Dear all,
Thank you for all your responses to the first poem.
This week we’re exploring Prince Ea’s “Dear Future Generations: Sorry”.
Please share your thoughts, writing and creative responses with us here.
Dear all,
Thank you for all your responses to the first poem.
This week we’re exploring Prince Ea’s “Dear Future Generations: Sorry”.
Please share your thoughts, writing and creative responses with us here.
Dear future people
Sorry, sorry we changed the worlds’ future
Sorry no one listened. Our globe deserved better
To us, the globe felt nothing
Forgive us
Help our special earth
Our sympathy was gone
Dear future,
Change us, the world is hot enough…
Sorry,sorry the world isn’t a dream to life
Sorry we listened to power
To get nothing
Forgive us world,
Your a special earth
Now our home is gone…
COP26
GLASGOW2021 Saven Y6
dear future, change us the world is hot enough! sorry sorry, the world isnt a dream sorry we never listend to nothing… please forgive us world
a special world..
COP26
GLASGOW2021
I like the references to Cop26 Amelia.
Dear future
Change us the world is hot enough sorry,sorry the world
Isnt a dream to life
Sorry we listened to power to get nothing
Forgive us world
Your a special earth
Now our home is yours…
Dear future
Change us the world is hot enough…
Sorry, sorry the world isn’t
a dream to life.
Sorry we listened to
power
To get nothing
forgive us world
Your’e a special
Now are home is gone
Thank you Ehsan.
Dear future, change us
the world is hot enough…
Sorry, sorry the world isn’t a dream to life.
Sorry we listened to power.
To get nothing.
forgive us world.
You’re a special earth.
But now our home is gone…
Thank you for sharing your poem with us TJ. Great opening lines.
Wow I really like your poem. It’s very inspiring.
Future Generations,
I speak for the rest of us
Sorry we left you with our mess of a planet
We we’re too caught up in our own doings
We listened to people who did nothing
We never realised how special the earth was
Slowly the world is decaying
But don’t get me wrong, it isn’t the end yet, we can always act before it actually does!
Future Generations,
I speak for the rest of us
Sorry we left you with our mess of a planet
We we’re too caught up
We listened to people who did nothing
We never realised how special the earth was
Slowly the world is decaying
Don’t get me wrong, we can always do something to stop it
Dear future,I think I speak for the rest of us when I say Sorry, Sorry we left you with a mess of a planet sorry that we caught up in our own doings sorry we made excuses forgive us we just didn’t realise how special the earth was like a marriage going wrong
we didn’t know until it was gone
Dear future,I think I speak for the rest of us when I say Sorry, Sorry we left you with a mess of a planet sorry that we caught up in our own doings sorry we made excuses forgive us we just didn’t realise how special the earth was like a marriage going wrong
we didn’t know until it was gone.
Dear future generation, I speak for us sorry we left you with our mess sorry that we were too caught up Sorry we listened to excuses forgive us, just like a marriage gone wrong, we didn’t know what we had until it was gone.
Dear future,
sorry, sorry sorry.
Who made excuses.
To do nothing.
How special earth was.
Until it was . . .
Great ending Sebastian.
We need to save are world there are people in bangleash who are living on the street because over 1000 people who live on the street because there houses get flooded
WE NEED TO SAVE THE WORLD
dea world im sorry hat i use to much plastic and paper that i throw away sorry
Sara Palin
How can you like the smell of fossil fuels
When the kids of beijin
Have been wearing mask’s before covid
No they aren’t doctors
No they aren’t surgeons
Its because of air pollution
Air pullotion is a big problem
Been around for a long time
But hasn’t been touched
Hasn’ been looked at
Nothings been done
This is powerful Vanessa. It seems you feel strongly about the climate?
Dear Future Generations,
We shouldn’t of made our universe
a mess,it’s cuasing to much stress and polution
sorry for not making our planet tidy,
Sorry,sorry the world isnt a dream instead its a nightmare,
what would make us less sad is having a life of brightness,but most of all im sorry about our mindset. …… cuase we had the nerve to call this distruction,”progress”.
Dear future us,
Sorry we left you with a mess of a planet,we were too caught up in our doing to do somthing.We listened to people who made excuses to do nothing.Forgive us we just didnt realize how special the earth was.
We didnt know what we had until it was gone.
