We hope you enjoyed the first poem by William Carlos Williams.
Please share your thoughts on the poem with us.
Has it changed your understanding of what poetry is?
You can see a video of the poem below.
We hope you enjoyed the first poem by William Carlos Williams.
Please share your thoughts on the poem with us.
Has it changed your understanding of what poetry is?
You can see a video of the poem below.
the poem had a persific meaning and I thought that it had a meaning showing that there are some jobs objects do but they are not realised in the real word for example the red wheelbarrow. The wheelbarrow has a job to carry things some where, to pick up some thing ,to take the weight, and to make your job easier. so then that object has done something for you.
this has changed my meaning of a poem I thought that poems had more verses and have more words in that verse. There is also syllables in the poem. The words are always the star 3 words and the next line 1word
That’s a very good way of thinking of it.
thanks for the reply
Arkan, thats a really way of thinking of poetry
its definetley changed how I see poetry and its really interesting to find out how you finnd it!
I think it has slightly changed my understanding of poetry. I really liked how it made me think about small things that we don’t really think about their jobs. It’s made me think more about what very small things can do for us.
that is my way of understanding after i read the weelbarow.
so much depends
upon
the black pen
no lid
beside
rubber
veery good and funny a pen without a lid.
so much depends
upon
a ruler that lies among the
trees with most numbers
scrubbed off of it
beside the
new orange pen
So much depends
upon
a small copper
tap
stained with lapping red
tongues
beside the kitchen
table
great love the poem rubs
my poem
so much depends
upon
the box of kebabs
glazing with sunlight
beside the box
of wings
i aimed it at kebabs and wings because i like to buy kebabs and wings from unlight and glazing with sunlight was supposed to mean the it from SUNLIGHT kebab shop.
it is a good poem arkan
so much depend
upon
you rusty shoes
coverd with mud
beside
the glittering carpet
makes perfect sence well done
So much depends
upon
A life almost
wasted
The inside is
hollow
Beside the steep
chapel
(it’s a coffin)
Ruby I really like your pome because I would of never ever think of anything like it
this is my poem
so much depends
upon
theblackboard with chalk
the teacher writing
on the blackboard
with chalk
so much depends upon
an old wooden clock
living in a hut
covered with old worms
beside the old holes
They paid a penny for the dance,
But what they saw was not his smile;
But the pain that seared inside his heart,
That could be seen within a mile.
Henry I really like your pen lid poem!
its really funny and you used syllables very very well!
keep it up!
So much depends.
Upon.
A little mammal.
Genaration.
After genaration.
A young born every day.
With hunger and the frightining world.
Biside the.
Old leaves and crumbled trunks.
Pain after pain.
And look were it ends.
WOW selma that is really good
A name for the poem could be:The helpful hand.