you start skating, you will love this NEW extraordinary invention! Only £7.99! Be quick cause the sale ends on Friday 19th May! ” Great work! 😉
Have you been bored of walking on shoes?well I have the solution introducing
speed skates it will make you go like a blazing fire .It will help you go any were
in no time.money back Guranted .no damegers and no injures desighend for
boys and girls.completlly clean order now
Have you ever been too busy or tired to clean your room? Well , I have what you need.
Are you blind, deaf or you can not walk? This new robot squeaky clean will do everything
perfect for you . It will clean your room and cook for you.Do you think your going to
be lonely? I have got the answer , it is a no .why waste your time
?
Good use of rhetorical questions to involve the reader Favour.
Have you ever just been too busy to clean your room?
It will make your house sparkle like a diamond.
Nothing else can clean like this robot.
You will be amazed at it’s incredible cleaning ability.
Are you tired cleaning your house, well i just got the thing you will need to have. You don’t have to clean your house. well now you can buy the fastest robot. Buy it now so now you can buy it.
Do you have anyone to keep you company? If you don’t introducing you to the new Robot Ren!!!Why have a person when you could have a robot? You can take him swimming, he won’t mind!
If your house is a mess and you can not be bothered to do it then you need flash bot the unstoppable cleaning machine.He can make anything look like you just turned it into diamond.So if you house is a mess then you need flash bot .
Hi Myles
You have a really good idea and by the way can i buy it in store.
HI
Here is an advert.
Are you bored of buying exercise equipment? Well I just got the thing! Blade Skates. For children and adults.You take them anywhere no more taking the oyster.It make you happy.
What do you feel like doing? Cleaning up your room, cooking the funky food or going out to play all day? Well, you better do the third one cause today I will show you the new,improved READY ROBOT! It was programmed by the best programmers in the whole world! Feeling sick? Well the new READY ROBOT will make you go WOW! So what are you waiting for?
Have you ever felt like your too fat ,well I have the solution meet our newest invention the ROLLERFITSKATES ! Their perfect for having fun and doing exercise at the same time nothing I trepit nothing can make you as our skates ! SO WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR
Hare you just too tired booing homework.so if you get it will do everthing for you.
Dear Diary ,
I am Caliban and I’m feeling super jealous right now, also I feel very annoyed because I can tell that Miranda is in love ❤️ with this prince that has just arrived to the island, which I am not happy about.One of the reasons why I don’t like this man is because I hate to admit but he is VERY handsome! And as you know, I used to feel the same way for Miranda, the most charming , compationate lady I know, well the only lady I know, but still she is truly stunning.
The man’s name was Ferdinand, he had flowing, gold hair with bushy eyebrows and large ,hazel eyes staring. I am nervous to meet him because he will either be bossing me around like I’m his slave , but I’m not! Or he’ll be nice to me and not tell me off or shout at me and call me names (unlikely).
want a new pair of shoes don’t buy the boring old pair wen you can buy JHON JOSEPH MERLIN’S new rollerskates only £5 get them now online or call 564-321-987 or you can just go to the shops. Limited edition new disco rollerskates changes colour while you’re skating order now! Only £10 call 246813579. Would you want to have fun?
wow I would really buy them
Get these rolar skates to have more FUN are you looking for a better way than walking?
These comfortable rollar scates with smooth light up wheels also with white glossy boots and pink sparkley laces wich Costes only eleven pounds. They slowly lead you into remarkable world if you practice you will get better and faster .”I think this product is a better and faster.
“I think this is a remarkable way instead of walking I give five stars⛸.”
WOW! I love how you used “These comfortable roller skates with smooth light up wheels also with white glossy boots and pink sparkly laces ” I LOVE THE ADDITION OF THE IMAGE.