Save the planet It matters at some point..
dear future genartion
we promise to keep our world safe
no chopping trees for attension and for money
we will keep our envierment safe enviroment
by teigan linton
I speak for all,
We left our planet in a mess,
But we just have one request,
Can we all work together and make some progress,
Pick up litter and pick up others,
Time is running out,
You know what to do,
You can join and help us today,
You probably know the Amazon desert,
It was the Amazon rainforest,
Do you know what a tree is?,
It’s a big brown thing with green chunky leaves,
There’s still time left,
Come on hurry,
If we don’t clean now,
It’ll wipe out the human race,
including YOU”!!
Thank you for sharing your poem Rukhsana. You use rhyme well to convey a sense of urgency.
this poem is amazing
I’m glad you enjoyed it Emiliano. What do you like about it?
Dear future us,
Sorry we left you with a mess of a planet,we were too caught up in our doing to do somthing.We listened to people who made excuses to do nothing.Forgive us we just didnt realize how special the earth was.
Save the planet It matters at some point..
Dear us
we should be so sorry for making a mess people are throwing plastic in the ocean
animals are dying of us so we need to stop please help us and do not cut down trees they are using trees just for money and money do not buy us happiness god and family dose so pleas help us
Dear everyone animals are dying because of our greed animals habitats are gone sorry we chopped down trees that produce oxygen we breath we listened to excuses to do nothing but instead we put the rule of gold before the golden rule we put bad gasses in the air. we trashed the sea we killed animals but we can change we have the power to stop this we can recycle and help the animals in this world I hope you understand.
i agree with this poem people should take care of the climate change and stop burning down trees.
Dear Future us,
Sorry we left you with this current planet. Sorry we were too ‘busy’ doing our own things.
Like playing video games and instead not caring for our planet. Sorry we listened to people who made up lies just so they didn’t need to help. Hope you forgive us. We didn’t realise how special our planet was. Our homes were. You probably know it as the Amazon Desert don’t you? Wel, it was once called the Amazon Rain Forest ane believe it or not, it had millions, maybe ven billions of trees! And i’m sorry to tell you that… we cut and burned them down.
So…
I’M SORRY
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BANGLADESH2021 Tiff Y6
A powerful piece. Thank you Tiff.
Dear us
we need to stop cutting down trees because is just for money and trust me is not god because money dose not buy us happiness god and are family because cutting down trees is bad because we are running out of oxygen so please stop also stop throwing
plastic in the ocean .
Dear everyone in the world, I am sorry super sorry we messed up this planet Sorry for listening to pupil who they made excuses To DO nothing I hope you forgive us please We just forgot how wonderful this world is We didn’t know how Important the world is I’m sorry
Our weather is very important.
I’m sorry for throwing litter everywhere.
I’m sorry for letting the pigs out .
I’m sorry for eating unhealthy bread sticks.
I’m sorry I messed up the city and not keeping the earth nice and healthy
I’m sorry!
I said that I’m super sorry about the things I have done.
im sor4ry sorry for a world made of rubiish and no plants a world with no trees no forests sorry
Take a look at Robert Blair’s wonderful black out poems in response to “Dear Future Generations: Sorry”
My blackout poem:
Dear Future,
Sorry, we were caught up in our own doings to do something.
Sorry we made excuses.
Forgive us.
We didn’t realise how special the earth was,
we didn’t know what we had until it was gone…..
It works very well Asma.
Thank you
Dear future,
I think I say sorry,
We left you with our own doings.
Sorry to the people who made nothing,
I hope you forgive us,
We didn’t realise how the earth was going on,
We didn’t know untill it was gone
Dear future grenorations i think for when i say sorry we left you our mess of a planet . sorry we listened to people who made exuses i hope u forgive us we didnt realise how special the earth was .
I am from cakes and cuddles .
I am from wind and the wood
I am from clouds and cumulous
I am sorry but my grandma wrote her poem on the wrong comment
I really like how the poem was wrote to people from the future whom will read it.
Dear future Generation
were sorry for letting earth burn,
were sorry for letting earth fade away,
we should have reused more to keep you alive.
But we were to busy doing stuff
we didn’t need to do.
Now I think this is coming from everyone sorry
sorry from letting
brutal machines destroy our planet
God made life
for it to stay alive
not for it to die.
Were making God cry
harder than rain
polluting earth,
trashing earth,
cutting trees
just for money.
God is disappointed,
heart broken
because us.
Our earth is as hot as lava
and we’re
doing
nothing
so
we
need
to
take
action
and start
planting trees because
they give us oxygen.
when someone dies it smells ,but when the dinorsowers die it don’t smell