my city has a lot of faces
i see all different types of faces;
i see statue faces,silly faces,and friends faces
and four of them belong to big ben
my city has a lot of faces
I was born in a city that has a lot of faces
Other faces come from other places
Some can be nice ,some can be bad
Some can be truly sad
See our city has a lot of faces.
my city has a lot of faces
i see all different types of faces;
i see statue faces, silly faces and friend’s faces
and four of them belong to Big Ben
my city has a lot of faces
My city has a lot of faces
Some can be found in hundreds of places
I walk through the city and see lots of faces at the most common places
There are small crimes at there least voilent places
You see different faces every day
You don’t see friends or family members every time.
I see lots of childrends every day .
When I walk through the park I see kids playing with their toys ,mums with twins ,and a lot of strangers .
Neighbours ,friends,parents and childs .Wow our city
My city has a lot of faces
Not to mention all of the places
My city celebrates all different races
Look around you what do you see
My city is broken in places
Beaten up and forgotten
I love my city
And if you can take the rough with the smooth
Come visit London if you choose.
My City
my city has lots of faces
my city has got lots of abandoned places
my city has got lots of crime
my city
my city
my city has got lots of pitty
my city has got lots of lost kittyes
I can see my friends faces
I can see lots of flowers faces
I can see lots of different races
I can see paintings and statue
I walk through the city and see a lot of faces,
at the most common places.
I walk through violent crime,
they try to run but they have no time.
I see people around the community,
just being normal people .
See,my city has a lot of faces
My city has a lot of faces
Some can be found in different places
Sometimes the sun shines down and
gives people a chance at greatness
My city has a lot of faces.
My city is full of faces
A variety ,in the strictest of places
Some hidden in mazes
London is full of faces
All in different places
My city is full of faces
My city has lots of faces, some are gone in forgotten places, abandoned areas, some even left in coffins to die, because of the block – beef, violence and gangs
I was brought up to crime but I lived to fun
My city has abandoned places with no graces. Community helps me with my life and not to pick up that knife.
My city has a lot of faces
My city has a lot of gangs
Keep hitting and running
But some people keep their head down
Some our cunning
Wanted to leave thanks to violence
My city has a lot of faces
People are screaming words
Some are nice
Some are mean
But if you are not from London
Everything is not as it seems
My city has a lot of faces
Groups are misunderstood
But the police done the best they could
People are black
People are white
People always thinking they are right
My city has lot’s of faces
When I walk down the road all I see is
crime and faces.
we all live once, and get to
go to different places.
My city
has different races 300 languages
the world we live
in is a dangerous place.
We might see the outside looking
nice,but inside is bad. Our faces
have different ethnic backgrounds but
it doesn’t stop us.
My city
is rich and poor all we see is people
living on the floor.
What can we do?we need your help.
I grew up in a crime life but now we need to change.
my city has lots of faces
some can be found on the streets
helping poor people
the sun could be down but that doesn’t stop people helping each other
my city has lots of faces
my city
is full of happy people
people who are proud of who they are
before we hated each other now we are bonded bye friendships and love
look around you
my city
you will sometimes find gangs and violence
so put down that knife and stop crime
My City has a lot of faces rich and poor get along with each other . caring helping poor having fair people in our world.
My City has a lot of crime go bin that knife and get a life . you see people laying on the floor with no food for days .and crying for help you see no helps.
My city has a lot of faces
some are happy in wedding places
some are sad and gloomy on rainy day bases
most are amused and confused on upsetting occasions
I told you my city has a lot of faces
Our vibrant city
My city has a lot of faces some can be found in abandoned places.
I see terrified faces when people talk about horrific actions .
I see a lot of faces.
I see anxious faces
My city has a lot of faces
some can be found in run down towns
comfortably sleeping but still soaking wet
the sun could still be up but there still even if we pretend there not
My city has alot of faces
some can be found in forgotten places
some can be on the floor or doing a chore
you see some doing the law or braking into the floor
it can be done easy just listen carefuly
think of the emotions happly skipping along
my city has alot of faces
My city has alot of faces
Some can be suspicious and mysterious
Most are depressed and exhausted
People are weepy
People can be cheeky
People are racist on a daily bases
My city has a lot of faces
My City
My city as lots of faces
for that it has lots of places
people walking around with a lot of graces
there’s lots of places.