Great feedback Suraya… you’re very clear what you enjoyed about the advert.
get these robots to have fun and play with.The robots are white, blue and tall .It has a big belly and a fat head . and its made of metal . he and she is kind and loving .he has dreams about people in school who are kind to him and her.but sometimes he and she gets a little crazy and loud.They both have a sausage body real fingers and robot legs. moves quickley when he wants to go shops but quite slow when they both are teird.he sways in the playground. he also talks like a monster the first person to buy him or her said “hes great they do what i say he she listens and does everything and washes my body in the bath. you must take care of this kind thoughtful robot jamie and shophie to you want this pare of robot sold sepraly.
REMARKABLE ROBOTS!
Do you need a mature matron and a brilliant butler?
Well worry no more ,we have got you covered,with two responsible robots.
On where’s a white top with a grey convenient dress on top .The second servent has grey stretchy trousers with a white shirt.The female is a nurse and can rapidly recover injuries and the male is a butler he can tidy a house in just five minutes,can unser the door and can cook delicious dishes and desserts.
A spectacular set of cards for the blind
Are your cards blind then buy a new pair of cards for the blind. Buy these cards for the blind .
It looks like a normal card but with bumps so you know what the card is . It is made out of thick paper and the colour white
It makes people that can not see can join into game of cards and obviously people that can see can join , that means no one is left out of game of cards .
One person that has tried this said ” This pack of cards are great for blind ” Lucas
Do you need a few helping hands?
Come on down !We got two fun,metal
robots that canread your mind’s orders
These two robots are obidient and will
not fight.
We have their heads in the shape of
normal human skulls covered by visors
for eyes. It’s hands are the shape of a claw in the
In the claw machine, Its whole torso is the shape and size of a tall, slender,thin window
It’s got metal covering its feet which are wheels
It carries anything you can’t such as a table and boxes and etc. It creates a
food for you when you’re hungry and it destroys every fear you have and will conquer it for you, because it wants to guard you.
Who doesn’t want another pair of hands to help them?
“I love these robots! They’re like a family!” You should buy these now!
Great opening question to hook the reader.
Light up rainbow roller skates!
You should get these rocking roller skates.Are you looking for a pair of roller skates that are soft to wear?these rocking roller skates are comfortable,with light up rainbow wheels they are made of leather .”This prouduct is so amazzing for people who can not walk and the people who can not walk like the disabled I love this prouduct I even rate it 50/50!
FUN COOL SKATES IN EVERY COLOUR!!!!!
Are you looking for an amazing pair of roller skates? Well we’ve got the perfect pair for you!!!
This product is a sweet, cool way to get around and it is a fast, speedy way to get to the park. They look like a sick pair of boots but they have a rubber coloured wheel. You can get a nice white pair or a cool icy blue pair because it is up to you. It helps you to get around. They carry you to different places . The wheels are super fast. One person bought this product and said They are really easy to go shopping in. And another person said They are really cool and you can show off to your fereinds if you want to!
YOU SHOULD COME AND GET SOME.
Merlin got style with inventions!!!
Try these set of cards for the blind!
Do you feel left out when you’re family are playing cards.Well try the new fashion cards with smooth,back and great for the blind people and easy to use.Undoubtedly, everyone who is blind will buy one of these spectacular set of cards.They will make everyone happy!
John Joseph is a genius,he also invented Braille witch are little bumps representing letters of the alphabet.Its amazing and as soon you know how to use it,you will surely win all your games!So you must buy them now for £10.
Rainbow Roller skates!!!
Are you looking for a pair of roller skates to love?? If so come on down and get a pair of rainbow skates. You’ll be the coolest kid in the class. They look amazing and also very comfy skates they are made out of fur and leather.
They come in any size so everyone can wear them.
The colour is RAINBOW!!! The shop name is Maddies shop of everythink.
What it does is you can ride them to school. Also you’ll be half way down the street in 2 minutes because there so fast.
Somebody already bott them and said they were amazing “In my opinion I think they are cool said Karis age:9 have fun!!!
