Please share your thoughts, writing and responses to Elizabeth Jenning’s poem here.
5 thoughts on “Week 3: London by Elizabeth Jennings”
VISITOR
When I first came to London
I was disappointed but shocked
Disappointed about the names
But shocked about the view
London has many skyscrapers and many job signings
The future for electronics is already here
London has many people coming to tears
As i look left and right
i see hundreds of people in fancy suits
i also see lots of people in fast food places
getting barged by people moving at different paces
It was my first time in London,
I thought it was going to be a great experience,
When we saw the London eye I was so surprised,
I thought it was going to be really good,
And indeed it was,
When I checked other landmarks they were good,
So in general I found London to be very good as I hoped,.
My first thought of London,
It was different from Holland,
My first experience of London was good and bad.
I only came to this city with my mum and dad.
The London Eye,
London’s biggest spy,
The Shard, it reaches to the cloud,
London’s biggest building,
The society should be proud.
London, famous for their tea,
In Buckingham Palace,
Its even favoured by the Queen
This is the end of our poem
so please don’t show any sadness.
I thought it was going to be more rich,
But I was a lot of poverty in many places.
Most places like Buckingham palace it rich;
I thought there was gum on the walls.
VISITOR
When I first came to London
I was disappointed but shocked
Disappointed about the names
But shocked about the view
London has many skyscrapers and many job signings
The future for electronics is already here
London has many people coming to tears
As i look left and right
i see hundreds of people in fancy suits
i also see lots of people in fast food places
getting barged by people moving at different paces
My first experience of London
It was my first time in London,
I thought it was going to be a great experience,
When we saw the London eye I was so surprised,
I thought it was going to be really good,
And indeed it was,
When I checked other landmarks they were good,
So in general I found London to be very good as I hoped,.
First Thought Of London
My first thought of London,
It was different from Holland,
My first experience of London was good and bad.
I only came to this city with my mum and dad.
The London Eye,
London’s biggest spy,
The Shard, it reaches to the cloud,
London’s biggest building,
The society should be proud.
London, famous for their tea,
In Buckingham Palace,
Its even favoured by the Queen
This is the end of our poem
so please don’t show any sadness.
My first experience in London
I thought it was going to be more rich,
But I was a lot of poverty in many places.
Most places like Buckingham palace it rich;
I thought there was gum on the walls.