I grew up around lots of crime
lots at different times
in my estate there’s lots of slang
like block beef and violent gangs
at night they make a lot of chimes
I grew up around lots of crime.
A place that takes me away from hate and crime
is the same place that i feel safe and fine
school is a place to rise and shine
a place that takes me away from hate and crime.
My city has a lot of faces
some are happy some and some are sad
I see weird ones and some are mad
they can be cheeky
and they can be sneaky
my city has a lot of faces
My city has a lot of faces
some can be found when you tie your laces
four of them belong to Big Ben
some are even found when you see lots of men
my city has a lot of faces
My city has a lot of faces
Even though they don’t look
Like places, my city has
A race with a
Nice smooth bace
Some are nice and others
Are not and I see a sock
On a rock, my city has a lot of faces
Some are cheeky some are sneaky
My city has a lot of faces
lot of people have aces
in london people can be racist
but people have greatnesses.
And people can be violent
and making videos about other people
then there is police
it gets harder in the london streets.
Now on a daily basis
there is a lot of faces
sad and happy
but confused and crazy
or shocked or
anxious.
Now back to the olden days
people have a weeping face
cause the Great Fire of London
everybody was heartbroken
My city has alot of faces alot of them can be found in strange different places
some can be living on the streets with rats and mice
or playing with a dice
some can be anxious with a grunt on their face
or still be living like in the olden days
you might see a smile on someones face
or an unpleasant grin with anger and shock
giving you a fright of terror
you might see a famous person on the street
and want their signature
my city has a lot of faces
END
My city has a lot of faces some can be mysterious faces comfortably sound with a lot of graces. The sun can be down on his hungry town but in London he found him a shot of greatness. My city has a lot of faces.Some can tell you what a loss of faith is be-fore.
My city has a lot of faces
Some are happy and some are sad
I see weird ones and some are mad
They can be cheeky
And they can be sneaky
My city has a lot of faces
My city has a lot of faces
Some can be found when you tie your laces
Four of then belong to Big Ben
Some are even found when you see a lot of men
My city has a lot of faces
Our vibrant city:
My city has a lot of faces some can be found in abandoned places.
I see terrified faces when people talk about horrific actions .
I see a lot of faces.
I see anxious faces as i stare threw the bland windows of the hospital.
Were not perfect we waste time of our live.
some are confused faces when people look at Pablo Picasso’s paintings.
My city has a lot of faces.
Some are in places that have a lot of faces.
When i go threw the alley way i see mysterious faces.
My city has a lot of faces.
can see convinced faces when people talk about how were not going to be in the Eu any more.
I see the ones i love and hate but the ones that are gone will forever be in our hearts for as long as we shall live and will never leave.
And the best ones of all our the ones that our kind.
My city has a lot of amazing faces
Thank you for sharing your poem Lola and Amina. This is a promising first draft. Look at the poem again, is there anything you’d delete to make the poem more fluent?
My city has many faces some are mysterious some are familiar while i’m normal neither
happy . my city can be noisy or busy .My city has a lot of places in the city there there many places full of places full of places many can can be emotional some are normal.In this city whit a few or a lot of children. In my city there a lot of faces in places there many kinds of faces in my city. Every where i go i see many faces.
My city has a lot of faces
My city is different to yours
Gunshots heard left and right
The poor is dying
Culture is spreading like crime
Houses are getting destroyed
Road rage is like block-beef
Business gonna be booming
Community is gonna be hitting and running
My city has a lot of spaces
Sitting in my house away from the crime
Gangs growing and people are crying
I see smiling faces passed me and upset faces when people argue.
No one likes grumpy faces and angry faces.
Thank you for sharing Rahid and Ali.
i like it
i liked how it was very short and positive
my city has a lot of faces
i see all different types of faces;
i see statue faces,silly faces,and friends faces
and four of them belong to big ben
my city has a lot of faces
I was born in a city that has a lot of faces
Other faces come from other places
Some can be nice ,some can be bad
Some can be truly sad
See our city has a lot of faces.