REMARKABLE ROLLER-SKATES
Are you tired of walking? Come and buy these colourful roller skates with bright flashy colourful lights as the wheels turn. They are super fun and comfortable, anyone could use them. Here’s one of the customer reviews; “These are good for the family , FUN FOR EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
You can get them customised in any bright, vivid colour you like! When you skate super fast and powerfully, when the wheels turn round, bright lights turn on with colours such as red , green , pink, orange , AND yellow!!!!!!!
Some of the reviews for this product are:
“This is a perfect invention by John Joseph Merlin!”
“My family is enjoying this very much.”
“Absolutely remarkable!”
“Amazing!!!!!!”
“Family Fun For Everyone!”
The use of quotes and testimonies work really well in convincing us.
REMARKABLE ROBOTS! Come get these reliable robots to be in your service.Are you fed up of messing up the same old recipe well here’s your lucky day.Get these twin robots to help you in your everyday life. These amazing twin robots are made out of strong, silver metal and is almost impossible to break.There eyes change colour depending on their mood. One outstanding thing about them is that one runs on pollution and breathes out oxygen plus it is programmed to be a maid.The second one is a cooky maker and runs on electric.
If you are blind and you want to play a game of cards, now it won’t be very hard. Are you blind and wishing for a game of cards? It slowly, let’s people interact with the blind and play a game peacefully that they normally wouldn’t get to do and even if they did they don’t have a chance of winning well now they can. They are beautifully decorated cardboard cards that makes life so easier for all of us . You can buy them from the little blind shop of magic and games . Each packet sold separately quick, whilst stocks last . The cards are white and square with rounded edges and about 20cm long. One of our buyers have said “I think this product is remarkable it let me and my blind sister play a game together
The spectacular set of cards for the blind!
So you’ll never feel left out!
Are you sad and lonely when the rest of your family are playing cards?
This fabulous set of cards would let your blind family members play cards with you!With humps (the Brallie alphabet)on the cards will let your blind members feel happy!It’s probably the best cards in the world!
Weighing scales
Weighing scales are helpful to know what it weighting and help you . Time to time it is made with metal and string but it’s one of are best machine it works on its own and is a good weighing scale the colour is brown because of the wood.
Come get your helpful, brilliant robot from your local Argos Robert the robot is having a sale up to sunday the old price was £89.99 not no more your new price is £60.99 so quick get your Robert robot. Robert the robot is programmed to do do your house work and all the work you never wanted. Robert helps your problems now in massage training so you dont have to go to the shop and spend lots of money! Robert comes in all different sizes and colors. Also cones in female and male robots. And you can dress Robert as a human. You can get big and small a Robert or Rosie the robot reviews this robot gas helped me with so much five star thank you Robert.
Come and get your these cool roller skates in every colour. Get these roller skates to fall over and have fun. These awesome roller skates made out of leather and plastic. But just a warning be care full when going down hills because you might fall over and injure yourself just joking but seriously you will fall for over. They look like a super expensive diamond ring. They will probably surprise you but then again they won’t because our roller skates are the best. These roller skates are so fast that you won’t even need to get a car or a train.
SO COME AND GET YOUR ROLLER SKATES HERE!!!!!!!!!!!
ROLL DOWN THE STREET WITH THESE REMARKABLE ROLLER SKATES!
Who wouldn’t buy these remarkable roller skates?
Are you fed up of walking around the boring streets?
Well come get your own pair today!
It will stop those boring steps that make your feet tired
and start having fun rolling.
This product can come in any colour you want, to fit anyone’s
personality and to still be comfortable. These wonderful roller
skates are made out of long lasting leather, with light up wheels
This product can take away all the dull, boring walking in your
life and add in loads of fun skating. Just in case you don’t get it
the first time, this product comes with pads and protection.
“My son Josh can do stunts and really enjoys skating.” Says Josh
Jackely’s mother.
Are you looking for a better way to weigh objects
What weighing scales do is they tell you what is heavier than another.If you put a log for example on one scale and then place a plank of wood on the other scale if the log pulls down the log is heavier.
