Dear all,

Thank you for your responses to Langston Hughes. It seemed to be a poem that many of you enjoyed. Sila from Grafton explains her enjoyment in an interesting way:

i like this weeks poem it is really getting my brain working a lot

Some of the many highlights this week included:

Many of you were able to draw links between this poem and other poems or works you’ve studied. Nutaya from Rotherfield made this insightful observation linking “Mother to Son” with “In Flanders Fields”:

This poem is a inspirational poem for people with a Caribbean heritage. I think that this poem was created by a Jamaican woman who was treated badly and was telling her son what he might face in the future . This poem is like Flanders fields ,the author takes what was a big problem and creates a poem for future people to read

While Jack from Rotherfield linked the poem with a song:

I like this poem because it reminds me about black history and a song a change is gone a come by Sam Cook….

You can see the song below. How is it similar or different from Langston Hughes’ poem?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nOYuhLNwh3A

A number of Grafton pupils experimented with similes based on the concept “Life is like…”. Lee from Grafton created an enigmatic simile

life is like a piece of string you never know when it will end.

While Rodney from Grafton, like Hughes, focuses on the choices life provides:

Life is like chess there is always dilemma.

While Anoushka from Grafton, like many other students, takes an initial simile and starts to extend it:

I absolutely loved the new poem so I made some of my own little phrases based on poem.
life is like a maze that always has a way out so never be afraid of what lies ahead
Life is like a puzzle there is always a missing piece

Clay from Pakeman (?) extends his writing further and uses line breaks and a range of vocabulary to capture the variety of life:

Life is Hard

Life is like the sky
Blueberry rain,
Cyan colour,
Marshmallow clouds,
Bees flying,
Scrumptious picnics,
Sparkly snow,
Fire in the house,
Smoke coming from chimneys,
That’s bad for our world,
The world cries,
That’s why the rain comes,
Right now someone dies,
Right now someone is born,
My life is easy,
My life is hard,
Its in the middle,
I’m sorry for my friend,
I wonder when he comes back,
He’s the best,
Come back,
Make my life shine

Charmaine Medina from Pakeman also extends her simile throughout her poem and uses questions at the end to involve the reader:

The Book Of Life

Life is like a book
The beginning of your story
Where all your dreams come true
Each page is a new light
Imagination heaven
New myths created
Page by page
Emotion and adventures
New characters enter your life
Relationships being built
Additions being added
Fairy tale worlds being seen
Long journeys across seas
Seeing goblins and witches
Running along
Singing a curseful song
Thinking what could go wrong
Coming to the end
Say goodbye to my friends
What happens next?
Happily ever after?
Or death?

As you know Hughes’ poem is powerful in part because of his creation of a speaker for his poem; the mother. Ruby and Perdie from Gillespie also create a voice to speak their poem. Which word in the final line tells us the most about their speaker?

Life ain’t no fairytale
There ain’t always a happy ending
The bad guys aren’t always punished
They sometimes come out on top
Wishes aren’t always granted and…
Dreams don’t always come true.
But I’m still here, reading
Hanging on to every chapter
Even though life for me ain’t been no fairytale

As always we had some helpful feedback from one pupil to another. Look at how Selma from Gillespie encourages Mily but also explains clearly what she enjoys:

great poem mily you put lots of effort into it, also you put lots of thought to it i loved it my favorite part was when you wrote
life is like a flower its very delicate but never lasts forever.keep up the hard work mily i think this poem was fantastic.

Within the Your Poems section we saw some of you experimenting with your own themes and style. This is encouraging and good preparation for the competition which will start soon. Caitlin from Duncombe was inspired by Diwali and uses the contrast between dark and light brilliantly.