Opening your poem with “I” changes the focus of the poem to the speaker. It works.
wow thats soo good
your poem is so nice!!!!!.
my city has a lot of faces
i see all different types of faces;
i see statue faces, silly faces and friend’s faces
and four of them belong to Big Ben
my city has a lot of faces
It is a nice poem
My city has a lot of faces
Some can be found in hundreds of places
I walk through the city and see lots of faces at the most common places
There are small crimes at there least voilent places
You see different faces every day
You don’t see friends or family members every time.
I see lots of childrends every day .
When I walk through the park I see kids playing with their toys ,mums with twins ,and a lot of strangers .
Neighbours ,friends,parents and childs .Wow our city
My city has a lot of faces
Not to mention all of the places
My city celebrates all different races
Look around you what do you see
My city is broken in places
Beaten up and forgotten
I love my city
And if you can take the rough with the smooth
Come visit London if you choose.
There are lot of faces in my town. some of them frown upside down. there are so many spaces . there are loads of places lots of faces in some places.
i like how you made it up
i love your coment
DIFFERENT
There are many people passing by
Walking down the place I know
Rushing and scurrying like they have to go
Some of them I don’t want to address
Colours really do not matter
Deep down we’re all the same
We don’t have anyone to blame for our race
All of us have the same case
Some of us have a different upbringing
Some grew up with a mum
Some with a dad
And some with no parents who grew up mad
Having one parent is enough for some
But both would be a blessing
Boys need their dads and girls need their mums –
Without them it would be no fun
Growing up differently doesn’t make us any better
Experiencing troubles are key in life
People will put you down
But we all must remember
EVERYONE really does matter
I like this. You can see the influence of “My City” but you’ve used this to make your own powerful poem. Very impressive.
GREAT work shianne and sumaiya I really, like it very creative.
Thx Grace
The last line is good
My city as a lot of faces
Different races
In different places
My city has a lot of faces
Young faces and old faces
furious faces and curious faces
Familiar faces and unfamiliar faces
My city has a lot of faces
Working faces and lurking faces
Innocent faces and fearful faces
These are the faces that i see
Wandering around in my city
Lovely last line. Thank you for sharing.
great poem
My City
my city has lots of faces
my city has got lots of abandoned places
my city has got lots of crime
my city
my city
my city has got lots of pitty
my city has got lots of lost kittyes
I can see my friends faces
I can see lots of flowers faces
I can see lots of different races
I can see paintings and statue
my city
my city
my city has lots of faces
I like your use of repetition ….don’t be too constrained by rhyme, use it when you see a reason why.
really good poem
wow
I walk through the city and see a lot of faces,
at the most common places.
I walk through violent crime,
they try to run but they have no time.
I see people around the community,
just being normal people .
See,my city has a lot of faces
good rhymes
good faces
really reflects society today
good faces
neighbouring faces
normal faces
in possible faces
bad faces
sad faces
great faces
some good somebad
men faces
nice faces
smallfaces
anegrey faces
happy faces
silly faces
smart faces
cool faces
crazy faces
confused faces
posh faces
old faces
young faces
ugly faces
pretty faces
worst faces
sleepyfaces
moring faces
yawn faces
happy brithday faces
suprised faces
toy faces
unhappy faces
evile faces
baddy faces
poem faces
boring faces
lion faces
The list works really well and gives us a quick snapshot of different faces. Thank you.
I like your poem Its rilly good
i really like your poem because you didn’t copy and did different faces
Hargrave park school
great poems
lots of creativity
good rhymes
Nevaeh and Feriel -My City
My city has a lot of faces
Some can be found in different places
Sometimes the sun shines down and
gives people a chance at greatness
My city has a lot of faces.