What the weighing scale looks like it is not to small.The base is grey and the handles are gold.
We’ve had a few comments about the weighing scales and really happy about it.
Mr Merlin was very famous as he invented lots and lots of different inventions!
He sounds like a very interesting man. What did he invent?
Can anyone answer Miss Redmond? What did Merlin invent?
Merlin invented Roller skate’s and more.
Can you remember what else he invented Mashfi?
He is half royal and half funfiar boss he controls all mations .Makes all the repairs but is super rich he has golden eggs and golden keys and all kinds of dimonds ,dimond toys and gold.Has to be 70 80 or morehe is tall but is half he is the intire wourld he is holding his golden gelery it is sparkilyer than 1oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo years he has a red face.heis hair is snow white.
I really thought he was Mozart:D
I can see why Dalia.
We predicted who John Joseph Merlin was
John Joseph Merlin was a scientist that made great stuff
same it was so hard we all thought he was George The IIII or a famous artist.
Wonderful weighing scales!
Get these to lose weight!
Do you like weighing yourself?Well if you do try these new weighing scales.These spectacular weighing scales comer with lovely,clear blue metal to stand on.We can get you an amazing set which will lighten your day!
The manifest john joseph merlin invented roller skates. They are big bright its for boys and girls. maybe if your lucky you can get any colour you want it is better than waking because it goes faster DO you think john joseph marlin had a spiel name for it? like rapid roller skates I think that because when john joseph went to parties he wore ordinary clothes and skate on his roller skates while playing a violin +
we are going to Kenwood house in june to see the skeleton clock and gouty chair it sounds boring.
That’s right. I hope you enjoy it. You’ll see Merlin’s actual skeleton clock.
Have you ever gone there
Yes, I have and I hope you enjoy it Christal.
same here
John Joseph Merlin made these awesome roller skates that can glide on ice! there are limited addition.
Do you need to go faster on your bike? Your lucky because John Joseph Merlin has made a new electric bike! It can go really fast. First you start pedalling normally. Then you start pedalling faster. After that you do not pedal at all and it goes really fast.
you can ride down the road speedily, with these roller skates. there’re only $ 10
Do you need to go faster on the road, outside even in your HOUSE! Well guess what this CHEAP and very fun product made by the AMAZING John Joseph Merlin is exactly what you need. This product is original and will make your life less miserable .This product is suitable for all ages above 5,it is also home safe and will leave no scratches on the floor, they come in all sizes and colours there are also limited addition for little girl like galaxy unicorns and Golden and silver flowers for boys ,red and orange fire and black back round with skulls come and buy it online or in stores now ! charges from £10.00 to £35.00
John Joseph Merlin presents….. ROBOTS!!!!!!!!!
Hey look at these two brand new Robots! You can pre-order them at Argos or Robert-dyes. They are designed to tidy up AND do your chores!!! But because its new its quite expensive for £35!! Later it will reduce to £20! If you buy this you will never get to tidy again,JUST RELAX!!!!
This new invention is made by . john Joseph merlin . It goes 1000,000,000 mph . It has been the world record for the speediest thing on earth . If your late to your job you could buy this . Its worth for 89 shillings.
Samir it is a really good piece of writing but what is the invention?
The cleverest man John Joseph Merlin is selling eye – catching robots!
It can do your stinky laundry , your kids will have so much fun and it
can help your kids with tricky homework.
It can do anything for you …
IT IS SUPER FAST…
Guess what its only £5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I made a robot. His name is 432. You can buy him for £40. It can do anything you want. It can eat pizza and it has weapons but it will not do damage. And you can take the weapons off. You can buy it multi-coloured but it can cost you a fortune. You can also buy little robots. One of the names are Glassy. You can buy them for $10. Little bots, you can name them yourself. I also made robot minions and robot bananas. You feed the robot minions the robot bananas and he will do anything you want and he can fly. He can put you on a building. Robot creepers are coming out soon.