My city is full of faces
A variety ,in the strictest of places
Some hidden in mazes
London is full of faces
All in different places
My city is full of faces
We all have different faces
So don’t be racist
I like the use of rhyme
My city has lots of faces, some are gone in forgotten places, abandoned areas, some even left in coffins to die, because of the block – beef, violence and gangs
I was brought up to crime but I lived to fun
My city has abandoned places with no graces. Community helps me with my life and not to pick up that knife.
Great use of rhyme in your final line. Brings a conclusion to your poem.
my city has a lot of faces
I love my place
but its not that cool
I walk around the streets
Its just so net.
My city
My city
My city
some live on a floor some live beyond a door.some people
have food some people have non
My city has a lot of faces
My city has a lot of gangs
Keep hitting and running
But some people keep their head down
Some our cunning
Wanted to leave thanks to violence
My city has a lot of faces
People are screaming words
Some are nice
Some are mean
But if you are not from London
Everything is not as it seems
My city has a lot of faces
Groups are misunderstood
But the police done the best they could
People are black
People are white
People always thinking they are right
My city has alot of faces
Some see the bad
But I see the good
Sterotipical humans
Juding us
for being young
My city has alot of faces
Its like every day is the
5th of november
gunshots can be heard left
Right and centre
My city has alot of faces
Young youth covering up
Their ethnic backgrounds
With so called ballycarvores
My city
Is rich but everywhere
you go you see people sleeping on the floor
HI Kavarni. A powerful poem. I like your simile comparing fireworks and gunshots.
My city has lot’s of faces
When I walk down the road all I see is
crime and faces.
we all live once, and get to
go to different places.
My city
has different races 300 languages
the world we live
in is a dangerous place.
We might see the outside looking
nice,but inside is bad. Our faces
have different ethnic backgrounds but
it doesn’t stop us.
My city
is rich and poor all we see is people
living on the floor.
What can we do?we need your help.
I grew up in a crime life but now we need to change.
My city!
I like your final line Annaleah. I also like your use of a question to involve the reader and create a sense of desperation.
My city has a lot of faces
celebrations in a lot of places
Walking down on my street all the time
My city
rich and poor see all the time
from the different side
What I see are from different places
My city has a lot of faces
some times lie
but some times tell the truth
My city
some times rude
but they don’t know why
You see my city has a lot of faces
My city
my city has lots of faces
some can be found on the streets
helping poor people
the sun could be down but that doesn’t stop people helping each other
my city has lots of faces
my city
is full of happy people
people who are proud of who they are
before we hated each other now we are bonded bye friendships and love
look around you
my city
you will sometimes find gangs and violence
so put down that knife and stop crime
that don’t rhyme but it is true and nice
My City has a lot of faces rich and poor get along with each other . caring helping poor having fair people in our world.
My City has a lot of crime go bin that knife and get a life . you see people laying on the floor with no food for days .and crying for help you see no helps.
Thank you for sharing your poem Arta. Some powerful rhyme. Perhaps next time think about how you could layout the poem for effect.
My city has a lot of faces
some are happy in wedding places
some are sad and gloomy on rainy day bases
most are amused and confused on upsetting occasions
I told you my city has a lot of faces
Our vibrant city
My city has a lot of faces some can be found in abandoned places.
I see terrified faces when people talk about horrific actions .
I see a lot of faces.
I see anxious faces
My city has a lot of faces
some can be found in run down towns
comfortably sleeping but still soaking wet
the sun could still be up but there still even if we pretend there not
Hargave park school
My city has alot of faces
some can be found in forgotten places
some can be on the floor or doing a chore
you see some doing the law or braking into the floor
it can be done easy just listen carefuly
think of the emotions happly skipping along
my city has alot of faces
My city has alot of faces
Some can be suspicious and mysterious
Most are depressed and exhausted
People are weepy
People can be cheeky
People are racist on a daily bases
My city has a lot of faces
My City
My city as lots of faces
for that it has lots of places
people walking around with a lot of graces
there’s lots of places.
I grew up around lots of crime
lots at different times
in my estate there’s lots of slang
like block beef and violent gangs
at night they make a lot of chimes
I grew up around lots of crime.
A place that takes me away from hate and crime
is the same place that i feel safe and fine
school is a place to rise and shine
a place that takes me away from hate and crime.