‘I love skating with my roller skates’. ‘I want to get rainbow roller skates’. we’ve asked people what they think of roller skates and they are loving them. Roller skates can go really fast without you falling over! It comes in all sizes from a toddler to a adult. Buy roller skates now.
John Joseph merlin made roller skate’s so are you going to a party? They glide like a eagle doing criss cross buy John Joseph merlin’s roller skate’s so call 076 4654 6756 for £56.
ROLLERSKATES
This amazing new trend is rocking the streets! Come get yours for only 30 shillings!
made by the incredible, one and only JOHN JOSEPH MERLIN! This incredible four wheeled boot will make you NEVER walk again!! It also changes colour by your mood!
However these RARE GOLD rollerskates are sooo RARE, NO-ONE HAS FOND THEM YET!!!!for only 60 shillings!! COME GET THEM BEFORE THEY RUN OUT !!!!!
These beautiful roller skates are so good to use.
There more better than just walking lazily and not enjoying yourself.
These fantastic roller skates makes you go much faster than usual…
They are only £2 , so by them while you can . You could also get them any sort of
colours you like . Navy, black, pink, and even rainbow!!!!!!!!!
If you deliver them they will be £3. You will have them on all day!
These posh roller skates are so useful they come in all different colours red, black, blue ,purple and green. You can skate them on frozen ice! There even better than walking. John Joseph Merlin invented these skates he is a wonderful man it only £30 and maybe it mite be YOURS!!!!Go and fetch it now. when its Christmas it turns green and whe4n its Halloween it turns black..
This new invention is made by John Joseph merlin .It goes 1000,000,000 mph . It has been the world record for the speediest thing on earth. instead of going to your job and your late you could buy these shoes and it cost 8 shillings.
John Joseph Merlin skates are really cool because if you are tired of walking then you are in luck because these roller skates are yours. There are so beautiful.
Weighing scales cost £3 and they come in all sorts of different coulors
THE NEW ROLLERSKATES BY JOHN JOSEPH MERLIN!
John joseph has claimed that he has made a new inventions the………………………………….
ROLLERSKATES! They are like shoes but 10 * better.
These skates are like shoes and have 8/4 wheels and let you glide like an eagle across the pavement . They come in many different colours.
Order now for £23 and call 0123 4567 8911. If call unable come to skate park to get!
I would like to have these roller skates the sound really run
Natan you really work hard on trying to make people bye these and I think they would
Do you feel like your bored of walking or late for a bus? Well it all changes now thanks ‘John Joseph Merlin’. They run on wheels and can go really fast and there’s no walking needed their called ‘roller skates’. Roller skates aren’t just for being on time there also for…….having fun! You can skate your way to a fantastic party. They come in all sizes and are only £5. Buy roller skates now.
John Joseph Merlin’s roller skates.
This amazing thing has four small wheels attached to a coloured boot. This roller skate can also come in loads of different colours. If you buy this fun feature you can never walk miserably. Roller skates is slide side to side as you move. This is very attractive as kids ask to get it.
ON SALE BUY NOW!
This roler scate is better than walking . you get to choose what coulor you want and wheels . a rainbow rolerscate £10 and an ordinary one cost £6.Order now!!!!!!!!!
Are you tired of just walking miserably,then your in big time!You would simply appreciate this epic invention.The extraordinaire genius John Joseph Merlin invented this beautiful invention. We’ve tested the magnificent roller skates on a lady lady and she said she was truly GOBSMACKED!You would simply regret it if you didn’t by these attractive roller skates.It has four wheels and you can choose it in any color.ORDER IT NOW.
If you buy these roller skates and when you wear the roller skates you will go a lot more faster and this roller skates has four gigantic wheels and can only smash anything that is made out of wood and changes to any colour you touch with your hands . This is the speediest roller skates . These roller skates even make you fly higher then you.