Powerful poem Bilal. I like your use of contrast.
My city has a lot of faces
some are happy some and some are sad
I see weird ones and some are mad
they can be cheeky
and they can be sneaky
my city has a lot of faces
My city has a lot of faces
some can be found when you tie your laces
four of them belong to Big Ben
some are even found when you see lots of men
my city has a lot of faces
I like your poem it’s really cool
My city has a lot of faces
Even though they don’t look
Like places, my city has
A race with a
Nice smooth bace
Some are nice and others
Are not and I see a sock
On a rock, my city has a lot of faces
Some are cheeky some are sneaky
My city has a lot of faces
lot of people have aces
in london people can be racist
but people have greatnesses.
And people can be violent
and making videos about other people
then there is police
it gets harder in the london streets.
Now on a daily basis
there is a lot of faces
sad and happy
but confused and crazy
or shocked or
anxious.
Now back to the olden days
people have a weeping face
cause the Great Fire of London
everybody was heartbroken
My city has a lot of faces 🙂
My city has a lot of faces
of faces forgotten
some can be weepy
with a lot of graces
like hungry town
alto are sneaky
alto of laces
forgotten place big ben
look around you
this my city
just look
around you
My city has alot of faces alot of them can be found in strange different places
some can be living on the streets with rats and mice
or playing with a dice
some can be anxious with a grunt on their face
or still be living like in the olden days
you might see a smile on someones face
or an unpleasant grin with anger and shock
giving you a fright of terror
you might see a famous person on the street
and want their signature
my city has a lot of faces
END
I really like your poem
My city has a lot of faces some can be mysterious faces comfortably sound with a lot of graces. The sun can be down on his hungry town but in London he found him a shot of greatness. My city has a lot of faces.Some can tell you what a loss of faith is be-fore.
My city has a lot of faces
Some are happy and some are sad
I see weird ones and some are mad
They can be cheeky
And they can be sneaky
My city has a lot of faces
My city has a lot of faces
Some can be found when you tie your laces
Four of then belong to Big Ben
Some are even found when you see a lot of men
My city has a lot of faces
Our vibrant city:
My city has a lot of faces some can be found in abandoned places.
I see terrified faces when people talk about horrific actions .
I see a lot of faces.
I see anxious faces as i stare threw the bland windows of the hospital.
Were not perfect we waste time of our live.
some are confused faces when people look at Pablo Picasso’s paintings.
My city has a lot of faces.
Some are in places that have a lot of faces.
When i go threw the alley way i see mysterious faces.
My city has a lot of faces.
can see convinced faces when people talk about how were not going to be in the Eu any more.
I see the ones i love and hate but the ones that are gone will forever be in our hearts for as long as we shall live and will never leave.
And the best ones of all our the ones that our kind.
My city has a lot of amazing faces
Thank you for sharing your poem Lola and Amina. This is a promising first draft. Look at the poem again, is there anything you’d delete to make the poem more fluent?
My city has many faces some are mysterious some are familiar while i’m normal neither
happy . my city can be noisy or busy .My city has a lot of places in the city there there many places full of places full of places many can can be emotional some are normal.In this city whit a few or a lot of children. In my city there a lot of faces in places there many kinds of faces in my city. Every where i go i see many faces.
Thank you for sharing Rafiah. There are some promising lines here but try to use line breaks to structure your poem.
My city has a lot of faces
My city is different to yours
Gunshots heard left and right
The poor is dying
Culture is spreading like crime
Houses are getting destroyed
Road rage is like block-beef
Business gonna be booming
Community is gonna be hitting and running
My city has a lot of spaces
Sitting in my house away from the crime
Gangs growing and people are crying
MY CITY
My city has a lot of faces
My city is different to yours
Gunshots heard left and right
The poor is dying
Culture is spreading like crime
Houses are getting destroyed
Road rage is like block-beef
Business gonna be booming
Community is gonna be hitting and running
My city has a lot of faces
Sitting in my house away from the crime
Gangs growing and people are crying
i liked your poem but to much faces in it